B7 Bannaker Analysis by Rachel Bradshaw https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg Put the analysis in the appropriate column! en-us 2020-09-15 15:47:58 UTC 2020-09-15 17:23:32 UTC hello@padlet.com Soapstone Garry and Ike https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748787921 S- Benjamin Banneker
O- After Thomas Jefferson wrote the Declaration of Independence
A- Thomas Jefferson
P- Express his frustration about slavery
Tone- Frustrated, angry ]]> 2020-09-15 17:06:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748787921 S-Benjamin Banneker https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748792119 O- 1791 a letter trying to end slavery
A-Thomas Jefferson
P-Help abolish slavery
S-immorality of slavery
Tone-persuasive passive aggressive ]]> 2020-09-15 17:07:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748792119 S- Benjamin Banneker https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748794742 O- 1791
A: Thomas Jefferson
P: Argue against slavary
S: Slavary
Tone: Concerned]]> 2020-09-15 17:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748794742 S- Benjamin Banneker https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748797970 O- writing a letter to Thomas Jefferson in 1791
A- Speaking to Thomas Jefferson in a letter
P- The purpose is to express the unfairness and hyprocricy of slavery.
S- The subject is Slavery and why itś wrong
Tone- Logical but relaying emotion and frustration

]]> 2020-09-15 17:08:14 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748797970 Examples Garry and Ike https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748801475 Pathos- (Lines 11-14)- ¨...You cannot but acknowledge that the present freedom and tranquility which you enjoy you have mercifully received and that it is the peculiar blessing of heaven.¨
Ethos- (Lines 21-25)- ¨We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, and that they are endowed by their creator with certain unalienable rights...¨
Logos- (Lines 35-41)- ¨...that you should at the same time counteract his mercies in detaining by fraud and violence so numerous a part of my brethren under groaning captivity and cruel oppression...¨ ]]> 2020-09-15 17:08:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748801475 Ryan and Clay https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748802594 S-Benjamin Banneker

O-1791 Writing to Thomas Jefferson

A-Intended specifically for Thomas Jefferson but anyone who observes the document.

P-Awaken and Persuade Thomas Jefferson

S-Slavery should end and the hypocrisy of slavery with Tj's statement.

Tone-Polite, Calm, and intelligent.

]]> 2020-09-15 17:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748802594 Personification https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748805223 "...groaning captivity and cruel oppression"
Allusion:
"Put your souls in their souls stead"]]> 2020-09-15 17:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748805223 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748808760 S- Benjamin Banneker
O- 1791
A-Thomas Jefferson 
P-Argue against slavery
S- slavery
Tone- passive agressive]]> 2020-09-15 17:10:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748808760 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748809123 Logos: " We hold these truths to..."
Pathos: "...sir how pitiable is it that..."
Ethos: He directly quoted Jefferson]]> 2020-09-15 17:10:08 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748809123 Ethos: quoting job, and "proper ideas of the great valuation of liberty..." https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748810077 Pathos: First paragraph, calling on the experiences with oppression that Thomas Jefferson has experienced.
Logos: saying that the oppression experienced is just like the oppression faced by slaves, and since they needed to fix it, they also need to fix slavery.]]> 2020-09-15 17:10:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748810077 S: Benjamin Banneker https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748810856 O: letter in 1791
A: Thomas Jefferson
P: Help Jefferson see the hypocrisy in his writings
S: Slavery
Tone: Respectful, careful, persuasive]]> 2020-09-15 17:10:24 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748810856 Pathos: https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748813689 Talking about the horrors of slavery and how awful they are being treated, quoting the bible and talking about Job to bring up spiritual emotions.
Logos:  Quoting the Declaration, Jefferson himself, and saying that he is contradicting himself by saying that all men are created equal but not abiding by that statement.
Ethos: Saying he doesn't necessarily need to spell things out to Jefferson, but suggesting things instead and quoting Jefferson directly.

]]> 2020-09-15 17:10:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748813689 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748815327 S: Benjamin Banneker
O: 1791
A: Thomas Jefferson
P: To persuade Jefferson that slavery is wrong
S: Slavery, and how it goes against America's history.
Tone: Pleading, Aggressive

]]> 2020-09-15 17:11:06 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748815327 Hyperbole https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748818088 "... in  which every human aid appeared unavailable." 


]]> 2020-09-15 17:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748818088 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748818621 Speaker- Benjamin Banneker, Non-fiction
Occasion- Maryland. Baltimore County. Near Ellicotts Lower Mills, August 19th: 1791
Audience- Thomas Jefferson
Purpose- Written to convince Thomas to put himself in the slaves shoes and think about what he truly meant by “All men are created equal”
Subject- inequality, slavery, injustice, negative emotions
Tone- Serious, imploring, dismayed


]]> 2020-09-15 17:11:39 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748818621 soapstone https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748819970 s: benjamin banneker
o: 1791, constituional rights?]]> 2020-09-15 17:11:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748819970 Benjamin Banneker uses rhetorical strategies such as, allusion and personification to argue against slavery. https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748821105 2020-09-15 17:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748821105 S Benjamin Banneker https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748821165 O 1791 , place white house 
A Thomas Jefferson
P argue against slavery
S slavery
TONE argumentative]]> 2020-09-15 17:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748821165 s- banneker https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748822624 o- 1791, (slavery=touchy subject)
a- thomas jefferson
p- to show there still wasn't equality (equal rights)
s- non-fiction/ post slavery
tone- very passionate

]]> 2020-09-15 17:12:18 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748822624 Ethos- He quotes the constitution to relay that he is a trustworthy author https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748823088 Pathos- He shows that they have all been through a form of slavery before when they were enslaved to the british, so this appeals to theyre emotion and helps them to feel empathy for those still in slavery.

