https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7 You will make 5 posts today. Using your silent critique forms, make a post for each artwork you evaluated. Title those posts with the seat number of the artwork. In each post, write at least one strength, one weakness, and one suggestion. We will take some time to pass back out our forms to the artists. Take time to reflect on the feedback you were given. Make a new post. Use your name as the title. Briefly describe the feedback you received. en-us 2017-02-07 15:55:53 UTC 2025-12-05 00:07:07 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152773792 There are lots of details but the shape of the rounder handle is a little smushed. The scissor blades are drawn well but seem a little thick (check width of side plane). The final contour is not smooth or continuous. Make final line continuous. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152773792 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152774265 The drawing has great details and the image looks three dimensional. One blade is longer than the other and some parts of the scissors are not smooth. Maybe look at the scissors more when drawing, but overall the drawing is good!]]> 2017-02-09 14:13:14 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152774265 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152774923 10 
Great job on your details but don't rush your art next time]]> 2017-02-09 14:14:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152774923 00036874 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152774986 Made it look very gestured and could see the 3D but the line was a little straight where it should've been curved and the 3D could've been a little better for the small handle ]]> 2017-02-09 14:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152774986 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775106 Proportional for the most part. 3d form was attempted. The final contour was not smooth.]]> 2017-02-09 14:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775106 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775141 Drawing has all details. No 3D form. All one contour line]]> 2017-02-09 14:15:21 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775141 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775150 try practicing smoothing out the artwork]]> 2017-02-09 14:15:22 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775150 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775452 It looks good but i think your 3d could have been a little less. It doesn't look like contour though 


]]> 2017-02-09 14:16:10 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775452 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775467 Very neatly drawn and looks alot like the actual tool. But is drawn more widely and more rounder.

]]> 2017-02-09 14:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775467 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775490 The drawing was three-dimensional, but the lines of the scissors are not smooth. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775490 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775558 the drawing has good 3D form and the drawing has good details but your drawing needs more smooth lines


]]> 2017-02-09 14:16:29 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775558 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775709 3D Form is great, add a little more detail for a more smooth detail drawing ]]> 2017-02-09 14:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775709 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775789 the gesture was some sort out of place and the planes were off just a little.]]> 2017-02-09 14:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775789 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775793 great drawing, show 3D more but everything else is good.




]]> 2017-02-09 14:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775793 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775926 2017-02-09 14:17:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152775926 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152776097 There was many details and is very proportianal. 


]]> 2017-02-09 14:17:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152776097 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152776380 Not all details shown. 3D makes it look real. Not all one line]]> 2017-02-09 14:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152776380 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152776515 3D form was good, work on your contour lines and making them continuous.

]]> 2017-02-09 14:18:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152776515 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152776535 Good 3D and contour but looked rushed]]> 2017-02-09 14:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152776535 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152776592 Shape of handles are a little off. Rounder handle is a smidge long. Oval handle is too wide at top. Widest part is in the center of the oval. 3D planes are drawn well on round handle but the blades are too thick. Make plane slightly thinner. Final line is smooth but NOT continuous. Make final line continuous. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:19:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152776592 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152777146 Need to add 3d lines, 3d lines. Everything else is good.]]> 2017-02-09 14:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152777146 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152777212 I suggest that you make your drawling a little more 
proportional]]> 2017-02-09 14:20:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152777212 00036874 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152777522 You can easily tell the shape of the first. The 3D is good on the first but not the second and line was not continuous nor smooth. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:21:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152777522 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778005 Smooth. Continuous. Looks rushed

]]> 2017-02-09 14:22:31 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778005 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778028 good drawing but show more details, show 3D, make smoother lines.

]]> 2017-02-09 14:22:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778028 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778136 Good detail but not good contour]]> 2017-02-09 14:22:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778136 10032912 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778371 Need's to make the line straighter and more defining. Everything else is accurate.




]]> 2017-02-09 14:23:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778371 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778749 There are many details but some aren't quite right. The handle and and blade for one side don't quite match up. The scissors appear to be a little too skinny as well. The inside of the handle (in the hole) has great 3D effect, but the side plane of the scissors is too sketch to see or understand. The final line is continuous but should be drawn more smoothly. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:24:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778749 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778752 Everything looks great]]> 2017-02-09 14:24:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152778752 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779003 Great drawing but put more details and take your time next time]]> 2017-02-09 14:24:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779003 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779151 it looks rushed but it's smooth just try spending more time on it]]> 2017-02-09 14:25:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779151 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779252 Not a smooth continuous contour

]]> 2017-02-09 14:25:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779252 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779303 The drawing shows that you're gesture was a little off and that you fixed it. Great details, but the scissor blades are just a little short and the contour is not smooth. Looks rushed and messy. Overall the drawing shows a three dimensional form. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:25:29 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779303 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779477 the contour drawing needs to have more smoother edges]]> 2017-02-09 14:25:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779477 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779553 The shapes of the handles were somewhat accurate, but the blades of the scissors were more curved and not straight. The handles had a 3D shape. There was only a gesture, so I couldn't critique the contour. Overall the drawing was good, but pay more attention to details. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779553 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779789 2017-02-09 14:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779789 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779886 Stray lines. Not smooth.

