https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll Made with good vibes en-us 2021-04-14 09:51:44 UTC 2025-11-28 20:03:38 UTC hello@padlet.com wjin9 https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1428426295 Looking back to the feedbacks I received last term, I found that I need to put more efforts on these areas:
1. Listen to the tutor more carefully
2.Think more carefully and make the article structure clearer
3.Do more readings and develop my critical skills
4.Keep learning how to make a good synthesis
5.Develop the academic writing skills by using some helpful resources]]> 2021-04-17 16:18:15 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1428426295 https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1429541791 According to the teacher’s feedback, I should strengthen the following points:
 1. Combine the content of the teacher's class more, record the content of the teacher's class, and sublimate it.
 2. Read more materials. Read more materials to learn more about the content of the class
 3. Think and ask questions: Think more on your own, ask meaningful questions, and try to understand something more deeply through the questions.]]> 2021-04-18 09:23:38 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1429541791 https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1432583634 Basiclly i need wo work on below aspects:

1.Read more related materials to enrich my argument
2.The language expression is more rigorous, and the words are more accurate
3.Pay more attention to structural issues]]> 2021-04-19 11:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1432583634 https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1432584089 To improve my work better this semester, I would 1) read more global news to backup the relevant knowledge; 2) analyze and think deeplier and more critical to the case; 3) keep taking notes on class]]> 2021-04-19 11:52:25 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1432584089 fzhang36 https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1432627066 After reading the feedback, I need to work on these areas:
1. more regular wording and avoiding repetition. In this part of the introduction, plan the structure and what to write about, answer the questions clearly and speak about the argument.
2. Find more appropriate examples and think more when explaining my arguments.
3. understand the various concepts to avoid confusion.]]> 2021-04-19 12:07:15 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1432627066 syik1 https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1432707931 After reading my feedback, I need to make improvements on these aspects: 
1. Read more academic articles
2. Record lecture notes in order to get a better understanding of the lesson and ask questions if I don't understand in class
3. review my notes]]> 2021-04-19 12:31:19 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1432707931 zyang104 https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1433543435 To summerize, what I learned from feedback is :
1) pay more time to familiar with the structure of  disscussive essay and figure out what would be a better  assay,
2) search deeper information about every week' topic and  make effort to understand the logic of how things happen, and even come up with new examples by myself and explain what, how, and why
3) Listen to the logic of what  Eyal says in class and write it down. Whenever I have questions, just ask.
4) Review some key terms and examples.

]]> 2021-04-19 15:10:27 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1433543435 zqiu5 https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1433727332 From the teacher's feedback, I learned: 
1. Write a clear argument in the introduction and write your own position clearly.
2.The structure of the article should be logical, from the argument to the evidence and explanation to complete your point of view step by step.
3.Take notes on your weekly topic, search for relevant materials, and learn about all aspects of the topic.
4. Don't miss the key information in the paper. The key information should be defined in a relevant way]]> 2021-04-19 15:43:29 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1433727332 Ray233 https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1437105085 Through the teacher's feedback, I know the following points that need to be improved:
1. When organizing my structure, put the points at the very beginning should express them more explicitly.
2. Separate paragraphs may be required only when different ideas are expressed.
3. The logic of answering questions needs to be strengthened.
4. No need breaking up the paragraph.

]]> 2021-04-20 09:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1437105085 https://padlet.com/usictech/q9o18mooe6ux2lll/wish/1438219704 According to the feedback, I need to make improvements on following aspects:
1. I need to add a thesis statement or criticism in order to help the reader read better.
2. State my argument at the beginning of my essay and set a clear goal. Arguments link different parts of a text together and give them purpose.
3. I need to explain ideas more effectively in my own words.
4. I should make better use of evidence or examples, combine them with the theme in the article, and describe, analyze and criticize it.
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