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      <pubDate>2024-06-05 00:57:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Đạt T1</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given map compares an Australian university's single and double student's rooms.</p><p><br/></p><p>Noticeably, the double room, which was larger, <mark>demanded more students</mark> and a higher rental payment. The room's distribution of furniture was also more complex.</p><p><br/></p><p>Both of the domitories still shared many features, namely one bed by the window with a desk nearby and bathrooms at the same place. Household items such as a stove, microwave, sink, and television were also placed in every room. <mark>Additionally, the length of these rooms stayed the same (6 metres). --&gt;</mark><strong>Additionally, the length of both rooms is 6 meters.</strong></p><p><br/></p><p>However, there were <mark>a great many differences </mark>between the charts. The first very appealing ones were an extra desk and bed behind a couple of newfangled cupboards in the larger room, w<mark>hose greater width made room for a set of table and chairs</mark>. The series of microwave, sink and stove in this area <mark>lied parallel to the width rather than perpendicularly. </mark>Moreover, the existence of a bookshelf and a door in the double room contributed to making its rental cost (350 dollars per week) 150-dollar higher than the single one. </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-05 07:45:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Diem Khue - task 2</title>
         <author>9mcwcky5cr</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3020462859</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>𝑺𝒐𝒎𝒆 𝒑𝒆𝒐𝒑𝒍𝒆 𝒔𝒂𝒚 𝒊𝒏 𝒐𝒓𝒅𝒆𝒓 𝒕𝒐 𝒑𝒓𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒏𝒕 𝒊𝒍𝒍𝒏𝒆𝒔𝒔 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒅𝒊𝒔𝒆𝒂𝒔𝒆, 𝒈𝒐𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒏𝒎𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔 𝒔𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒍𝒅 𝒇𝒐𝒄𝒖𝒔 𝒐𝒏 𝒓𝒆𝒅𝒖𝒄𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒆𝒏𝒗𝒊𝒓𝒐𝒏𝒎𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒂𝒍 𝒑𝒐𝒍𝒍𝒖𝒕𝒊𝒐𝒏 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒔𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒑𝒓𝒐𝒃𝒍𝒆𝒎𝒔. 𝑻𝒐 𝒘𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒆𝒙𝒕𝒆𝒏𝒕 𝒅𝒐 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒂𝒈𝒓𝒆𝒆 𝒐𝒓 𝒅𝒊𝒔𝒂𝒈𝒓𝒆𝒆?</p><p><br></p><p>The more modern the world is, <mark>the worse</mark> people’s health <mark>is</mark>. Therefore, a group of people believe that improving the environment and solving housing issues must be the priorities to prevent illness and <mark>disease</mark>. In my opinion, I completely agree with the <mark>following </mark>statement.&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>It is worth noticing that the environment and inhabitants both have such a tight <mark>link</mark> to hu<mark>man healt</mark>h. First of all, each kind of pollution can affect <mark>each kind of our health system</mark>. For instance,&nbsp;breathing in air pollutants can increase the risk of respiratory infections and lung cancer. Furthermore, using and consuming toxic water sources may cause skin infection and cardiovascular disea<mark>se.</mark> Second, damp and mold from slums can lead to a host of health problems such as asthma and wheezing. Due to the imbalance of recent econ<mark>omic, </mark>high property prices must be considered by governments to support their residents.</p><p><br></p><p>On the other hand, some other elements should also be prioritized to reduce illness in society. First, people need to remove their negative lifestyles including in both daily menus and habits. Instead of fast and chemically treated food, people are suggested to fill their meals with more organic vegetables and white meat to avoid diabetes,  heart dise<mark>ase</mark> and improve their immune systems. Moreover, the governments should pay more attention to medical facilities an<mark>d support for their peop</mark>le. Apart from equipping modern and high-quality medical devices, the government can also provide low-income communities with free periodic health examinations. Last but not least, it is also the government’s responsibility to universalize knowledge of health care to their people, especially in difficult areas.</p><p><br></p><p>In conclusion, for the aforementioned elements, it is encouraged that individuals focus on their health care and daily activities to have improvement in preventing illness. In addition, governments play the role of enhancing general life quality and creating behavior changes.</p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-06 16:55:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Quỳnh - task 1</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3020830985</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>The maps illustrate a comparison between double and single rooms for students at Australian universities</p><p><br></p><p>Overall, it is obvious that the room for two students is larger and more expensive. Moreover, it contains more diverse furniture than a single room.</p><p><br></p><p>According to the graph, it can be seen that the<mark> latter</mark> room is better equipped with 24 square meters compared to the f<mark>ormer, </mark>which is only 15 square meters. Furthermore, students in double rooms pay $350 per week, $150 more than those in single rooms. </p><p><br></p><p>In detail, there are similarities and differences between two distinct types of dor<mark>mitories for students. Similarly, the two types of rooms all have a bathroom, a television, and a kitchen that includes a sink, stove, and microwave. </mark>I<mark>n contrast, the double room has two beds, two study desks, two cupboards, a bookshelf, and a dining set, while the single room only has one bed and one desk.</mark></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-07 02:37:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Thu Phuong- task 1</title>
         <author>phuong13052008</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3021673363</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given plans illustrate two types of rooms for students, a room for two people and a room for <mark>a/ONE</mark> person at a university in Australia.</p><p>Overall, the room for two people has larger areas and more equipment than <mark>another, </mark>so this comes at the expense of higher rent.</p><p>We can see the difference between the two room types in the payment and the size. In the twin room<mark>, studentS n</mark>eed to pay 350$ a week while others only expend 200$. Moreover, both two rooms share the same 6m length but the room designed for two people has a width of 4.5m and the single room only has 4m.</p><p>On the left of both types of room, there is a bathroom and some pieces of furniture for the kitchen which include a microwave, sink and stove. In the twin room, there <mark>has</mark> a table and chairs for meals and a television, beside the dining set are two cupboards which separate the rooms into two parts, each comprising a bed and a study desk. However, the single room is more simple, in the right of this room there is only a bed and the television opposite the bed for entertainment.</p><p>5.5-6.0</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-08 02:11:41 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Khanh Van-task 1</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3021693591</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Overall, the maps illustrate two student rooms in an Australian university, one for two people and one for one person. Apparently, th<mark>e area and number of furniture as well as the rental price assigned to each room have been carefully calculated to suit the tenants and their budget.