https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj Made with mirth en-us 2021-08-26 08:50:23 UTC 2026-01-19 12:49:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4d8.png nt0711 https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700185294 I really liked your story and think that I can add so much from it to mine like what part I liked what part I disliked and some more expressions ]]> 2021-08-27 05:08:18 UTC https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700185294 nt0652 https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700185741 I want to add the details like when you said  you were going to watch the Moana show live and when you were lost.

]]> 2021-08-27 05:08:34 UTC https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700185741 https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700186370 I think I can add a little dialogue like in Eka's story to make it more descriptive and strech out the story more like Aardhya.]]> 2021-08-27 05:08:54 UTC https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700186370 https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700188342 I really liked your story and I think I can add more dialogue to my story]]> 2021-08-27 05:10:01 UTC https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700188342 nt0711 https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700189673 I really liked how you actually described the setting and how you added lots of feeling so my big takeaway is that I can describe my setting more and add more feelings ]]> 2021-08-27 05:10:43 UTC https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700189673 nt0711 https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700194158 I liked your story and the way you said how your dogs were jumping yet I think you could have used more grammar and som more dialogue ]]> 2021-08-27 05:13:11 UTC https://padlet.com/snehamadgaonkar/q02lt3901j9sionj/wish/1700194158