https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e I can write a passage using POV! en-us 2017-11-30 15:45:53 UTC 2018-09-10 15:16:37 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Shakinghands.png https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989149 I was at the fair on Tuesday.  I went with my friends.
-Capitalize your proper nouns]]> 2017-11-30 18:02:57 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989149 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989152 I do not like pizza. ]]> 2017-11-30 18:02:58 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989152 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989195 I was very cold when I couldn't know if Jill was cheating on me.


]]> 2017-11-30 18:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989195 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989211 I was in class and I was so bored . All I wanted was to go out to recess . My friend arlready gave me a check so....OH NO!!!! My friend just gave me another check. I don't want to get another check so bye.
- capitalize I]]> 2017-11-30 18:03:05 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989211 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989230 You were cold, right?]]> 2017-11-30 18:03:07 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989230 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989231
'''My cars are missing'' I screamed and guess what I saw i saw my z little brother flush all my cars down the toilet.
-capitalize your I's and put dialouge in quotations.]]> 2017-11-30 18:03:07 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989231 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989254 James thought it was cold.]]> 2017-11-30 18:03:10 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989254 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989310 James thought it was cold!
Jill thought "I hope he doesn't know I am cheating on him with Jona!"

]]> 2017-11-30 18:03:15 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989310 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989533 I like dogs.]]> 2017-11-30 18:03:35 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989533 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989645 I ate my breakfast fast so I can get to school early.]]> 2017-11-30 18:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989645 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989695 I got a new dog today! I named her Ruby. She is ten months old.
-capitalize your proper nouns. edit

]]> 2017-11-30 18:03:51 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989695 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989731 I was looking for my pencil.]]> 2017-11-30 18:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989731 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989795 I love my family.
-edit your sentence. do not write in all caps]]> 2017-11-30 18:04:01 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989795 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989806 Your brother is annoying, you are also trash.

]]> 2017-11-30 18:04:02 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989806 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989939 I know that we are best friends.              We are going to the park.
we climed a tree in the woods

]]> 2017-11-30 18:04:16 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211989939 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990104 Ifell and hurt my knee and foot.
-edit your sentence]]> 2017-11-30 18:04:34 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990104 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990190 I went to the mound.]]> 2017-11-30 18:04:45 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990190 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990269 It's just me myself and I solo ride until I die.
-edit your sentence, capitalize and punctuation.]]> 2017-11-30 18:04:52 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990269 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990357 It's just me myself and I solo ride until I die.]]> 2017-11-30 18:05:04 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990357 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990449 Your're thinking what just happened
to her.
-edit and punctuation]]> 2017-11-30 18:05:16 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990449 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990479 You and your friend are so cool. Your friend is not cool.]]> 2017-11-30 18:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990479 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990524 You went to the mound.]]> 2017-11-30 18:05:23 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990524 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990627 You are wearing a red shirt. ]]> 2017-11-30 18:05:36 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990627 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990665 You are the best.]]> 2017-11-30 18:05:39 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990665 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990780 this is so onying.

-this is not 3rd person

]]> 2017-11-30 18:05:54 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990780 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990804 He went to the mound.]]> 2017-11-30 18:05:57 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990804 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990867 You must do you're work.]]> 2017-11-30 18:06:04 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990867 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990991 Jacky is very hot. Johnny thought that it was cold
-this is not 3rd person]]> 2017-11-30 18:06:20 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211990991 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991099 2017-11-30 18:06:30 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991099 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991107 He went to the mound.His friends were relived.
-add another persons perspective]]> 2017-11-30 18:06:31 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991107 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991175 Chole was sad because she was scared of dogs.]]> 2017-11-30 18:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991175 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991263 You must stop reading this.
-youz is not a word]]> 2017-11-30 18:06:49 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991263 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991445 You are just a girl by the water.
- punctuation]]> 2017-11-30 18:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991445 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991458 I walk in the beach.
-punctuation]]> 2017-11-30 18:07:10 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991458 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991554 "Ethan is awesome cool and smart Josh thought to him self."
-punctuation, quotation marks]]> 2017-11-30 18:07:18 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991554 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991765  The boy is having dinner.]]> 2017-11-30 18:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991765 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991886 He is getting his clothes. John felt embaressed that he could not find anything to wear.]]> 2017-11-30 18:07:49 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211991886 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992016 You have to try coco puffs!]]> 2017-11-30 18:08:02 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992016 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992095 "Jose looks really cold.Reily thought." so Reily gave her coat to him". "Reily is really nice to me i don't know why.'
-complete sentences]]> 2017-11-30 18:08:11 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992095 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992137 you can go  home now or spend the night at my house to night.
Your my new best friend and i'm yours]]> 2017-11-30 18:08:15 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992137 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992154 You are thinking," how did I get here?"
"where am I?"
-capitalization, put thoughts either italics or in quotation marks

]]> 2017-11-30 18:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992154 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992159  They have cake Jeff has milk and BIG SAUQ has barrys.]]> 2017-11-30 18:08:18 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992159 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992192 You're in a taxi.
-this is first person]]> 2017-11-30 18:08:21 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992192 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992342 Bob thought ''yay another test''.
-place thoughts in italics or quotation marks]]> 2017-11-30 18:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992342 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992391 I fell out of my bed.

