https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop Who was your partner? What did you like about their story? What did they point out to you about your own story? en-us 2017-09-20 13:31:09 UTC 2026-01-19 03:14:25 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189311932 -My partner was Jessica
-I liked her rising action
-She told me to be more descriptive ]]> 2017-09-20 13:33:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189311932 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189311939 2017-09-20 13:33:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189311939 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189311948 -My partner was Anna 
-I liked the basic plot
-She liked my rising action, and she told me to make my climax more problematic ]]> 2017-09-20 13:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189311948 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189312144 My partners were Kennady and Piper. What I liked about kennadys story was her theme. What I liked about pipers was her rising action that went up to the climax. They pointed out how I caught the readers attention.]]> 2017-09-20 13:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189312144 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189312202 My Parteners were Elle and Piper.What  I liked about Elle's was that she had a good way to catch the readers attention right as you started reading.I liked parteners resoultion and how she wrapped up the story.Thye liked my theme and climax of my story.]]> 2017-09-20 13:34:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189312202 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189312526 My partner was Kelly. I liked the rising action. I have to clean up my rising action and explain and elaborate a little more.]]> 2017-09-20 13:34:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189312526 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189312564 - My partner is Ananya!
- I liked her story a lot!
- I think I should work on adding more things in my falling action.]]> 2017-09-20 13:34:50 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189312564 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189312577 My partners were Kennady and Elle. What I liked about Elle's was how her story played out. What I liked about Kennady's was her conflict. They liked how my riding action went to my climax.]]> 2017-09-20 13:34:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189312577 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189313115 •My partner is Alyssa B
•I like the animals. It's cute
•Theme and more details]]> 2017-09-20 13:35:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189313115 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189313168 -Miisha was my partner.
-I liked how the ending is debatable on whether it was sad or  happy.
-They said that my story is a bit too simple and that it is sweet.]]> 2017-09-20 13:35:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189313168 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189313355 My partner is Michelle.
I liked her exposition when it begins with a murder scene.
She told me to change the overall theme.

]]> 2017-09-20 13:36:01 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189313355 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189313389 My partner is Ashley and I like her story because she added a cat. She told me to change the ending a little.

]]> 2017-09-20 13:36:04 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189313389 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189314980 My partner was Megan. I liked her theme. She likes how I described the characters.]]> 2017-09-20 13:38:42 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189314980 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189315502 2017-09-20 13:39:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189315502 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189315542 My partner was Lauren. I liked the way she introduces her characters. Lauren liked my theme.]]> 2017-09-20 13:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189315542 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189315548 - My partner was Andrea G.
- I liked the plot of the story 
- She said to add more suspense]]> 2017-09-20 13:39:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189315548 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189315552 My partner was Sumita B. I liked the suspense of the murder. They pointed out that I needed more detail in the plot]]> 2017-09-20 13:39:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189315552 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189316523 1. Alex Ahn
2. I liked how the apple still follows him around
3. He gave me some movie similarities and it was the conjuring.]]> 2017-09-20 13:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189316523 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189316959 1. David Lee
2.  The genre elements was nice
3. He liked my rising action

]]> 2017-09-20 13:41:52 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189316959 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189317114 My partners were DJ and Conner, I liked how Conner described about his characters well and I liked that DJ's story is really good]]> 2017-09-20 13:42:05 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189317114 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189317336 1.D.J. and Ryan 
2.DJ and Ryan both had really good details in there plot diagram
3.they said that I should add more information ]]> 2017-09-20 13:42:27 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189317336 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189317449 1. Partner was Aryon Nath
2. I liked his characters.
3. He liked my concept of idea]]> 2017-09-20 13:42:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189317449 jtk9785 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189318680 1. Jonah was my partner
2. His setting was intriguing 
3.He liked the details of it

]]> 2017-09-20 13:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189318680 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189319270 1. Joseph Kim
2. I like how they killed the demon.
3. He liked my characters.]]> 2017-09-20 13:45:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189319270 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189319836 1. Braxton M
2. I liked his characters
3. He liked the mystery about my  story

1. Will R
2. I liked his plot 
3. He liked the concept ]]> 2017-09-20 13:46:16 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189319836 jtp9686 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189320358 2:his setting was creative 
3:She liked my characters ]]> 2017-09-20 13:47:00 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189320358 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189343362 Will B

I like how his could relate to a real story and he liked that mine had a lot of humour mixed with action]]> 2017-09-20 14:22:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189343362 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189344399
Sydney Taylor 
I like how her characters in the story are super relatable. 
She liked my plot]]> 2017-09-20 14:24:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189344399 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189344617 Sawyer S.
1. I like the plot of her story
2. She liked the concept of my story

