Anne Frank: Peer Review Characterization Paragraphs by Monica Alcaraz https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt Read and comment whether ideas flow logically and make sense, everything in the essay supports the topic sentence, descriptive language, and point out misspelled words, grammatical mistakes, punctuation errors, etc. en-us 2021-01-27 19:59:11 UTC 2021-02-26 01:12:26 UTC hello@padlet.com Example post and comment malcaraz3 https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1133622196 2021-01-27 20:03:41 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1133622196 Alan https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1138473833 In the autobiography ,”Diary of a Young girl ,” Anne’s personality lead to a small conflict between Mrs frank,Jan Düsseldorf,and Mrs van Dan.For example Anne is a very curious and knowledge hungry.After awhile when jan was in secret annex Anne was curious about a book her mom wouldn’t let her read.The part of the book she wanted to hear was about a riot.She thought Jan was a friendly person and wouldn’t tell but later she finds out he told her mother.This made Anne think of Jan as a recipient for Anne’s mom and making her opinion of him worse.Know she gets lectured from her mom and gets the same book thrown at her.After around 5 min Mrs van Dan also call her and giver her a lecture mostly likely about which books she can’t read and to listen to her mom.In conclusion curiosity is good for people and how we learn new things ,but at the same time you should be careful and controlling of how much curiosity and where it takes you.]]> 2021-01-28 20:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1138473833 https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1138478295 In the autobiography , “The Diary Of A Young Girl “ -by Anne Frank , Anne’s personality causes a conflict for the character. 
   For example , in her diary she says she is known as the most problematic child of three , her being like that causes her mom to dislike her a bit , her mother treats her way different than how she treats her sister , Margot , you could easily tell Margot is the favorite and Anne knows that , she feels as if she doesn’t fit in with her own family .
   Overall , Margot makes Anne very jealous and envious however that is not Margot’s fault but it is Anne’s , her personality is not liked by adults and it causes her to not feel understood. Nor loved by her family members except for her father. 
]]> 2021-01-28 20:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1138478295 Derick T. https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1138484969 In the book, “Diary of a Young Girl,” Anne’s personality leads to conflict between her and Mrs. Van Dann. For example, in the diary entry Monday, September 21, 1942, paragraph 229, the first sentence states, “Mrs. Van Dann is unbearable. I’m continually getting scolded for my incessant chatter when I’m upstairs.” Anne’s personality is that she is very optimistic,  we know this because they go into hiding more months and she is very optimistic through it. Mrs. Van Dann is described as selfish, and this causes tension between Anne and Mrs. Van Dann because Anne is trying her hardest to see the best in everything that is happening, and Mrs. Van Dann is not helping, instead, she is constantly nitpicking Anne. In conclusion, Anne’s personality causes tension between Mrs. Van Dann because Anne is trying to see the positives, while every time Anne and Mrs. Van Dann interact, it is nearly always negative.]]> 2021-01-28 20:22:20 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1138484969 Angelina https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1138583776 In the novel, Diary of a Young Girl, Anne’s personality causes a conflict towards the novel. For example, Anne in her novel, her personality is nice, but inside her feelings it is very observant and unknown. Anne compares herself on how her parents treat her and her sister Margot. She is very defensive with herself from others if they try to, “attack” her. One example is how Mrs. Vaan gets to her every time in every little detail Anne does. On the outside she tries to be the better version of her, but on the inside, in her diary, that’s the real Anne. From this, we can see that one's true self can be hidden inside themselves and that sometimes we can’t keep it inside, that we can have a big impact on others.]]> 2021-01-28 20:50:12 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1138583776 My Paragraph! :) (don’t judge pls..) https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1138637426 In the book,” Diary of a Young Girl”, Anne’s Personality is very right and hard-headed . She always judges people and is not afraid to speak her mind,   because of this,  Mrs. Van Daan is always getting angry at her and calling her spoiled.On top of this,  Anne constantly gets into arguments with her mother and her older sister, Margot. This is because she seems pretty annoyed or envious of Margot because she always seems to be the perfect angel for everyone. If Anne were nicer, thought better of others and acted better in the way she responds, the whole story and her writing would be way different compared to her written diary. She is also very pensive and spends her time thinking about the future and is not self- absorbed or haughty. She also thinks about how fortunate she is to be all nice and safe, while her friends may be off working in labor camps.]]> 2021-01-28 21:06:56 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1138637426 Jennifer Cabrera https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1140602157 In the book, “Diary of a Young Girl,” Anne’s personality creates a big conflict in the novel. For example, Anne is a very moody person causing her to be misinterpreted. Anne’s attitude causes her to be always judged by others. This sometimes angers her because she doesn’t want people to think bad about her. She always tries her best to not talk back and be nice to everyone. However, she can’t help it on some occasions. That is what most of the time  causes problems to arise between her mother and Mrs.Van Daan. All she wants is for people to comprehend her.In the end, being a moody person can mislead people and make them come up with assumptions about you, but one should always try not to conclude ideas about someone before seeing things through their point of view.

]]> 2021-01-29 13:53:12 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1140602157 https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1155998266 In the book “Diary of a Young Girl,” Annes’ personality impacts the attention and conflicts we read. For example, Annes’ mood and inadequacy brings the conflict with the relationship against her mom and sister. She feels like she doesn’t get as much attention as Margot does. In her perspective, her mother completely does not believe and love Anne. She feels that her dad is more supportive and connected to her. The mood she gives toward Ms. Van Daan and Annes’ mom, causes conflicts and arguments with them. However, since Otto Frank and Anne have the same personality, he is always by her side. Overall, Annes’ mood and inadequacy causes problems in the plot of the diary. 

]]> 2021-02-02 20:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1155998266 https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1228897197 Frank,Anne was a lively, curious lady of 13 at the start of the novel. She remains optimistic throughout the months they're out of sight and continuously makes the simplest of the case she is in. As her diary reveals, she is extremely self-examining and inventive and contains a vivid imagination.]]> 2021-02-22 21:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1228897197 Elizabeth Wong https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1243664747 In “The diary of the young girl”, Anne’s personality causes a major conflict. In the diary, Anne says all her thoughts and opinions of the people living in the annex. This includes to her being very honest. Therefore, we see her true personality and she doesn’t have the best attitude. For example, in the lines we are reading, Anne’s relationship with her mother just got worse. As for how Anne describes it, there’s no more love between them. This situation came upon them because Anne feels like she’s neglected and forgotten. She says that everyone thinks her sister, Margot, is perfect and Anne is just a mess. For that reason, she feels jealous of her sister for she is perfect. Due to that she personality is very not appreciated. Especially by Mrs. Van Dann because she always calls Anne out because she doesn’t like her attitude. Anne’s mother has agreed before with Mrs. Van Dann and Anne doesn’t like that. For that reason she feels like no one understands her and so acts immature and childish. In short, Anne’s personality makes her seem like a unlikeable person for others but for her, it’s because she feels forgotten and ignored. ]]> 2021-02-25 23:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1243664747 https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1243806202 In the book,”Diary of a Young Girl”, Anne’s personality makes a huge conflict in the novel.For instance, Anne is a moody person.Anne’s attitude can cause her to get judged by other people.This makes her angry most of the times, because she doesn’t want people to find her as a bad person.]]> 2021-02-26 01:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/malcaraz3/qf5e8v7fp9mxs4yt/wish/1243806202