</mark></p><p>Considering the prices, the double room costs $350 per week whereas the other single one costs $150 cheaper. For that reason, <strong>the single room’s dimension pale in comparison with the double one’s <mark>--&gt;</mark></strong><mark>"the dimensions of the single room pale in comparison".</mark> Despite the same length of 6 metres, the double dorm is wider with a <mark>4metres width</mark> compared to 2.5 metres. </p><p>Both rooms share several similarities, a bed in the top right-hand corner of the room with a desk beside it, a bathroom in the top left corner, a set of a stove, a cupboard, a microwave and a sink in the opposite corner with a television by the side. However, the double dorm offers extra space for extra fixtures. Specifically, bed 2 is in the bottom right corner with another study desk beside, a bookshelfext to <mark>de nsk </mark>1 and a table and chairs set right at the door. &nbsp;</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-08 03:10:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Đạt T2</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3021731474</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>In discussions about public health strategies, some argue that governments should place greater emphasis on reducing environmental pollution and addressing housing problems to prevent illness and disease. I totally agree with this perspective, as both environmental factors significantly impact population health. </p><p><br></p><p>To begin, environmental pollution is undeniably linked to various health hazards. For instance, air pollution, stemming from vehicular emissions and industrial activities, contributes to respiratory illnesses like asthma and lung cancer. Likewise, water pollution, often caused by industrial discharge and improper waste disposal, leads to waterborne diseases such as cholera and dysentery. By prioritizing measures to reduce pollution sources and enforcing stringent environmental regulations, governments can effectively deal with these preventable health issues.</p><p><br></p><p> Furthermore, housing problems play a tremendous role in shaping health outcomes. Inadequate housing conditions, characterized by overcrowding, poor ventilation, and a lack of sanitation facilities, create breeding grounds for infectious diseases like tuberculosis and influenza. Moreover, homelessness exacerbates vulnerabilities, with individuals facing heightened risks of mental health disorders, substance abuse, and violence. By implementing policies to ensure access to safe and affordable housing, governments can mitigate these risks and promote healthier living environments for their citizens.</p><p><br></p><p> In conclusion, governments must prioritize efforts to reduce environmental pollution and address housing issues as central components of public health strategies. By doing so, they can mitigate illness and disease burdens, improve overall population health. Therefore, I strongly support a greater focus on these critical areas to safeguard the well-being of citizens.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-08 05:22:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>NgMinh Task 1</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3021739881</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>The maps illustrate the difference between the room for two and one student at an Australian university.</p><p><br></p><p>Overall, the student room for two people is larger and has more furniture than that for one.</p><p><br></p><p>Firstly, there is no change in the location of the bathroom, study desk 1, bed 1 and windows between 2 rooms. However, in the room for two students, there is one table and chairs put right beside the bathroom, one more bed and one more study desk, two cupboards seperating two beds and 1 bookshelf next to the bathroom.</p><p><br></p><p>In addition, while the sink, stove and microwave are put next to the door along with the width of the room for two people respectively, in the room for one, they are rotated through 90 degrees, opposite to the bathroom. Moreover, the sink in the room for two is also smaller than the one in the room for one. Besides, the location of the TV is slightly moved to the right.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-08 06:01:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>MyMy-task 1</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3021741454</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>The plans represent two different kinds of studentS' roomS for two people at an Australian university.</p><p>Overall, <mark>the smaller area of the room, the lower price of the room--&gt;</mark><strong><mark>the size of the room influences its rental cost, with smaller rooms being less expensive</mark></strong><mark>  </mark>. In the <mark>first room</mark> with the price for $350/week, t<mark>his room is</mark> divided into two areas. <mark>Each area has a bed and a study desk. In bed </mark>1, there is a bookshelf next to study desk 1. In the upper left corner of the room, it is a bathroom<mark>.</mark> <em>Behind the bathroom is table and chair. There is also kitchen near the table and chairs. The kitchen involves a sink, stove and microwave. There is a television near the microwave and next to study desk 2. Moreover, there are two cupboard separating bed 1 and bed 2.</em> --&gt;<strong><em>Positioned in the upper left corner of the room is a bathroom, followed by a table and chairs. Adjacent to these, there is a kitchen area equipped with a sink, stove, and microwave. A television is located near the microwave, next to study desk 2. Additionally, two cupboards separate bed 1 and bed 2.</em></strong></p><p>In the room with the price for $200/week, the width of the room is reduced from 4 meters to 2 meters. There is just a bed and a study desk in the room. F<mark>urniture s</mark>uch as <mark>table and chairs, bookshelf, cupboard are disappeared</mark>. There also has a bathroom in the same location as the room priced at $350 and a kitchen horizontally in front of the bathroom. The kitchen utensils are similar to room 1.</p><p><strong><mark>6.0</mark></strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-08 06:08:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>DIEM KHUE - TASK 1.</title>
         <author>9mcwcky5cr</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3021746793</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>The plans illustrate the difference between two kinds of student rooms in an Australian university, single room and double room.&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>Overall, it can be clearly seen that there is a gap in prices and size between t<mark>he two rooms.</mark> Moreover, the student room for two people is also provided with more essential pieces of furniture.</p><p><br></p><p>Specifically, paying 350 dollars per week, two students share a room that is 4 meters in width and 6 meters in length. There are two pairs of beds and study desks in the room, which are located beside the window and separated by 2 cupboards. A bathroom is situated in the top left corner of the room. In addition, on the right side of the door is a kitchen including a microwave, sink, and stove. A bookshelf is arranged between the bathroom and the first study desk, which sits opposite the table and chairs. Besides, a television is in the middle of the second study desk and the kitchen.</p><p><br></p><p>Turning to the single room, it costs 200 per week for rent with an area of 2.5 meters wide and 6 meters long. While the bathroom is placed in the same position as the former room, the kitchen is rotated horizontally. In the top right corner of the room, beside the window, there is a bed and a study desk. Situated opposite the study desk is a television.</p><p><strong><mark>NO COMPARISON!