]]> 2017-09-20 14:24:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189344617 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189344847 1: Will B
2: RohanG
2: I like that the bad guy/antagonist gave the protagonist clues and a chance to find him

3: he liked the setting in my story
and the characters.]]> 2017-09-20 14:24:46 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189344847 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189345975 Emma H.
1 I liked how ]]> 2017-09-20 14:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189345975 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189346164 Hanna
I liked how her characters start off doing something that they know they shouldn't and learn through the experience. Almost like karma.
Hanna pointed out that I should add more details about the world ]]> 2017-09-20 14:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189346164 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189346955 Emma H.
1 I liked how she made up the dystopia]]> 2017-09-20 14:27:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189346955 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189347674 Emma H.
1 I liked how she made a new world and made it come to life.

]]> 2017-09-20 14:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189347674 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189348991 I liked how she made an dystopian world come to life.

Emma pointed out that my character should have totally opposite personalities.

]]> 2017-09-20 14:30:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189348991 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189349963 Partner- Angie
I liked how her protagonists were criminals instead of the 'good guys'
She pointed out that there should be more detail on what the inside of the computer in my story looks like.]]> 2017-09-20 14:32:27 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189349963 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189351227 I liked how ]]> 2017-09-20 14:34:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189351227 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189351720 Rohan G.
It's back when cavemen were alive and how he rides a taradaclitle he liked that the bad guy gave clues in my story]]> 2017-09-20 14:35:27 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189351720 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189352442 I liked how she made lots of twists to it and how she made her protagonist so determined to reach her goal.

She liked how there is a lot of conflict going on.]]> 2017-09-20 14:36:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189352442 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189352962 I like how adhi's story was really organized and neat so that when any person reads it he will understand what he is trying to say

]]> 2017-09-20 14:37:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189352962 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189353015 My partner like my story and gave a me a few good advices on how to tweak the story. I also like the intensity of his story and how big of a thrilling story it is.

]]> 2017-09-20 14:37:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189353015 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189354975 2017-09-20 14:40:46 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189354975 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355129 Katie,that it had a lot of conflicts in the story.
That she liked how the protagonist was so determined to reach her goal]]> 2017-09-20 14:41:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355129 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355181 2017-09-20 14:41:07 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355181 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355352 1: Will B

2: I liked how the antagonist gave clues to find him and gave the protagonist a chance to get his stuff back

3: He liked the setting and the ch]]> 2017-09-20 14:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355352 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355369 My partner was Sejal. I liked how her character disappeared into an alternate universe. She pointed out my inciding incident, and how to add more detail.


]]> 2017-09-20 14:41:27 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355369 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355514 2017-09-20 14:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355514 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355515 My partner liked my story and thought it would make a great story Outline. She thought I did not need any improvements. ]]> 2017-09-20 14:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355515 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355885 My partner was Sachi. I liked the rising action of her story. She pointed out that Ishould write at least 2 pages. She liked how detailed each step was.]]> 2017-09-20 14:42:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189355885 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189356157 1. Anika
2. I like how she put a lot of drama in her story
3. She said that I should have more suspense which I agreed with completely.]]> 2017-09-20 14:42:46 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189356157 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189356251 My partner was Brendan and I liked how he was detaile with his story and how he made the story interesting and making you want to know more. 
 
He told me about my story and how he liked the names of my story and he liked my resolution and how it was a nice ending to the story.]]> 2017-09-20 14:42:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189356251 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189358578 My partner was Hiba. She pointed out that I should explain my characters a little more.]]> 2017-09-20 14:46:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189358578 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189359604 My partner was Amita. I liked how her Climax was very thrilling and exciting. She made me realize that I should add some more interesting details.]]> 2017-09-20 14:48:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189359604 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189377769 1. Kyah Jones

2. I liked that it was basic

3. Put more details]]> 2017-09-20 15:19:28 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189377769 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189377840 My partner was Liza, 
 I liked her whole story and the climax it was very interesting. And the resolution was very shocking. ]]> 2017-09-20 15:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189377840 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189379044 Partner- Ethan Tong
Had a good conflict and resolution.]]> 2017-09-20 15:21:40 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189379044 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189379193 2017-09-20 15:21:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189379193 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189379517 My partner was Adelina and I liked how she kept her story engaging. She pointed out that I should make my story more clear and not confusing ]]> 2017-09-20 15:22:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189379517 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189379539 Partner Aryav 

 Sifi historical fiction adventure 

I like the  climax when they find out that one of the team members was a traitor and worked for the nazis

