6E11 - Week 32 - Lesson 1 by Vinschool Metropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp en-us 2022-03-27 23:13:51 UTC 2025-12-04 12:54:24 UTC hello@padlet.com Instruction vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2115988618
  • Work individually
  • Go to Padlet
  • There are three passages without connectives.
  • Rewrite at least 1 passage by adding connectives to make it better. Write under the column
  • Timing: 7 minutes.
    • Challenging corner: Rewrite more than one passages!
    ]]>     2022-03-27 23:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2115988618     vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2115988619 We have arrived at the campsite. It's just started raining! I've camped a few times. I've never camped in the rain before. Mum and Dad have brought a lot of food. Mum has made some sandwiches. We're eating them inside the tent. I've already eaten about five. I'm so hungry! 

    We haven't been into the village yet. It's so wet. We'll go soon. Have you ever been to this area? It looks very pretty. I hope it's sunny tomorrow.  We've all packed hiking boots to walk in the hills.]]>     2022-03-27 23:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2115988619     vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2115988620 We were in France. We went on a trip to Mont-Saint-Michel, a medieval town on an island. We wanted to travel by car. We used my dad's phone to get directions. The route to the place was quite complicated at first. Our first view of the island was amazing. We drove the car over the bridge and parked. We caught a small bus to go up to the top of the Mount. We paid for a tour guide to take us round the beautiful church. There are a lot of steps in the church. My mum fell down some! She hurt her foot. We had to take a taxi back to the car park. Mum couldn't get on the bus. 

    Luckily, we made a reservation for dinner. Mum didn't have to walk far! Mum had to go to a doctor the next day. We had travel insurance. It didn't cost anything.]]>     2022-03-27 23:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2115988620     vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2115988621 Alma was born in 2005. She was young. She was good at music. Her parents say that she sang before she talked. She was two. She played the piano. She played the violin. Alma started to write her first opera. She was four years old. 

    In 2011, she composed a piano sonata. A famous friend of the family tweeted about Alma in 2012. Alma quickly became famous. Alma had an orchestra play her first symphony in 2015. The BBC made a TV programme about her in 2017. Alma is still a normal girl who loves to play and make up stories.]]>     2022-03-27 23:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2115988621     Minh Trí tri054905 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121416934 Alma was born in 2005. She was young. She was good at music and her parents say that she sang before she talked. She was two. She played the piano and She played the violin. Alma started to write her first opera when she was four years old.

    In 2011, she composed a piano sonata. A famous friend of the family tweeted about Alma in 2012. Alma quickly became famous. Alma had an orchestra play her first symphony in 2015 so the BBC made a TV programme about her in 2017. Alma is still a normal girl who loves to play and make up stories.]]>     2022-03-30 12:58:11 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121416934     Minh Trí tri054905 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121426040 We have arrived at the campsite. It's just started raining! I've camped a few times, but I've never camped in the rain before. Mum and Dad have brought a lot of food. Mum has made some sandwiches and we're eating them inside the tent. I've already eaten about five, because I'm so hungry!

    We haven't been into the village yet. It's so wet, so we'll go soon. Have you ever been to this area? It looks very pretty. I hope it's sunny tomorrow, so we've all packed hiking boots to walk in the hills.]]>     2022-03-30 13:02:56 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121426040     xuân bách: bach026688 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121463488 and,when,so]]> 2022-03-30 13:21:05 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121463488 xuân bách bach026688 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121464489 but,and, becaused,so

    ]]>     2022-03-30 13:21:35 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121464489     son son063473 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121478465 and,before,when,so]]> 2022-03-30 13:28:05 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121478465 son son063473 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121480624 but,and,because,so,before]]> 2022-03-30 13:29:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121480624 son son063473 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121483097 there none?]]> 2022-03-30 13:30:13 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121483097 Quynh Anh anh003883 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121491816 Alma was born in 2005 so she was young. She was good at music. Because, her parents say that she sang before she talked. When she was two, she played the piano and the violin. Alma started to write her first opera when she was four years old.

    Next, in 2011, she composed a piano sonata. A famous friend of the family tweeted about Alma in 2012. After that, Alma quickly became famous. Alma had an orchestra play her first symphony in 2015. Then, the BBC made a TV programme about her in 2017. But, Alma is still a normal girl who loves to play and make up stories.]]>     2022-03-30 13:34:17 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121491816     hít Hà ha000474 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121513340 Alma was born in 2005. She was young. She was good at music and her parents say that she sang before she talked. She was two. She played the piano and She played the violin. Alma started to write her first opera when She was four years old. 

    In 2011, she composed a piano sonata. A famous friend of the family tweeted about Alma in 2012. Alma quickly became famous. Alma had an orchestra play her first symphony in 2015 so The BBC made a TV programme about her in 2017 but Alma is still a normal girl who loves to play and make up stories.
    ]]>     2022-03-30 13:44:19 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121513340     Vuong Tung tung036927 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121513704 Alma was born in 2005. She was young. She was good at music. Her parents say that she sang before she talked . She played the piano and the violin when she was two and Alma started to write her first opera  when she was four years old.