</mark></strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-08 06:29:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>NgMinh Task 2</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3021760411</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Along with the development of society, there are more and more people suffering from many types of illness and disease. It is said that<s><mark> in order</mark></s> to improve this issue, more attention should be paid to solving environmental and housing problems. From my perspective, I completely agree with the statement for the following reasons.</p><p><br></p><p>Firstly, environmental pollution is one of the main factors causing such a huge amount of severe diseases among people. Air pollution can lead to many respiratory diseases; Water pollution can result in skin-related diseases and noise pollution can cause a lot of mental problems. Additionally, their illness can also become more severe when they access <strong>these--&gt; THIS </strong>environmental pollution on such a daily basis. Thus we can <s><mark>absolutely</mark></s> conclude that people’s health status can be decided by the quality of their living environment. Therefore, when the environment is kept clean, citizens’ health can be positively improved.</p><p><br></p><p>Secondly, housing problems can also be a liability to many infectious diseases. It is true that when a lot of people live together, there are many amenities that they have to use publicly such as toilets or kitchens. Additionally, it is these places that cause the spread of harmful bacteria, which can threaten people’s health. Furthermore, when using public utilities, people may not be aware of maintaining their public hygiene, which means that they can also suffer from sanitation-related diseases.</p><p><br></p><p>In conclusion, I do believe that environmental contamination and housing issues are two main causes resulting in many diseases among residents. Therefore, the government should pay more attention to these problems to guarantee people’s health.</p><p><strong><mark>VERY GOOD!</mark></strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-08 07:23:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Đạt T1 industrial site redevelop 20/6/24</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given chart illustrates provisional innovations to an industrial site.</p><p><br></p><p>Generally seen, the whole producing complex was projected to be turned into a residential area where buildings took up more space.</p><p><br></p><p> On the side by Toe Lane where parking area was located, a series of houses, including a 3-bedroom one and a 4-bedroom one, was planned to be constructed. 3 other houses with 2 bedrooms each and communal gardens might lay along Chimney Road where 'entrance and reception' unit was relevant.</p><p><br></p><p> To the Southern and Eastern side of the current complex, the factory, storage and offices might be swept away, making room for  a newfangled parking area, apartment and only parking garages laying along Swallow street. The aforementioned innovative buildings still end up separated enough from each other to form private roads.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-20 07:21:11 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Thu Phuong task 1 (20/6/24)</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3033254039</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given map provides information about the idea of <mark>remaking</mark> an industrial zone. <mark>(--&gt; The given map provides information about the proposed redevelopment of an industrial zone.)</mark><br><em>In general, this place will change considerably, and especially the workplace will be replaced by households, trees, and<mark> infrastructure.?????????????</mark><br>At present, the industrial area is surrounded by Chimney Road, Toe Lane, Pie Walk, and Swallow Street. <s><mark>The </mark></s>workers access the place through the entrance and reception, which are located on Chimney Road. On the west side, there is a parking <mark>AREA</mark> where staff can park their vehicles. In the south is the office building, and the canteen also lies in this building. On the left of the building is the storage, whereas the factory lies to the west of the map. And the yard is in the middle.&nbsp;<br>In the future, the entrance, reception, and yard will be replaced by three 2-bedroom houses and a communal garden enclosed by three private roads. Moreover, both of the parking and storage on the west side will be removed, making way for a 3-bedroom house and a 4-bedroom house. T<mark>he factory and the building will be </mark></em><strong><em><mark>broken down</mark></em></strong><em> in order to build an apartment with a parking area and parking garages, respectively.</em>&nbsp;</p><p><mark>6.0 +</mark></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-20 07:48:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Thùy Dương (20/6) </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3033254102</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given pictures illustrate the current layout of an industrial zone and a proposal for its development in the following years. </p><p><br/></p><p>As an overview, it is apparent that the site is likely to undergo a significant modification, <mark>changing from AN industry to </mark><strong><em><mark>accomodations</mark></em></strong><em><mark> </mark></em><mark>while all paths surrounding will still remain unchanged.  --&gt; </mark><strong><em>changing from an industrial area to a residential one while all surrounding roads will remain unchanged.</em></strong></p><p><br/></p><p>Looking closely at the design at present, it can be seen that there is a big yard in the center of this location. To the north of this yard, the industrial site is furnished with an entrance and reception area while two rows of six offices and a canteen are seen on the southern side, w<mark>hich are ????????</mark>between a factory and a storage on the right and left-hand side, respectively. Additionally, in the west of this place, there is a parking zone <mark>above the storage</mark>. </p><p><br/></p><p>T<mark>uring</mark> to <mark>the remaining map</mark>, it is clear that all the previous areas will be demolished in order to make room for a new housing development. In the center, there will be a new accommodation with three 2 bedroom houses and communal gardens, surrounding by new private roads. Moreover, a parking gar<mark>ages a</mark>rea will be constructed <mark>to</mark> the south of this housing whereas along side of it, there will be two regions parallel to each other. Particularly, <mark>3 bedroom house and 4 bedroom</mark> are anticipated to<mark> built i</mark>n the western side while opposite to this zone, a<mark> parking area and an apartment are likely to constructed. </mark></p><p><mark>6.0</mark></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-20 07:48:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hân Võ task 1 (20/6/24)</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/9mcwcky5cr/pzt4ebt5f8fleret/wish/3033261864</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>The maps illustrate a scheme for the renewal of an industrial site which transforms into urban housing. <mark>(--&gt; The maps illustrate a plan to redevelop an industrial site into an urban housing area.)</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>Generally, <mark>wards--&gt; AREAS </mark>in the industrial zone are changed by others to be <mark>proper/ SUITABLE</mark> for new housing. The highlight of developmental dwelling, greenery, and traffic led to the disappearance of work sites.</p><p><br/></p><p>It can be seen clearly that in the simulation of the industrial site at the pre<mark>sent. Four roads include Chimney Road, Pie Walk, Swallow Street, and Toe Lane.</mark> However, workers <mark>just </mark>can go inside via <mark>entrance and receptio</mark>n on Chimney Road in the North. Additionally, they can park their car in the parking spot that<mark> put</mark> in the west, and the storage area is located directly <mark>below. </mark>On the map, an office building and a canteen are in the south, next to the storage. In the middle site, there is a yard.