Eng. 12H Personal Statement Plans for Revision by Gretchen Monroe https://padlet.com/gmonroe4/q5oie62fw8c0f8zf en-us 2025-09-10 20:52:14 UTC 2025-09-18 17:18:36 UTC hello@padlet.com Instructions gmonroe4 https://padlet.com/gmonroe4/q5oie62fw8c0f8zf/wish/3578820311

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    • ]]>     2025-09-10 20:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/gmonroe4/q5oie62fw8c0f8zf/wish/3578820311     Jessa Hueser https://padlet.com/gmonroe4/q5oie62fw8c0f8zf/wish/3592430691 I am going to revise sentences and make sure that I change sentence structure. I am going to make sure the grammar is correct and add bigger words. Make the reader feel the things and make sure very descriptive. Make sure that it is describing and not showing.

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