]]> 2017-11-30 18:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992391 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992516 Maya thought she is dumb but then Jenn made her happy because she was wondering what was wrong. Then Matt  saw it then he thought what was wrong.
-edit! this is a run-on sentence]]> 2017-11-30 18:08:55 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992516 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992895 ''You were like ahh when you saw the spider! Ha Ha Ha Ha.Your mom was so scared when you screamed.'' ''Your mom was like are you ok?And you said yes.''
- edit, there are too many quotions marks makes it confuising.]]> 2017-11-30 18:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992895 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992992 It was time for the test, Jen was so scared! She hadn't been studying because she was at her brother's soccer practice.
-capitalization]]> 2017-11-30 18:09:43 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211992992 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993191 (They are talking about them selves.)
-this is not third person]]> 2017-11-30 18:10:06 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993191 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993249 (Hmm... I wonder how many jelly beans she has in this jar.)
this is not third person]]> 2017-11-30 18:10:13 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993249 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993466 you need to get your paper and draw anything
-capitalize and punctuation]]> 2017-11-30 18:10:34 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993466 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993492 He is lying.]]> 2017-11-30 18:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993492 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993704 (Hmm... I wonder what he is thinking about  (Hmm... I think he should stop day dreaming)
- this is not third person]]> 2017-11-30 18:10:59 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993704 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993925 Tyra and Alana are both excited for their sleepover.
you need to write the thoughts of AT LEAST 2 people]]> 2017-11-30 18:11:25 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993925 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993950 (I wonder what she is having for lunch?)(I might have pizza for lunch.) 
this is not third person]]> 2017-11-30 18:11:28 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211993950 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211994291 he thought whoop whoop its almost time for recess she thought yes almost time to go home.]]> 2017-11-30 18:12:02 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211994291 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211994423 He went to the park with his new best friend and they had ice cream and he was happy

]]> 2017-11-30 18:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211994423 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211994489 He is being mean.]]> 2017-11-30 18:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211994489 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211994775 there was a girl that loved her friends and her family.
capitalization

]]> 2017-11-30 18:12:57 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211994775 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211994991 Your feet are stuck in a sticky slime.]]> 2017-11-30 18:13:18 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211994991 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211995133 She is happy with her work. Her mom was proud. She felt very happy.
-capitalization]]> 2017-11-30 18:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211995133 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211995340 I lost my dog.

]]> 2017-11-30 18:14:01 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211995340 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211995696 Mrs.Doumas was nervous. It was her first day teaching at a new school." Will the students like me?!"
on the other side of town Alex was excited to have a new teacher. "i hope that she is nice!"
 ]]> 2017-11-30 18:14:39 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211995696 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211995718 He went with them to the park with  out a parent.
She and her friend were happy to go the ice cream story yesterday

]]> 2017-11-30 18:14:42 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211995718 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211995815 Addison thought is was so so so so hot outside.]]> 2017-11-30 18:14:51 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211995815 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211996307 She is not happy about her grades. Her mom feels unhappy to she is going to get in trouble]]> 2017-11-30 18:15:43 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211996307 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211996734 Addison thought is was hot. Jillthought it was cold
-these need to be separate thoughts/sentences]]> 2017-11-30 18:16:24 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211996734 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211996754 2017-11-30 18:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/211996754 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212016702 I went to the store.]]> 2017-11-30 18:50:44 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212016702 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212017364 You are a beast.]]> 2017-11-30 18:51:55 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212017364 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212017584  He got stuck in a long. 
punctuation]]> 2017-11-30 18:52:17 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212017584 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212018388 He came home from school and got a balloon from has party.]]> 2017-11-30 18:53:34 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212018388 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212018465 Ethan thought it was going to rain but it didn't rain.]]> 2017-11-30 18:53:41 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212018465 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212021825 Bobby thought he was going to ride the unicorn.Toby was going to space.]]> 2017-11-30 18:59:16 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212021825 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212022198 the teacher is teching ''I want to go home''. belinda is doing her homework''i want to know what is the dinner for today''.]]> 2017-11-30 18:59:54 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212022198 https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212028490 The kids in the class hide f n ]]> 2017-11-30 19:11:02 UTC https://padlet.com/doumasa/q4nc5tw26k2e/wish/212028490