</p><p><br/></p><p>After redeveloping into new housing, <mark>just </mark>four surrounding roads, which are still unchangeable in <mark>a</mark> development plan. Nevertheless, the parking lot and the storage space will be <mark>instead of 3-bedroom and 4-bedroom houses</mark>. Moreover, the entrance, reception, and yard will be replaced by three 2-bedroom houses, communal gardens and <strong>it border</strong> with three private roads. <mark>Final, </mark>the factory and the office building will be turned <mark>to</mark> parking area, apartment, and <mark>a </mark>parking g<mark>arages that is</mark> opposite the communal gardens.</p><p><strong><mark>5.5-6.0</mark></strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-20 07:56:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Bảo Hân task 1 (20/6)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The maps depict an industrial zone in its present day and a plan for ITS future development. </p><p><br/></p><p>Generally, it is evident that the whole site will tend to be more residential due to the mushrooming construction of new housings. T<mark>his progress will be made mostly in the north and west side.  --&gt; The north and west sides will see the bulk of this advancement.</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>Currently, the industrial area is enclosed with Chimney Road, Pie Walk, Swallow Street and Toe Lane. On the north side of the zone, <strong>there is only an entrance and reception while the opposite side is fulfilled <mark>of--&gt; WITH</mark> numerous offices, a canteen and a storage.<em><mark>--&gt;</mark> The other half is occupied by several offices, a canteen, and storage, with just an entrance and reception</em>. </strong>In the new plan, three 2-bedroom houses will be built up along the Chimney Road where the original entrance is, while parking garages will replace the offices completely. Also, <mark>time witness a striking transformation to the centre of the area, where a large yard will give way to communal gardens and three private roads surrounding. </mark></p><p><br/></p><p>Regarding to further changes, the designated parking area will<mark> br</mark> recolated from the west to the northeast corner of the site. This development combining with the erection of<mark> an new apartment beside</mark> will utterly substitute for the existing factory. Moreover, a 3-bedroom house and 4 -bedroom house will be soonly constructed at the expense of the old parking. </p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The maps illustrate the new design of an industrial zone in the future.</p><p><br/></p><p>In general, this industrial area will witness a range of changes during the process of transforming into A residential area, <mark>except the surrounding roads will remain</mark>.</p><p><br/></p><p>We can see from the maps that the offices and canteen in the south are going to be relocated with parking garages. The area where the factory<mark> lay???????-&gt; IS LOCATED</mark> will be expanded to the north <strong><mark>with parking area and an apartment--&gt; </mark></strong>t<strong><em>o include a parking area and an apartment..</em></strong></p><p><br/></p><p>It is<mark> clearly th</mark>at the rest of the industrial site will be <mark>constructed-&gt; DEVELOPED</mark> for accommodation. In detail, A residential area with 3 bedroom<mark>s hou</mark>se and 4 bedroom<mark>s </mark>house in order from north to south, <strong><mark>having a similar size with the apartment area, will take the place of the parking and storage.</mark> <mark>The central and northern zone will be renewed with three houses including two bedrooms and a communal gardens. Additionally, the surrounding of this new construction is the private roads.--&gt; </mark></strong><em>will replace the current parking and storage areas. The central and northern zones will be renewed with three 2-bedroom houses and a communal garden. Additionally, the new construction will be surrounded by private roads.</em></p><p><mark>5.5-6.0</mark></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-20 08:01:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The illustrations describe <mark>a rebuilding proposal for an industrial construction.</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>Overall, the construction is redeveloped to be an apartment block which will contain more living facilities.</p><p><br/></p><p>According to the first map,THE main entrance and reception is located in northern side of the construction. In the western area, there is a parking site which is on the left of the middle yard. In the south of parking site, a storage place is built. Factory, which is nearly the biggest area, is constructed in eastern side. <mark>Between storage place and factory</mark>, there is a complex of six offices and one canteen.</p><p><br/></p><p>On the other hand, in new housing proposal, a block of 2 bedroom houses and communal gardens which will be surrounded by private roads will replace the entrance as well as the middle yard. In southern side, parking garages will be built instead of office area. On the right of garages, there will be another parking site and an apartment. A block of 3 bedroom house and 4 bedroom house which has the same area with eastern building will be located in the west of the construction.</p><p>VIẾT LẠI NHA EM VÌ TOÀN BỘ CÂU ĐƠN!</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-20 08:11:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The maps illustrate a plan to renovate an industrial zone INto <s><mark>a</mark></s> new housing.</p><p><br/></p><p>In general, the industrial area is estimated to pass significant changes. Most of the industrial facilities are replaced by houses.</p><p><br/></p><p>In the north of the site, an entrance and reception lobby is located on Chimney Road, which is planned to be converted into a residential area including a trio of 2 bedroom houses and a communal garden. In addition, siting on the right-hand side of the zone, the factory is arranged to be rebuilt into an apartment and a parking area next to the Pie Walk. Specifically, the park which is located in the middle of the area is going to be demolished.</p><p><br/></p><p>Turning to the other innovation, the parking and storage located on the West side are going to be rebuilt to a 3 bedroom house and a 4 bedroom house. Moreover, the building of offices and a canteen in the South is going to be converted to parking garages. Furthermore, private roads are arranged to be constructed between areas and buildings.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-20 08:11:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given maps <mark>shed light on a proposal </mark>for a<mark>n industrial site reconstruction project.</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>Overall, the industrial site will be rebuilt to be a new housing area, and there will be more facilities such as <mark>bedroom house and apartment</mark> for <mark>people living.</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>According to the graph, the yard in THE industrial site will be narrowed and will become a private road. In detail, on the north side, the entrance and reception will be replaced by three two-bedroom houses with communal gardens. Moreover, on the south side, <mark>it will appear a parking garage</mark><s><mark>s</mark></s> which is currently THE LOCATION OF an office area.</p><p><br/></p><p>On the left side of the map, pa<mark>rking space and storage will transform</mark> into a block of flats, and also the factory on the right side <mark>in</mark> the moment will be altered <mark>by parking area</mark> and an apartment. Finally, the main road surrounds  those buildings will not be redeveloped and still remain the same as now.