Holly Moore’s Showcase 2021 by Student - Holly Moore

2021-11-14 22:54:08 UTC

Hi, welcome to my Padlet!

Mr H's Feedback

choward109 — 2021-11-20 21:52:44 UTC

You have done a great job Holly. I love that the Greyhound place got back to you! That was exciting. You mention that you put up posters in your neighbourhood. Do you have any photos of that?

Also, change your Heading on the Information page to just read Information

jfalls3 — 2021-11-23 03:45:05 UTC

I like that you sent a letter. The issue with grey hound racing is that the government earns lots of money from it.
What action do you think you could take next?
Ms Falls

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2021-11-23 03:50:32 UTC

I definitely think greyhound racing is also a really bad ‘sport’ or ‘entertainment’ as it only hurts the animal.

I know what you mean by lots of the greyhounds at the shelter having trust issues as one of my friends recently adopted one and it is very timid (this was a retired racing greyhound btw!).

For your call to action I think sending a letter explaining why this should stop is a great idea.

-Tilly

stella inthavong 5N

2021-11-23 03:53:44 UTC

wonderful project holly, i understand why you want greyhound racing should become to an end. i would like to ask, why are you so protective in greyhound racing? is it because you like greyhounds? do you own a greyhound?

i really enjoyed your project because i know you put a lot of effort into it. another question i have is what part of the project are you most proud of? if you could do another agent of change on the same topic what would you change this time?

-stella inthavong<3

Defne

2021-11-24 22:32:41 UTC

Wow Holly this is a great topic that is very important. Grey hound racing is something that needs to change. The photo essay moved me and I felt so emotional. Your email was great and you fortunately got a response! Overall this is amazing.

Lam

2021-11-24 22:34:53 UTC

Holly your website was amazing, It changed my whole perspective on greyhounds. I didn’t even know greyhound racing was a thing. keep it up 👍

Angelina Xu

2021-11-24 22:46:18 UTC

Holly, your website is so cool! I never really thought about greyhound racing until I saw your website. I think that greyhound racing is an issue that not many people notice which is why I think you did amazing. You changed my knowledge on it and you have also raised awareness which is fabulous.

Aaliya. Z

2021-11-25 22:45:43 UTC

I found your topic entertaining, and l learnt a lot from your topic and l think you did an awesome job👍.

Aashi shah

2021-11-25 22:45:51 UTC

Holly your presentation was amazing! I would say some feedback is that when you tell us about why your passionate about your topic also tell us who you are. Think of us as people who you don’t know. Overall your presentation was absolutely interesting. Good job!