Averie Brooks Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Averie Brooks https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC 2023-02-23 06:13:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304080 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304080 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304081 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304081 30 Basic Human Rights 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304082 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304082 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304083 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304083 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304084 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304084 Rough Draft 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304085 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304085 Final Draft 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304086 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304086 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304087 My story is in 3rd person point of view. No, my narrator is not in the story. He is telling the story. ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304087 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304088 My story takes place in 2121. Its in Huston Texas. There is the higher class who lives in the mansions then there is the poor people who live in the apartments with three familys in the 4 room apartment. And if the kids want to go to shool they have to sign up on the phones, if you want to buy something to eat you have to order on the phones, if you want to do anything in life it is on the electronics. But everything requires internet. The poor people cant even watch the wather forcast because they dont have internet to do anything. In order to eat they go to the rich peples houses and goi through there garbage can to get a meal. ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304088 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304089 My main charecter is Briseis AKA Bre she is poor and she needs to go to work she is tired of living like this everynight she makes a promise to herself that she is going to make it out of this lifestyle  she knows that someday somehow she will do be in one of those mansions. 
 Alexis is the minor major character she is a rich kid that gets what ever she wants and she sees Bre at the corner and she wants to help her she tells the driver to pull the lambo over she gets out and tells bre to come by her house later to help her out. Alexis is a nice person who wants to help the less fortunate. ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304089 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304091 Bre needs to find wifi to fill out a job application to get rich but she cant because she does not have wifi. ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304091 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304093 Bre and Alexis makes a plan to have Bre sneek into her bedroom window and take her phone and fill out the applicatioin then go get the job and become rich and do what Alexis did for her to the rest of the poor people. ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304093 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304094 Bre becomes rich and is able to make others become rich.]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304094 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304096 The most exiting poart of my story is whem Alexis has Bre come throught her window at night. And when Bre becomes rich anmd is helping everyone else that is poor become rich so nobody is poor anyomore. ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304096 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304097 That just because you are living in a unjust society doesnt mean that you have to commit to living like that for the rest of your life. There is always a way to fix it . Also always help someone when you have a chance]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304097 Due Dates 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304098 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304098 Prompt 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304099 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304099 Theo's Song 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304100 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304100 Rubric 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304101 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304101 Point of View 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304102 The point of view in "Theo's Song" is 3rd person because the narrator is not involved in the story and there is no "I" or "me". ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304102 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304106 The government made it an unjust society because they wouldn't be able to chose the job they want instead the government asked you want you wanted to do then they had you doing the oposite of what you want.]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304106 Characters 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304107 Theo: Main Neema: main The workers: semi main the govenment:Semi main]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304107 Conflict 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304108 That pepole couldnt choose what they wanted to do. The government controlled everything. ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304108 Plot: Sequential 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304109 Event #:Theo was talking to the government about his passions.
Event #:They assigned his to a blacksmith.
Event #:He stats singing during work 
Event #:He gets called into the office
Event #(Climax):Theo's vocals get messed up by the govenment.
Event #:Neema starts singing for him.
Event #:All the workers start joning Neema in singing.
Event #(Resolution): The government stops controlling everyone and everyone is allowed to pick there own jobs. ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304109 Theme 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304111 Unjust society because it is talking about the unfair situations]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304111 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201000374 https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304112 It is unfair to live in a unjust society. Not everything is easy when you live in a unjust society.  Sometimes people overcome the unjust society and it stops but other times people are still out there starving, getting punished for no reason, getting told what they have to do even if they hate that thing. People that live in an unjust society do not like it and it is usaly because of the government. ]]> 2017-12-14 19:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/201000374/qa9s4aryd0oj/wish/216304112