]]> 2017-02-09 14:26:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779886 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779896 Fix the drawing by taking your time, looks like you were rushing. LInes need to be more smoother.

]]> 2017-02-09 14:26:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779896 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779986 Drawing looks good but the their wasn't a continuous contour]]> 2017-02-09 14:27:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779986 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779996 Doesnt draw all details but is neatly drawn. Needs to focus on the object more.]]> 2017-02-09 14:27:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152779996 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152780007 everything looks great. Gesture look a little too much colored in.]]> 2017-02-09 14:27:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152780007 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152780709 The shape of the handles is a little off. The rounder handle should have more angles at its base and the oval handle is too wide at its base. 3D effect is strong in the hole of the round handle. 3D effect needs to be more consistent everywhere else. Including in the blades. The line is almost entirely continuous but should be connected ina few places. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152780709 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152780762 SLow down when working.

]]> 2017-02-09 14:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152780762 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152781058 Add more to your art it looks flat]]> 2017-02-09 14:29:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152781058 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152781064 the lines need to be more smoother  but the 3D form is good

]]> 2017-02-09 14:29:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152781064 00036874 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152781135 It is very accurately placed but there is no 3D, nor has 
continuous lines]]> 2017-02-09 14:29:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152781135 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152781438 Good drawing but work on yo continuous contour ]]> 2017-02-09 14:30:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152781438 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152781645 Great job needs more 3D to it]]> 2017-02-09 14:31:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152781645 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152782926 The drawing shows many details. The blades are curved, so next time make them straighter and the contour is not smooth. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:34:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152782926 llaney1 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152782972 People commented. People agreed that my lines were continuous but not smooth. They were a little sketch. People commented that the details were good, but my 3D planes seemed a little thick or off.]]> 2017-02-09 14:34:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152782972 10032912 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783034 Make lines more smooth. Besides that. Very nice artwork.]]> 2017-02-09 14:34:31 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783034 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783074 I need to make my drawlings a little  seriously and look at the shape andt take my time 

]]> 2017-02-09 14:34:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783074 00036874 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783232 summarizing from all the post (1) I could've made it a little less 3D and more continuous ]]> 2017-02-09 14:35:00 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783232 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783260 I need to take my time and make my lines more proportional]]> 2017-02-09 14:35:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783260 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783622 Needs to focus on scissor's details more. Try to make the drawing proportional to the scissors.]]> 2017-02-09 14:35:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783622 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783658 My artwork needs to be smoother.]]> 2017-02-09 14:36:03 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783658 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783724 I need to take my time and make my lines more smoother.]]> 2017-02-09 14:36:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783724 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783865 2017-02-09 14:36:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783865 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783906 my drawing needs more details

]]> 2017-02-09 14:36:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783906 10032912 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783915 I need to take my time drawing and slow down .

]]> 2017-02-09 14:36:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152783915 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152784082 take away the amount of lines you are using because it's making the artwork looking messy but other than that it's very detailed and looks great]]> 2017-02-09 14:37:17 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152784082 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152784216 need to make drawing smooth.]]> 2017-02-09 14:37:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152784216 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152784430 I need to take more time and slow down when I draw, but other than that everything else is fine]]> 2017-02-09 14:38:09 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152784430 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152784872 I need to work on my size porportions.]]> 2017-02-09 14:39:14 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152784872 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152785284 The drawing shows great details. The blade is cut off, but overall the drawing looks three dimensional. Next time just make your contour smooth]]> 2017-02-09 14:40:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152785284 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152785309 I need to be more neater with my gesture and contouring. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:40:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152785309 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152785463 The drawing looks like the actual tool. Has great 3D shape. The scissors were a little bit small, but overall nice drawing!]]> 2017-02-09 14:40:31 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152785463 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152785990 From what I see I need to make my lines smoother]]> 2017-02-09 14:41:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152785990 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152786314 the smoothness is great but make sure you remove your mistakes after finishing your artwork]]> 2017-02-09 14:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152786314 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152786765 I should actually try instead of sketching it]]> 2017-02-09 14:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152786765 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152786907 I can see you tried to do 3D..work on your neatness❄😏😁]]> 2017-02-09 14:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152786907 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152787296 Need to work on making my drawing look proportional. ]]> 2017-02-09 14:44:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/152787296 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/154310299 I can see the 3D in the design but yo need to add more space and more details ]]> 2017-02-16 14:21:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/154310299 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/154310739 Like the shade you put in your scissors it makes the art look very 3D other than that I would say add more scissors to the art]]> 2017-02-16 14:22:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/q6f5psydeub7/wish/154310739