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-20 08:13:52 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The maps illustrate a current industrial park and its new changes in the future.</p><p>Overall, the industrial estate is gradually becoming a residential area due to the appearance of a lot of accomodation.</p><p>At present, the industrial site is surrounded by Chimney Road in the North, Toe Lane in the West, Swallow Street in the South and Pie Walk in the East. There are <mark>an entrance and reception</mark> in the North of the map. People can park on the West side.<mark> Below</mark> the parking lot is the South side of this industrial park, t<mark>here is a storag</mark>e. Additionally, offices and a canteen are located between the storage and a factory in the East. There is also a yard in the middle of the industrial site.</p><p>In the development plan, only the surrounding roads have no change. The entrance and reception are removed and replaced with three b<mark>eadroom</mark> house <mark>2</mark> and communal gardens. They are surrounded by three private roads. The parking lot on the West side is changed<mark> to</mark> b<mark>eadroom house 3 and beadroom house 4</mark>. Besides, the storage, offices and canteen are <mark>also rejected for the appearan</mark>ce of parking garages. In the East, the factory is demolished and <mark>make way </mark>for a parking area and an apartment.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-20 08:59:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p> The maps illustrate an industrial area at present and a new development plan for this site.</p><p> Overall, the industrial site will be changed alternatively with <mark>more new housing.</mark></p><p> It is clear that, the factory will be replaced by a modern apartment on the south of Pie Walk road. Taking advantage of the large land on the north of this street, a parking area will be built there .</p><p> It is noticeable that the entrance and reception, which ARE located in Chimney road will be reconstructed, <mark>in stead of, 2 bedroom houses will be developed.</mark> In the centre of this land, <mark>commual gardens w</mark>ill be structured on the position of old yard. Furthermore, on Tone Lane street, 3 bedroom house and 4 bedroom house will replace <mark>parking and storage.</mark> Moreover, the rows of offices and carteen will be replaced by parking garages. There will be many private roads around 2 bedroom houses and their communal gardens.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-20 09:06:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Thuỳ Dương - task 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>In this modern era, it is undeniable that traveling<strong><mark> through</mark></strong> space has become a reality in some cases, which could lead to a development of space tourism in the future. Despite some potential drawbacks, I believe that it is a positive growth due to several factors that will be elaborated in this essay.</p><p><br/></p><p>There has been a<mark> great deal of disadvantages</mark> stemming from space toursim. First of all, on the environmental level, this activity may contribute to the air pollution, causing global warming around the world. It is due to the fact that the manufacture of spacecraft could result in carbon emissions which are extremely harmful to the environment and challenging to control. Furthermore, space tourism also poses a serious threat <mark>on--&gt; TO</mark> people’s lives. When having an exploration of outer space, travelers may cope with injuries or even fatalities as well<mark> as damage or loss of the spacecraft. &nbsp;</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>Despite the aforementioned negatives, space travel is a positive development for various reasons. First and foremost, <strong><mark>the exploration of outer space has brought valuable scientific knowledge--&gt; </mark></strong><mark>space exploration brings valuable scientific knowledge</mark>, benefiting the general public. Indeed, space travel allows tourists to get access to innovative resources and discoveries so that they can gain deeper understanding about the origin of life, the solar system as well as the universe, leading to the breakthroughs in the industry of space. Another benefit is that space tourism might incentivize the economic growth. It is attributed to the fact that when traveling through space has developed, there have been more and more private companies investing in this field, thus they could make substantial profit, contributing to the governments’ budget.</p><p><br/></p><p>In conclusion, although space tourism might face considerable challenges and risks, including environmental pollution and tourists’ safety, I hold the view that beneficial aspects such as economic growth and precious experience are more significant.</p><p>6.5</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-22 05:54:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>It is a common belief that business hours should be reduced and workers should have their weekends lengthened. From my perspective, I partly agree with this opinion due to some pros and cons presented below.</p><p>On the one hand, there are two benefits of this situation that are the most noticeable. To begin with, reducing working hours provides employees with extra time off, allowing them to rest, recuperate and improve their work-life balance. For instance, workers can schedule meetings with friends or appointments with doctors that are otherwise difficult to fit into weekdays. By virtue of adequate relief from work-related stress and exertion, the mental well-being and health of those who are occupied can be boosted, leading to greater productivity, effectiveness and reduced absenteeism. In addition to this, the idea of having a three-day weekend and fewer working hours can be an appealing prospect for job seekers. Curtailing workdays during the week can become a selling point for some companies, as it can attract more applicants, providing companies with a larger pool of candidates when employing.</p><p>On the other hand, shortening workdays and providing workers with longer periods of relaxation is not without its drawbacks. One of them is the risk of not completing all work, which could exacerbate multiple problems. Once employees fall behind, it can be challenging for them to catch up, which potentially restrains output and costs organisations more money, particularly if additional staff are needed to handle the workload. Furthermore, in a worst-case scenario, missing deadlines may create conflicts between businesses and key stakeholders, including their customers, leading to potential losses in client relationships. Another problem is that team bonding time can be diminished on the grounds that more working time has to be devoted to completing the same amount of work as before. This means there may be fewer opportunities for employees to have team meetings with their coworkers or engage in casual interactions that promote team development. Consequently, the absence of these teamwork activities can cause worse cohesion and collaboration within the workforce, resulting in decreased productivity and a less united work environment.</p><p>In conclusion, while reducing working hours and extending workers' weekends can offer several advantages, it also presents some challenges that should be taken into consideration. From my perspective, balancing these pros and cons is crucial for enterprises who consider such changes.</p><p>&nbsp;7.0</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-27 15:02:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The maps illustrate the difference between the Porth Harbor in 2000 and <mark>its version nowadays.</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>Overall, it can be clearly seen that the harbor has witnessed slight changes in terms of <s>the</s> facilities.