    In 2011, she composed a piano sonata. A famous friend of the family tweeted about Alma in 2012. Alma quickly became famous. Alma had an orchestra play her first symphony in 2015, so the BBC made a TV programme about her in 2017 but Alma is still a normal girl who loves to play and make up stories.





    ]]>     2022-03-30 13:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121513704     Hong Quyen quyen000149 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121528190 We have arrived at the campsite. It's just started raining! I've camped a few times. I've never camped in the rain before. Mum and Dad have brought a lot of food. Mum has made some sandwiches. We're eating them inside the tent. I've already eaten about five because I'm so hungry!

    We haven't been into the village yet. It's so wet so we'll go soon. Have you ever been to this area? It looks very pretty and I hope it's sunny tomorrow.  We've all packed hiking boots to walk in the hills.
    (?)]]>     2022-03-30 13:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121528190     Quynh Anh anh003883 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121530804 We have arrived at the campsite, when It's just started raining! I've camped a few times. However, I've never camped in the rain before. Mum and Dad have brought a lot of food. Mum has made some sandwiches. We're eating them inside the tent. I've already eaten about five. Because I'm so hungry!

    We haven't been into the village yet. It's so wet. We'll go soon. Have you ever been to this area? It looks very pretty. So I hope it's sunny tomorrow and  we've all packed hiking boots to walk in the hills.]]>     2022-03-30 13:52:07 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121530804     ha000474 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121536935 We have arrived at the campsite. It's just started raining! I've camped a few times but I've never camped in the rain before. Mum and Dad have brought a lot of food. Mum has made some sandwiches and We're eating them inside the tent. Because;-; I've already eaten about five. I'm so hungry!

    We haven't been into the village yet, because:) It's so wet. We'll go soon. Have you ever been to this area? It looks very pretty. I hope it's sunny tomorrow, so  we've all packed hiking boots to walk in the hills.]]>     2022-03-30 13:54:53 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121536935     hít Hà ha000474 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121557731 We were in France. We went on a trip to Mont-Saint-Michel, a medieval town on an island. We wanted to travel by car, so we used my dad's phone to get directions. The route to the place was quite complicated at first but our first view of the island was amazing. We drove the car over the bridge and parked. We caught a small bus to go up to the top of the Mount. We paid for a tour guide to take us round the beautiful church. There are a lot of steps in the church. My mum fell down some, so she hurt her foot. We had to take a taxi back to the car park, but mum couldn't get on the bus.

    Luckily, we made a reservation for dinner so Mum didn't have to walk far! Mum had to go to a doctor the next day. Because(i think;-;) we had travel insurance, It didn't cost anything.]]>     2022-03-30 14:03:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121557731     Vuong Tung tung036927 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121562348 We were in France. We went on a trip to Mont-Saint-Michel, a medieval town on an island. We wanted to travel by car, so we used my dad's phone to get directions. The route to the place was quite complicated at first. Our first view of the island was amazing. Then we drove the car over the bridge and parked. Next, we caught a small bus to go up to the top of the Mount and we paid for a tour guide to take us round the beautiful church. There are a lot of steps in the church, so my mum fell down some! She hurt her foot. We had to take a taxi back to the car park. Mum couldn't get on the bus.
    Luckily, we made a reservation for dinner because mum didn't have to walk far! Mum had to go to a doctor the next day. We had travel insurance so it didn't cost anything.]]>     2022-03-30 14:05:53 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121562348     Vuong Tung tung036927 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121862009 We have arrived at the campsite. It's just started raining! I've camped a few times but I've never camped in the rain before. Mum and Dad have brought a lot of food. Mum has made some sandwiches. We're eating them inside the tent. I've already eaten about five because I'm so hungry!

    We haven't been into the village yet because It's so wet. We'll go soon. Have you ever been to this area? It looks very pretty. I hope it's sunny tomorrow so we've all packed hiking boots to walk in the hills.

    ]]>     2022-03-30 16:27:57 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2121862009     Quynh Anh anh003883 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2123528149 We were in France and we went on a trip to Mont-Saint-Michel, a medieval town on an island. We wanted to travel by car. So, we used my dad's phone to get directions. The route to the place was quite complicated at first. Our first view of the island was amazing. We drove the car over the bridge and parked. Next, we caught a small bus to go up to the top of the Mount. We paid for a tour guide to take us round the beautiful church. There are a lot of steps in the church. Then, my mum fell down some! She hurt her foot. We had to take a taxi back to the car park. Because mum couldn't get on the bus.

    Luckily, we made a reservation for dinner. Mum didn't have to walk far! Mum had to go to a doctor the next day. We had travel insurance. So, it didn't cost anything.]]>     2022-03-31 12:59:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/q56675ukfq3na7xp/wish/2123528149