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      <title>Rough Cut 3 Feedback by Jade</title>
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      <pubDate>2017-01-30 21:58:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Positive Feedback</title>
         <author>ab94076</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>- Great close ups.<br>- Good attention to detail.<br>- Good angles.<br>- Great use of camera angles.<br>- The credits work well with the images.<br>- Very good sequence overall</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-30 22:00:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ways to Improve</title>
         <author>ab94076</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>- Camera shaky here &amp; there.<br>- Loss of tension towards end of film.<br>- Could use more lighting/colour editing.<br>- Quite long for a title sequence.<br>- Placement of titles need to be fixed.<br>- Jump in shot of letter.<br>- Make cuts quicker.<br>- Add more cross cuts.<br>- Add sound to first ident to make a bigger impact.<br>- Layer in more sounds and drones to help build tension.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-01-30 22:01:32 UTC</pubDate>
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