</p><p><br/></p><p>In the past, on the north Public beach, only one dock was located next to the passenger ferries. After over 2 decades, one more dock is constructed beside the old one. In addition, the two car parks on the west side still remain today, while the entrance to the beneath one has been moved from the main road to the bottom road. Furthermore, a new shower<mark>s and toilets </mark>area has been erected roughly between the two car parks.</p><p><br/></p><p>The marina on the right-hand corner of the top car park and the fishing boats on the southwest side of the harbor have swapped positions for each other. <mark>Next to the lifeboat situated along the bottom road, cafes and shops have been built</mark>. Moreover, the harbor has seen the erection of a hotel, replacing the old castle. Additionally, the public beach on the south has been transformed into a private beach for the hotel only.</p><p>6.5</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-29 03:59:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend.</strong></p><p><strong>Do you agree or disagree?</strong></p><p><br></p><p>Along with the development of society, there are more and more people who work really hard for their living. It is said that working hours should be reduced and workers should have more break time as well. From my perspective, I completely agree with the statement for following reasons.</p><p><br></p><p>The primary reason that should be mentioned is that workers’ mental health can be dramatically improved. It is true that in many developing countries, due to hectic and severe working schedules, many workers can suffer from such lots of mental-related diseases or have intention of suiciding. Therefore, by reducing working days, these workers can have more time to relax and get away from stressful stuffs. This can definitely better workers’ mental health, then, job productivity can be improved as well.</p><p><br></p><p>The next vital reason is that money flow will also be maintained relentlessly. It is true that in some nations, there are a huge numbers of labours who spend mostly the whole of their youth to earn a lot of money and to contribute for their countries’ development and spending time for personal demands. From my point of view, this phenomenon will exacerbate the nations’ economy, especially the tourism as it is these busy workers thay have a lot of money, however, even no freetime to travel at all. Thus, providing a longer weekend can also enhance the countries’ economy because of the strong and continuous flow of money.</p><p><br></p><p>In conclusion, I do believe that shortening working week will definitely bring both workforce and countries a lot of longterm benefits.</p><p><br></p><p>(259 words)</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-29 07:28:02 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>9mcwcky5cr</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>𝓣𝓱𝓮 𝔀𝓸𝓻𝓴𝓲𝓷𝓰 𝔀𝓮𝓮𝓴 𝓼𝓱𝓸𝓾𝓵𝓭 𝓫𝓮 𝓼𝓱𝓸𝓻𝓽𝓮𝓻 𝓪𝓷𝓭 𝔀𝓸𝓻𝓴𝓮𝓻𝓼 𝓼𝓱𝓸𝓾𝓵𝓭 𝓱𝓪𝓿𝓮 𝓪 𝓵𝓸𝓷𝓰𝓮𝓻 𝔀𝓮𝓮𝓴𝓮𝓷𝓭.</p><p>𝓓𝓸 𝔂𝓸𝓾 𝓪𝓰𝓻𝓮𝓮 𝓸𝓻 𝓭𝓲𝓼𝓪𝓰𝓻𝓮𝓮?  </p><p><br></p><p>The fast-paced world obliges humans to run as fast as possible. However, some people suggest shortening the workweek and lengthening weekends for workers. In my own view, I completely disagree with the above statement.</p><p><br></p><p>First of all, it can have such potential impacts on the development of the whole world. Cutting down hours can lead to the loss of productivity and unqualified products. The hurt of work time can make the process of producing last longer, which even causes workers to burn out and discourages them. Moreover, the delay and decline in work pace might be a challenge to the growth of all fields.</p><p><br></p><p>Second, this reduction in the workweek may affect directly employees’ income. Fewer days of work can be a momentary gratification for employees in both physical and mental health. However, the shorter the workweek is, the fewer benefits and salary the agent receives. Obviously, people cannot get paid the same salary while their contribution is reduced, which is completely an injustice to the companies.</p><p><br></p><p>In conclusion, for the aforementioned elements, I definitely believe that the idea of shortening the workweek is unsuitable for people in this kind of world where they must work so hard to achieve great things.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-29 07:30:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><mark>The fewer work weeks, the more days off. </mark><strong><mark>It's an opinion</mark></strong><mark> that I completely agree with for several reasons.</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>First of all, people make money to <mark>cover life and enjoy.</mark> They cannot just be engrossed in <mark>work without having time to use</mark> the<mark> money they earn to relax and upgrade themselves. They also have to spend time with family. That contributes to making the love between family members stronger and society will reduce the number of broken marriages. </mark>Moreover, society is increasingly developing, so people become hu<mark>rried and live faster. </mark>H<mark>aving more time will also give people the opportunity to see more of the world around them.</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>Secondly, a longer weekend helps <mark>human’s physical and mental health a lot.</mark> After stressful working hours, the human body and mind need a certain amount of time to relax and recover. In addition to work, they also have many pressures in life that need to be resolved. If you get enough rest, it will provide enough energy for people to work hard and bring high productivity. As a result, it helps the country’s economy develop more.</p><p><br/></p><p>In conclusion, reducing time for working has many benefits and should be considered and implemented by the government.</p><p><strong><mark>The idea of fewer work weeks resulting in more days off is one that I completely agree with for several reasons.</mark></strong></p><p><strong><mark>First of all, people work to earn money to support their lives and enjoy themselves. They cannot be solely engrossed in work without having time to spend the money they earn on relaxation and personal development. Additionally, spending time with family strengthens familial bonds and can reduce the number of broken marriages in society. As society develops, people become increasingly hurried and live faster-paced lives. More free time allows individuals to appreciate the world around them and lead more balanced lives.</mark></strong></p><p><strong><mark>Secondly, a longer weekend significantly benefits both physical and mental health. After stressful working hours, the human body and mind require adequate time to relax and recover. Besides work, people face various life pressures that need to be addressed. Sufficient rest provides the necessary energy for people to work efficiently and achieve high productivity, ultimately contributing to the country's economic growth.</mark></strong></p><p><strong><mark>In conclusion, reducing working hours has numerous benefits and should be seriously considered and implemented by the government.</mark></strong></p><p>5.5.