]]> 2017-09-20 15:22:31 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189379539 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189379573 My partner was Kim. I liked how it involved real/historical events. She pointed out that I needed to make my characters motivation more clear.]]> 2017-09-20 15:22:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189379573 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189380080 My partner was Melanie and I liked that her story was about WWII. I think that her story could be slightly more eventful. I should make my story less confusing and a little more straightforward.]]> 2017-09-20 15:23:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189380080 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189382169 My partner was Eric. He had a good story and a climax]]> 2017-09-20 15:27:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189382169 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189383647 My partner was Ryan D. I liked his theme and idea of the story. They pointed out to include more detail to my characters especially the main.]]> 2017-09-20 15:29:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189383647 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189384063 My partner was Jackson his story was really good especially his climax]]> 2017-09-20 15:30:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189384063 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189384517 My partner was Eric L I liked his resolution]]> 2017-09-20 15:30:52 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189384517 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189385599 My partner was Naureen and I like that her character overcame a difficult hardship.]]> 2017-09-20 15:32:42 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189385599 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189385649 2017-09-20 15:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189385649 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189385650 2017-09-20 15:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189385650 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189385652 Kerime said I needed to add more detail I like her stories sense of mystery ]]> 2017-09-20 15:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189385652 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189385656 2017-09-20 15:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189385656 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189386384 My partner was Sebastian and his story was good, interesting and mysterious.]]> 2017-09-20 15:33:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189386384 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189386996 My partner was Marianne. Her story was fun, centered in a fantasy world. I loved how the wizards in her story had such causal names, like Derek and Carl. 
I need to improve the way I explain the story, speaking clearly and including more detail.]]> 2017-09-20 15:34:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189386996 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189402676 Josh is my partner. He told me make sure to add details of how they get stuff. What I liked about his story is that it was very descriptive and funny, apocalypse type of story. A]]> 2017-09-20 16:03:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189402676 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189405700 Hinkley is my partner, I like 
 How the towns have numbers in hinkley story, I like how there is a good plot, suspenseful, and well action packed. Cliff hanger. 

(My story) hinkley told me to add a suspenseful cliff hanger.]]> 2017-09-20 16:09:28 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189405700 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189406960 Tyler was my partner he used a pineapple as the antagonist and it turned out to be spongebob's pineaple]]> 2017-09-20 16:11:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189406960 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407038 My partner was grace T hers story is good it is about a girl ghost try to kill a little boy to become alive again.]]> 2017-09-20 16:11:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407038 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407072 SO MY PARTNER WAS BREAD JOIN AND HIS STORY WAS ABOUT COPS AND COPS R COOL DUDE AMD THEY POINTED OUT MY STORY WAS PRITY UNIQUE AND SPICIALS HI

]]> 2017-09-20 16:12:01 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407072 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407121 My partner rylynn and i liked how her story included dragons and that's always cool.  I should change the kids to teenagers because killing kids is apparently "bad"

]]> 2017-09-20 16:12:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407121 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407235 2017-09-20 16:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407235 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407237 Eduardo was my oatner
He incorporated his topic well.
He liked that the pineapple was spongebobs.]]> 2017-09-20 16:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407237 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407451 My partner is Olivia M. 
Her story was good the genre was realistic fiction which
match the plot pretty well she is very descriptive which helps but she just need to put some improvements like addding more excitement to keep the  
reader on a hook.]]> 2017-09-20 16:12:42 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407451 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407509 My partner was Aline and I liked how well her plot went along with her genre.]]> 2017-09-20 16:12:48 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189407509 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189408763 She pointed out that I should add some more excitement to my story so I can keep whoever is reading it interested.]]> 2017-09-20 16:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189408763 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409404 My partner is valeientina her story was so interesting the genre is scientific fiction and her plot was very well written and she just needs to maybe add a new character and she overall did so good]]> 2017-09-20 16:15:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409404 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409787 2017-09-20 16:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409787 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409857 My partner was allí ]]> 2017-09-20 16:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409857 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409884 My partner was ]]> 2017-09-20 16:16:28 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409884 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409962 My partner was Alli ]]> 2017-09-20 16:16:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409962 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409976 My partner was Alli and ]]> 2017-09-20 16:16:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189409976 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189410047 My partner was Alli and I loved how her story was ]]> 2017-09-20 16:16:45 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189410047 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189410243 I would like to add that Olivia pointed out about my story , was that every thing stays in line pretty well and it fits the genre (fantasy)]]> 2017-09-20 16:17:07 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189410243 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189410415 My partner was Alli and I loved how her story was combined ]]> 2017-09-20 16:17:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189410415 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189410523 My partner was Alli and I loved how her story was a combination of two stories ]]> 2017-09-20 16:17:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189410523 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189410539 My partner was Alli and I loved how her story was a combination of two stories.]]> 2017-09-20 16:17:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189410539 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412195 My partner was mrs sartin

