https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2 Made with swagger en-us 2018-03-23 07:57:56 UTC 2018-03-23 11:47:11 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245397837 All the nursing & midwifery slide formats are the same- would be rather dull if guests go to more than one

Slides are too wordy & lack imagery. Your narrative is strong & the text isn't needed. 

Leave out the negative regarding placement travelling 

Use imagery of skills suite 

Would you have a student midwife in the room to share their experience 

]]> 2018-03-23 11:28:38 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245397837 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245397862 Consider the use of 'shiftwork'  as my eye was drawn straight to it. ]]> 2018-03-23 11:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245397862 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245397880 Stop - check info re travel to placement and allocation to placement
Continue - emphasis on professional integra]]> 2018-03-23 11:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245397880 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245397890 Quite a wordy slide. 
Great to see you enjoy being a midwife. Develop this further. Tell your story! Inspire them. 
Sell the 24/7 working. Why it's important. Tell a story about working Christmas Day. How it links with tea working. 
Maybe use the students to talk about their experiences of working within health.]]> 2018-03-23 11:28:52 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245397890 sarah_naylor https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245397979 Nice having text and the image]]> 2018-03-23 11:29:12 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245397979 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398030 Clear explanation of the role of a midwife]]> 2018-03-23 11:29:24 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398030 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398070 Demonstrated passion for career from beginning of presentation ]]> 2018-03-23 11:29:38 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398070 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398165 Does a17 yeR old understand the value of autonomy?]]> 2018-03-23 11:30:01 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398165 b7000258 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398181 Perhaps make. Ajoke  about it]]> 2018-03-23 11:30:05 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398181 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398195 Considering never seen presentation or delivered it]]> 2018-03-23 11:30:09 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398195 jo_stone https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398309 Role of midwife explained clearly very early on]]> 2018-03-23 11:30:36 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398309 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398432 Good to talk through what a person needs to be to be a midwife there is a feeling of you must be this and must be that. Perhaps explore with the audience what qualities they feel make a great midwife?]]> 2018-03-23 11:31:10 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398432 b7000258 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398433 Make placements more of. A positive spin rathera  than. Anegatives
I.e. Gives opportunities to experience varieties of areas rthEr than negative of travelling]]> 2018-03-23 11:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398433 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398442 What is “the region” for placements ]]> 2018-03-23 11:31:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398442 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398555 Reference re travelling and students being based where they live/locates is not accurate
Too much text On the slides]]> 2018-03-23 11:31:41 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398555 jo_stone https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398570 Definition of region needed ]]> 2018-03-23 11:31:46 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398570 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398637 The slides just list things about the course....... 
They don't link with each other. Try and take an applicant on a journey. 
Random link to employability website how is this used. ]]> 2018-03-23 11:32:01 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398637 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398642 More pictures less words on slides
Good job if you’d not done the presentation before]]> 2018-03-23 11:32:04 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398642 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398725 Great to highlight the 100% employability ]]> 2018-03-23 11:32:27 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398725 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398747 Explanation of interprofessional learning at the right level of info and what it means for the course - doesn't need the boiler plate text]]> 2018-03-23 11:32:33 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245398747 jo_stone https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245399036 We need to challenge the icc slide, way too wordy and you’ve covered it already ]]> 2018-03-23 11:33:46 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245399036 b7000258 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245399089 Slides wordy a]]> 2018-03-23 11:33:59 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245399089 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245399097 Maybe have more titles / discussion points with less text and then the delivery covers the details]]> 2018-03-23 11:34:02 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/q2l082cpaoa2/wish/245399097