-6.0</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-29 07:36:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hân Nguyễn - task 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>In this money-oriented society, people are tackling with numerous levels of stress. Therefore, some advocate that it is worth prolonging the weedkend time, and at the same time shortening the working hours. From my own perspective, I wholly agree with this statement based on some following feasible reasons. </p><p><br/></p><p>To begin with, this new agency can make a great progress to the employees. Shifting to a fewer days working can offer the workers some extra off days to spend for themselves and their families. Instead of immersing in dozens of papers or documents, they are now given time to schedule other appoinments for their own life, such as hanging out with friends or a visit to doctors, which are used to be  problematic to fit in during weektime. Having that innovation, as a result, they can escape from a sucessions of days fulling with donkey work and hence improve a work-life balance that can greatly influences on the employees's statisfactions and also their well-being. </p><p><br/></p><p>Additionally, not only do the workers gain benefit thanks to this advancement but also the companies. Particularly, cutting down the office hours can increase the productivity. Since employees know they need their work done in less days, they are forced to work out as fastly as impossible. In other words, they should learn to prioritize their work and stimutaneously, diminish the wasting time to make the greatest effort for their work. Thus, it can encourage workers to get creative with time rather than feeling burn out and lose motivation due to overwork.</p><p><br/></p><p>To conclude, I do believe that reducing working hours can utterly bring long-term profits for the hired workers and the whole business </p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-29 07:42:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>Task 2: 29/6/24</strong></p><p><br/></p><p>In this hustle and bustle , the amount of work of workers is increasing to be able to better serve the overall process. However, it is argued that they should have more holidays by cutting down working days. This essay will support that reducing the working hours and extending the weekend is beneficial.</p><p><br/></p><p>To begin with, improving the well-being of staffs is one of the most primary advantages. This is because the less work the workers have, the less pressure they gain which may cause some physical health problems affecting their attendance. Therefore, it fees up more time for themseleves to boost their overall health. If the working hours are reduced, the workers can spend their time on exercising and utilizing the time for their family as well as their personal development. Consequently, it creates a better mental and physical health that helps the business cut down on absenteeism and work with higher productivity.</p><p><br/></p><p>Another reason why I am in agreement with this perspective is that both employees and employers can save money. Firstly, inspite of remaining the same salary and benefits costs with a shorter work week, companies can lessen some operating costs such as electricity and water consumption. Regarding to workers, especially for those who work far from home can enjoy a significant financial perk. Without commuting to work, employees do not have to spend money on gas or food during the day.&nbsp; As a result, this satisfies for not only the boss but also the staff.</p><p><br/></p><p>In short, I believe that their should be more leisure time and extended weekend for workers so that they can take care of themselves and create more cost efficient for both employees and employers.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Bâng Task 2 29/06 </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br></p><p>In today world, there are more and more labourers are significantly under pressure of overworking. Therefore, some people argue that it is better for workers to spend more time relaxing with a longer weekend. In my personal viewpoint, i strongly agree with this statement. </p><p><br></p><p>On the one hand, many businesses force their employees to work in extreme schedule in other to gain higher productivity. Particularly, labourers must work overtime, even at the weekend. However, this phenomenon definitely negatively impact workers' physical and mental health. When overworking, they may not have enough time for enjoying their own life as well as relaxing. In some cases, inspite of working hard, employees probably receive low salaries which are not worthy for their effort.</p><p><br></p><p>On the other hand, as labourers' performance dramatically depends on their healthiness, workers may be more productive when having longer weekend. It enables them to take a rest and look after their well-being. Workers will have time for relaxing themselves, playing sports, reading books, hanging out with families, for instance. Backing to work with good condition, employees will be more comfortable which is able to contribute to their effective performances.</p><p><br></p><p>In conclusion, I believe that working week should be minimized and employees need to have a longer time off. </p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-29 07:43:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>It is not difficult to come across articles that pose the view whether the working week should be reduced and employees should have a longer weekend. In my opinion, I firmly agree because it is beneficial to workers.</p><p>To begin with, longer weekend is equivalent to a healthy work-life balance which is critical to wage earners' well-being. Extended weekends can facilitate better integration between work and personal responsibilities. It can allow employees to schedule personal appointments, spend more time with beloved ones, and participate in community activities without sacrificing their work commitments. A balanced life results in more productive  employees who are more engaged and committed to their employment when Monday comes.</p><p><br></p><p>Another reason for my agreement is that fewer working days in a week can potentially reduce commuting and energy consumption, resulting in a positive environmental impact. Apparently, employees will spend one or two day less per week commuting to their place of work if they have a four or five day workweek,resulting in less greenhouse gas emissions given the majority of wage earner getting access to work. Therefore, it can lead to fewer vehicles on the road, decreased traffic congestion, and lower carbon.</p><p><br></p><p>In conclusion,extended weekend can enhance many aspects, including subjective and objective aspects.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-06-29 07:52:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?</strong></p><p><br></p><p>In our modern society, it is argued that working hours should be declined, along with a longer weekend for workers. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement for the following reasons which will be allocated in this essay. </p><p><br></p><p>On the one hand, there are several factors to shed light on why employees should not have more days off. One of the most considerable culprits is the economic downturn. It is attributed to the fact that a scarcity in workers just for short time interrupts the whole process, leading to a lack of time management, inaccuracy in work, thus it exerts a profound impact on the overall productivity, potentially harming the economy and business profitability. Moreover, the relationships among workers may be affected. Indeed, shortening the working week means there will be fewer opportunities for them to strengthen their bond through some activities, forming a gap in their relationships. </p><p><br></p><p>On the other hand, providing workers with more time of relaxation can be beneficial because of a variety of reasons. First and foremost, there will be an improvement in employees' creativity skill. It is due to the fact that when working under pressure for long hours, they may become stressful and their brains might not be effectively operated. Therefore, a shorter working week and a longer weekend allows them to take a rest so that they concentrate their minds which makes them work and create more innovative ideas. Another culprit can be seen is that employees' mental health can be boosted. It is true that with the hectic schedule, many workers may suffer from some diseases related to their health. Therefore, they should have a longer period of retiring in order to relax and enjoy themselves which can improve their mental health, enhancing their employability skills for productivity improvement. </p><p><br></p><p>In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks of shortening the working days in employees, I hold the belief that the potential benefits for both employees and employers are undeniable through reducing employee stress, improving mental health, and boosting creativity.