https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh en-us 2021-08-15 15:48:21 UTC 2023-02-20 17:13:13 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681784701 My video is about my personal narrative story and my favourite strategy while writing it.]]> 2021-08-17 07:27:04 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681784701 meharmakkar3 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681785185 This is my video on Personal Narrative, about my favorite strategy:]]> 2021-08-17 07:27:27 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681785185 shyamanand2 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681786728 My video]]> 2021-08-17 07:28:48 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681786728 shauryaupadhyaya1 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681788119 2021-08-17 07:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681788119 narumugair1 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681788178 This my video on Personal narrative, my favourite strategy:]]> 2021-08-17 07:30:05 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681788178 rishikaganapathy3 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681790858 2021-08-17 07:32:25 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681790858 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681792491 2021-08-17 07:33:55 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681792491 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681792623 My Strategy]]> 2021-08-17 07:34:03 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681792623 aiyanapereira2 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681793016 2021-08-17 07:34:24 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681793016 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681793109 2021-08-17 07:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681793109 ishangoswami2 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681793117 my video]]> 2021-08-17 07:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681793117 anish22 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681793388 Here it is]]> 2021-08-17 07:34:46 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681793388 riyaganesh2 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681795925 I explained my favourite strategy which I used while writing this. Find my personal narrative attached below. Hope that you like it :)]]> 2021-08-17 07:37:18 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681795925 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681802340 2021-08-17 07:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681802340 swarapatil4 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681815737 2021-08-17 07:55:52 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681815737 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681912193 My video]]> 2021-08-17 09:47:18 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681912193 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681936929 my video]]> 2021-08-17 10:21:34 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1681936929 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1682587904 2021-08-17 17:31:53 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1682587904 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1682589563 2021-08-17 17:33:06 UTC 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https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1682618278 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1682619115 2021-08-17 17:53:03 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1682619115 nishthamaheshwari2 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1683369072 2021-08-18 03:33:54 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1683369072 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1683370744 by samridh]]> 2021-08-18 03:35:00 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1683370744 rimiupadhyay1 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1683763378 2021-08-18 08:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1683763378 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1683845745 2021-08-18 09:31:20 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1683845745 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1685851544 2021-08-19 10:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1685851544 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1690337274 2021-08-23 03:56:43 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1690337274 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1690337878 2021-08-23 03:57:05 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1690337878 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1690338784 2021-08-23 03:57:39 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1690338784 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1690339752 2021-08-23 03:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1690339752 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1690340458 2021-08-23 03:58:35 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1690340458 sharpthorn1207 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1691388586 2021-08-23 15:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1691388586 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1691566108 2021-08-23 17:16:57 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1691566108 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1691568313 2021-08-23 17:18:00 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1691568313 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1692640968 2021-08-24 02:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1692640968 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693100817 My favorite strategy in my personal narrative ]]> 2021-08-24 06:44:54 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693100817 monika129 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693115236 2021-08-24 06:52:31 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693115236 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693174961 2021-08-24 07:26:19 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693174961 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693177014 Wow, I can feel and see you because this story is beautifully written and I can picture myself in your shoes Abhay,
Good job]]> 2021-08-24 07:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693177014 ishangoswami2 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693180450 I like the way you visualized the basmet. great job
  ]]> 2021-08-24 07:29:56 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693180450 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693181703 Your story idea is very good. I like how describe yourself when you are running the race. But I feel that the starting needs some tweaking. It feels a bit quick. But overall it is very nice]]> 2021-08-24 07:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693181703 meharmakkar3 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693182138 It's a wonderful story. I can really see everything happening inside my brain when I read the story. You can add a few more dialogues and a little more of inner thinking. Apart from that, the story is quite nice!]]> 2021-08-24 07:31:08 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693182138 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693183540 Aarav.Gupta I like your favorite strategy it was amazing ]]> 2021-08-24 07:32:08 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693183540 shauryaupadhyaya1 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693184676 I liked the way you expressed your emotions in your story but I think you could have added a bit more Show Not Tell.]]> 2021-08-24 07:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693184676 meharmakkar3 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693187082 I like your story Abhyuday! It has most of the strategies given! I have only one feedback. You can make the important parts longer and the unimportant ones shorter. Apart from that, it is a very good story!]]