]]> 2017-09-20 16:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412195 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412265 My partner was Jake, I liked that he story make sense why the monsters are there. He pointed out that mine was scary.]]> 2017-09-20 16:20:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412265 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412391 My partner was Dominic his story had a plot he told me to change the dragon dragon a little bit and add a little more details.]]> 2017-09-20 16:21:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412391 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412511 Somebody once told me the world was going to roll me, Im mot the sharpest tool in the she]]> 2017-09-20 16:21:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412511 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412829 Trevor did good on presenting his story]]> 2017-09-20 16:22:00 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412829 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412988 I'm deleting this]]> 2017-09-20 16:22:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189412988 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189413619 Sophia was my partner and I loved how serious her story was and how it dealt with serious topics. She liked how my main characters were out of the norm, and I broke numerous cliches with my setting and dates.]]> 2017-09-20 16:23:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189413619 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189414241 My partner was Trisha she told me to show how long the task took or many for how many days the story takes]]> 2017-09-20 16:24:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189414241 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189414517 interestingMy partner was Ishaan
I loved that his story was detailed and it was very interesting witha  great climax. 
He told me to talk more about my characters in my story.

]]> 2017-09-20 16:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189414517 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189414528 Daily was my partner and she told me to fix the dates in my story]]> 2017-09-20 16:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189414528 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189427058 Grace told me to make time jumps more noticeable]]> 2017-09-20 16:47:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189427058 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189492295 I liked how my partner had a fantasy and how she used political stuff in it]]> 2017-09-20 18:41:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189492295 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506040 Angelica was my partner and I liked how the conflict was fixed and it was all calm and no violence.

]]> 2017-09-20 19:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506040 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506470 Saloni, I loved the creativity of her story and we had no criticisms

]]> 2017-09-20 19:09:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506470 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506533 I like how my partner made me the character that gets killed in her story. Hahaha

]]> 2017-09-20 19:09:59 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506533 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506594 Isabelle. The lizered wizard. She named mycemetery]]> 2017-09-20 19:10:07 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506594 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506643 I like that he had aliens and robots in his story.]]> 2017-09-20 19:10:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506643 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506646 My partner was Morgan. Her story was very nice it was about science and fiction. Well.......I guess overall it was pretty much good. Nice work Morgan😘 ......And yes, all of you also did a great job guys. Keep it up 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻.Have a nice day🙋🏻


]]> 2017-09-20 19:10:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506646 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506648 My partner was Alex and I liked how unique her story was. I should give more information on the antagonist.]]> 2017-09-20 19:10:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506648 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506653 1) Emma White
2)Samantha escapes but gets captured again, and dies.
3)I rhyme to much]]> 2017-09-20 19:10:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506653 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506721 Lauren Rios 
The reality in it 
They liked my conflict ]]> 2017-09-20 19:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506721 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506834 Cason Cole
I like that it takes place somewhere fictional. He pointed out that even though the main character wasn't a good kid he did the right thing when it was needed]]> 2017-09-20 19:10:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506834 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506953 2017-09-20 19:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506953 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506968 2017-09-20 19:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189506968 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507017 Jansen Hubbard

]]> 2017-09-20 19:11:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507017 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507045 Jansen Hubbard
I liked the ]]> 2017-09-20 19:11:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507045 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507169 Jansen Hubbard
I liked the conflict
They liked the reality behind the story]]> 2017-09-20 19:11:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507169 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507306 2017-09-20 19:11:46 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507306 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507307 2017-09-20 19:11:46 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507307 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507345 Francisco Lorenzo
That Henry fights his nightmares
That they liked how the city in the story was in the clouds.]]> 2017-09-20 19:11:52 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507345 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507616 Liked the H]]> 2017-09-20 19:12:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507616 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507863 My partner was Abraham
I liked how he used homework in his story for a horror. He thought it was funny how he got kidnapped in my story by Geeth.]]> 2017-09-20 19:13:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189507863 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189508381 2017-09-20 19:13:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189508381 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189508650 Johna is my par]]> 2017-09-20 19:14:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189508650 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189509062

]]> 2017-09-20 19:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189509062 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189511887 She made me realize I need to add more emotion in my story ]]> 2017-09-20 19:21:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/189511887 https://padlet.com/dsartin/q29joemqgsop/wish/190645706 I liked how nicoles story was detailed and how it is set.

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