Logos- He uses logic to show how this is hypocritical and wron]]> 2020-09-15 17:12:22 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748823088 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748831856 2020-09-15 17:13:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748831856 Personification- Groaning Captivity. An object cant groan so this is used to show how terrible captivity is. https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748833796 2020-09-15 17:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748833796 Ethos- in the first paragraph it says that he was a slave once but now is a very educated man https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748834038 Pathos- when hes reminding Jefferson about when he was being oppressed by Britain to make him have a emotional connection to whats going on to the slaves 
Logos- when he quotes the Declaration of Independence. ]]> 2020-09-15 17:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748834038 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748834779 Pathos: ]]> 2020-09-15 17:14:16 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748834779 rhetorical devices https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748836618 synecdoche: "]]> 2020-09-15 17:14:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748836618 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748837659 Ethos
The background paragraph at the beginning. 
Pathos
first 5 lines of the letter
Logos
Quoting the bible and declaration of independence. ]]> 2020-09-15 17:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748837659 ethos- injustice of slavery, and public declarations/excitement https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748837859 pathos- horrors of slavery, and feelings toward mistreatment
Logos- ]]> 2020-09-15 17:14:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748837859 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748838538 Pathos: "violence so numerous a part of my brethren under groaning captivity and cruel oppression".]]> 2020-09-15 17:14:54 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748838538 synecdoche- "thus shall your hearts be enlarged with kindness and benevolence" https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748840729 2020-09-15 17:15:16 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748840729 Through his use of pathos, ethos, and personification, Benjamin Banneker conveys his position and feelings about the unfairness of slavery. https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748842134 2020-09-15 17:15:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748842134 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748842712 In Benjamin Banneker's letter to Thomas Jefferson, we see that he argues slavery by using Rhetorical devices such as, allusion, personification, and hyperbole. ]]> 2020-09-15 17:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748842712 leesor0001 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748842735 Pathos: Banneker references the "suffering" and "groaning captivity and cruel oppression" multiple times to try and draw emotion out of Jefferson, indicating Pathos.
Ethos: Banneker references multiple other sources of literature to not only appeal to Jefferson's Ego but also his religious appeal when he quotes Job.]]> 2020-09-15 17:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748842735 Pathos- When he states "put your souls in their souls stead." https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748844728 Ryan and Clay
Ethos-he establishes ethos whenever he shares his knowledge of books and history.
Logos- If Tj stated All men are created equal why is slavery still in existence?]]> 2020-09-15 17:15:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748844728 Anaphora https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748845538 the repetition of the word Sir at the beginning of the sentences is an example of anaphora. It shows the careful and respectful way that Banneker addressed him and how much her wanted to make sure Jefferson knows that he is powerful and respected.]]> 2020-09-15 17:16:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748845538 Assonance - "professedly detested" Repetition of the "es," and "ed," sounds https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748848167 2020-09-15 17:16:33 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748848167 ok https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748850482 ethos: "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal."

pathos: "my brethren under groaning captivity and cruel oppression, that you should at the same time be found guilty of that most criminal act which you professedly detested in others with respect to yourselves." 

logos: 

]]> 2020-09-15 17:16:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748850482 Pathos- lines 5-11 he is explaining how he was saved even when aid was unavailable https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748851327 2020-09-15 17:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748851327 personification https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748852730 line 36 "Groaning captivity" "Cruel oppression"]]> 2020-09-15 17:17:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748852730 synecdoche https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748862093 "tyranny of the British crown" 

]]> 2020-09-15 17:19:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748862093 allusion- https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748863480 "]]> 2020-09-15 17:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748863480 Ryan and Clay https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748866994 Allusion-When Benjamin quotes the Bible and there is a footnote about it]]> 2020-09-15 17:20:06 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748866994 allusion when he says "put your souls in their souls stead" https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748871571 2020-09-15 17:20:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748871571 Ryan and Clay https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748871824 Benjamin Banneker uses an allusion to the Bible to establish his credibility to support his argument against slavery.]]> 2020-09-15 17:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748871824 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748877254 Personification: in which even hope and fortitude wore the aspect of inability to the conflict.
Apposition: of that most criminal act which you "professedly detested" ]]> 2020-09-15 17:22:03 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748877254 https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748880795 Through his appeal of pathos and ethos, he conveys his stance on slavery. ]]> 2020-09-15 17:22:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rachelbradshaw/q6y5atk1ycu3xdlg/wish/748880795