> 2021-08-24 07:34:12 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693187082 shauryaupadhyaya1 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693187306 Swara, I think you should have had a bit lesser dialogues and have a balance in SAID strategy]]> 2021-08-24 07:34:21 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693187306 swarapatil4 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693188262 wow Nishtha but you added very little inner thinking in your story but other than that it was great! ]]> 2021-08-24 07:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693188262 meharmakkar3 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693190231 Good story, Andre. It is perfect, the way you have described every bit of your story! You can add a little bit more show not tell. Great story!]]> 2021-08-24 07:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693190231 shauryaupadhyaya1 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693194162 Advaith I liked how you used the SAID Strategy]]> 2021-08-24 07:39:02 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693194162 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693210939 nice story Arav. I like how you showed what pain you felt when you got scratched by the cat]]> 2021-08-24 07:51:09 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693210939 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693451242 I absolutely love your story advaith!]]> 2021-08-24 11:55:57 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1693451242 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695016424 I really understand how you falt Abhay, It is written perfectly!]]> 2021-08-25 02:38:14 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695016424 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695024301 Wow, Asees I can really feel how you felt and see what you could see!]]> 2021-08-25 02:40:51 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695024301 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695040473 Wow riya,I really liked your description]]> 2021-08-25 02:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695040473 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695050690 shaurya i like your story a lot i liked how you stretched it and i could visualize every word that you wrote

over all great work]]> 2021-08-25 02:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695050690 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695116112 I like how u described the voice in your head so nicely with so much small action. Maybe add more paragraphing because with the voice and your thoughts it becomes hard and confusing.]]> 2021-08-25 03:14:26 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695116112 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695155103 I like ur story Abhyuday its a little too dramatic but its very well written and i can see you put in a lot of work
:)]]> 2021-08-25 03:28:49 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695155103 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695157899 Wow, I can put myself in your shoes. It is very detailed and I like how you interact with the reader a little. Very well described.]]> 2021-08-25 03:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695157899 ishangoswami2 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695159637 wow, i could imagine the dentist pull the teeth out. over all i thought that it was a great story ]]> 2021-08-25 03:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695159637 shyamanand2 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695160049 Advaith your story was awesome you could of added a bit less actions but overall good job Advaith]]> 2021-08-25 03:30:32 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695160049 narumugair1 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695160339 Advaith I really liked your story because you put so much detail in it I felt like I was quite literally in the scene *winces* the show not tell was implemented perfectly while the powerful words were what made me feel like I was there *winces*.]]> 2021-08-25 03:30:40 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695160339 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695160622 I liked how you described your feelings when you got stung by the jellyfish nice job!]]> 2021-08-25 03:30:47 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695160622 anish22 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695161288 I think the story was very touching mainly becuase you you felt diya as a nice. I think you can make the book longer by showing your emoion a little more.]]> 2021-08-25 03:31:04 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695161288 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695162296 Wow this story is realy really expressive abhay i can understand the way you are feeling and i think this is one of the most beautiful stories i have ever read :)]]> 2021-08-25 03:31:30 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695162296 nishthamaheshwari2 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695163691 Very touching story, I could really feel your sadness.]]> 2021-08-25 03:32:04 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695163691 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695164782 Shyam your story is awesome I like how you expressed your emotions but I think you can stretch the heart of the story and use show not tell.]]> 2021-08-25 03:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695164782 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695167442 Aiyana I think your story was great and I liked how you described your feelings though I think you could describe the setting a little more. Great and touching story!]]> 2021-08-25 03:33:35 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695167442 anish22 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695173805 Wow , I your story is good how you described how everything was happening and how in the end you were happy becuase naughty nikil was not there next year.]]> 2021-08-25 03:36:15 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695173805 riyaganesh2 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695524881 Great job Rishika, I loved how you used your flashback in your story!! Please tell me how you convinced your mom so I can get a puppy too :)]]> 2021-08-25 06:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1695524881 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1697503367 Good story Andre it was perfect but you could add a little bit more of show not tell otherwise it is perfect ]]> 2021-08-26 02:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1697503367 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1698806914 Great story riddhi,
I can really imagine how scary getting teeth pulled out is, I really loved it. :)]]> 2021-08-26 16:17:00 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1698806914 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1698811775 Rimi this story is really interesting, I love how detailed it is! ]]> 2021-08-26 16:19:19 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1698811775 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1698814583 I loved the story Shyam,I felt what you felt and saw what you saw! I am very sorry about your niece.]]> 2021-08-26 16:20:49 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1698814583 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1698816612 Wow teisha your story is really interesting! I never would have thought of such a unique idea!]]> 2021-08-26 16:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1698816612 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1698823075 Wow,samridh Getting lost in a supermarket is scary! I really like your strategies!]]> 2021-08-26 16:24:51 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1698823075 https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1762908464 Awwwwww, I felt like I was there!!]]> 2021-09-23 13:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/monika129/q4gzvysrkicltceh/wish/1762908464