CLASS A - Elsa Apriyani by elsa apriyani

elsaapriyani7 — 2020-03-24 13:05:22 UTC

Intro: Many people who want to capture the moment together. certainly, it is be something important for some people. With polaroid camera technology, we can make photos as memories that will not be forgotten because photos makes us be reminded of certain moments.

note: the intro is not very clear. what do you want to talk about? polaroid camera? then mention "polaroid camera" in the introduction.

Body 1: Along with current technological developments where we are facilitated by a camera that is fast in printing photos. This polaroid camera feature makes it unnecessary to go to photo printing shops that take more time and also when the shop closes so have to wait a few days just to print photos. Certainly, with this camera becomes more efficient when they want to capture the moment together. It is different from ancient times by using Kodak cameras which require a long process to print and the photos must be printed so that it requires additional costs.

Body 2: With polaroid cameras the results of the photo would be more interesting. The design of film paper is also a variety of few colours and motifs that you are able to request. but it can also be a decoration that is suitable for indoors. It is different from Kodak camera design, the results of which are only dark colors and the brightness also depends on the film roll.

note: I scratch the first two sentences in body 2 because they are not necessary. just go straight to stating the second advantage of polaroid camera. you basically have mentioned about creating memories in the intro. so theres no need to re-state again, unless it is a conclusion.

Conclusion: The developments of technology from time to time really make it easy for us to documentary moments together. especially with polaroid cameras that are easy to use. the photos are becoming the current trend for young people which can also be update on various social media.

elsaapriyani7 — 2020-03-28 12:35:36 UTC

revisi essay

elsaapriyani7 — 2020-04-12 07:35:35 UTC

Name : Elsa Apriyani (0403519011)
Pessimism my study
Midterm Exam

When I want to continue my university, I choose English Language and Culture study programs recommended by parents. Initially I was hesitant in choosing study programs because I felt lacking with the ability that I have. After semester one there are things that make me optimistic. Subjects that I especially like, literature when analyzing a story. I am happy when reading a story then can conclude a synopsis of the story. Make me confident in taking study programs. However, I feel I have a weakness in listening and speaking lessons. I find it hard to listen to conversations quickly and also when talking to people. Makes me pessimistic about that.

Every listening lesson I find it difficult to understand. When I entered the class taught the ability to listen and speaking. I was asked an assignment from the lecturer to fill in sentence the blank by listening to the conversation through the speaker. However, I felt I did not understand what was discussed in the conversation and left behind every word I would write. My other experience during the semester exams, I have to listen to it many times in order to understand the conversation. In my opinion conversations when on speakers are different because the sentences are confused compared to when people talk directly.

In addition, I also feel that I don't have the ability to talk to many people. I was afraid of being wrong with what I wanted to talk about. When I speak english with my cousins, I have a mistake when i speak for one word, so that makes me feel down. I became pesimist when i enter English study program but my speaking skill is still wrong. However, I'm sure everyone has been wrong too, even though feelings of fear and nervousness are still in my mind. I began to learn from the mistakes I had experienced.

However, apart from deficiencies in my skills. It allows me to study harder so I don't get embarrassed and become someone can be proud of. I know everyone has different abilities and limitations. But, we can continue to try and always learn. We must know that no attempt betrays the results.

elsaapriyani7 — 2020-06-18 16:41:32 UTC

Name: Elsa Apriyani
Class: IG 19 A
British Emigration to Selected Destinations 2004-2007.
Intro:
The graph shows British citizens who migrated to various countries in 2004-2007. The number displayed is also extraordinary, reaching between 50.000 thousand immigrants and the smallest number of about 20.000 immigrants. From these data each country has a diverse number of immigrants each year.

Paragraph 1:
In 2004-2005 the migration rate was not too high. For example in the USA and New Zealand countries only reached around 20.000 thousand people. In 2004 the two countries together reached 25.000 immigrants. Then in 2005 the two countries experienced a decline, New Zealand to 23.000 immigrants. While the United States reached a number below 20.000 immigrants. Spain also has the same amount of immigration, which is 30.000 more immigrants. However, France also initially numbered 20.000 immigrants in 2004 and an increase in 2005 of more than 30.000 immigrants.

Paragraph 2:
Meanwhile in 2006-2007 Australia was the country with the highest number of emigrants, which reached more than 50.000 thousand people. Australia shows the highest number compared to other countries. While Spain is no less high compared to other countries which numbered 30.000 more immigrants in 2006. Although the number of emigrants in New Zealand is also not too far the figure was around 20.000 immigrants in 2006 to 2007. While the USA and France initially reached more than 20.000 immigrants. However, it decreased in 2007 to less than 20.000 immigrants.