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Lê Ngọc Bảo Hân task 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Many people argue that workers should have more leisure time and reduce the working week. I completely agree with this view because of the following reasons.</p><p><br></p><p>There are two main reasons why the workweek ought to be reduced. One reason is to enhance the productivity of their work. Some people think that diminishing the time of working can affect work performance. However, when they have less time to spend working, they can prioritize the work tasks more effectively, concentrating on the true matters to tackle with them. Hence, increasing their efficiency and managing their working time. Furthermore, the companies and the employees can have positive aspects from this method. The companies may use less energy of water and electricity because of shorter working and fewer days of commuting for all employees cuts down on carbon emissions.</p><p>It leads to eco-friendliness and brings many benefits to the environment.</p><p><br></p><p>In terms of having longer weekends for workers, employees can have extra time to spend on their families and personal activities such as going to see a doctor or having friend meetings after hard working weeks. Having that flexible working time can improve work-life balance, which improves their well-being. In addition, less time spend on work means less stress because stress can cause issues of physical health and mental health that impact their performance. Having a physically and psychologically fit workforce reduces pressures and can boost worker’s productivity remarkably</p><p><br></p><p>In conclusion, it seems to me that the advantages of this opinion are more significant than the disadvantages. I strongly believe that businesses should create more opportunities for employees to make better workplace conditions</p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Thu Phương task 2 (29/6/24)</title>
         <author>phuong13052008</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Many people believe that the companies should reduce the working time in the week for the staff instead of increasing the days of rest. In my perspective, I agree with this idea for some particular reasons.</p><p>First of all, reducing the working week will support worker work-life balance. When companies give their employees long days-off, they will have more opportunities to connect with their families, which might help them feel less stressed and happier. The good emotions will boost them to work hard and productive, which lead to increased production for the businesses. Moreover, this policy can improve job satisfaction and employee loyalty, and then they will stay longer with companies so that the cost of hiring will decrease and</p><p>Besides that, the longer weekend also helps the employees ensure their health is in good condition. The businesses should provide their staff with enough time to take a break rather than exploit labor power, which can have a bad influence on their health. For example, we can see the different conditions between the who work six days a week and those who work only four days per week. And absolutely, employees who have a longer weekend will suffer less from pressure and the rate of exhaustion will decrease considerably because they have more time to boost their overall health and some personal development. Therefore, when they get back to work, the workers are more satisfied with their jobs which helps them work with productively.</p><p>In conclusion, the businesses should consider giving more days-off for their personnel because of some advantages mentioned.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Thuy Duong (Cam 19 task 1)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The provided pictures give a detailed comparison in terms of the layout of Porth Harbour from 2000 to the present.&nbsp;</p><p><br/></p><p>As an overview, it can be seen that the harbour has undergone significant modifications while several amenities have remained unchanged.</p><p><br/></p><p>Looking closely at the maps, it is apparent that <mark>in on the </mark>northern side of the harbour, the dock has been redesigned with <mark>the--&gt; an</mark> additional station, increasing the capacity for passenger ferries whereas no changes have been made to the public beach. Meanwhile, there has been an exchange in the p<mark>ostion</mark> of the regions for fishing boats and marina, re<mark>placing each other</mark> in the northwest and southwest.</p><p><br/></p><p>In addition to this area, &nbsp;the entrance of the car park is now directly connected to the main road with the extra showers and toilets wh<mark>ich mak</mark>e this zone similar to the smaller one on the northern side. Turning to the southeast, cafes and shops have also been constructed between the lifeboat and private yachts. The disused castle with the public beach on the left-hand side has been converted into a hotel and private beach for customers along with a connecting path from the road.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-07-02 02:45:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Thảo Ly -task 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p> Having a shorter working week is an issue which generates a great deal of heated debate, with some supporters said that&nbsp; it can improve work performance and contribute to mental health. However, some opponents claimed that employees could accomplish more work if they worked extra days per week. From my perspective, I partly agree with this statement.</p><p> On the one hand, workers should have additional weekend days bring a variety of merits that is beneficial for employees . If people have a longer weekend, they can have more time to take care of themselves and their families. Furthermore, extended weekend days allow workers to release relax after hard working days, thereby allowing them to work more effectively and productively.</p><p> On the other hand, when workers have more working days, they can finish more tasks, therefore contributing to the development of their business.&nbsp; Hardworking employees in the company might earn higher salaries if they work extra days to support their company . Moreover, people can use services more frequently when workers put in more days at work, which boosts the growth of the economy as a whole.</p><p> Taking all these points into consideration, a short working week brings many advantages for people. However, workers should work more days per week in order to enhance the development of the economy.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-07-02 03:18:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>DIEM KHUE - TASK 1.</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The circulation diagram illustrates the way in which ethanol - a kind of biofuel is created.</p><p><br></p><p>In general, the process includes 9 steps beginning with growing plants and ending in p<mark>roducing carbon dioxide</mark>.</p><p><br></p><p>First of all, plants and trees <mark>develop</mark> by absorbing energy such as sunlight and carbon dioxide. After that, they are harvested and transported to the next step which is pre-processing. Through the third step, plants are transformed into cellulose to be used in the processing stage.</p><p><br></p><p>T<mark>herefore, the process results in sugar</mark>, which is then mixed with microbes and t<mark>urns out to become ethanol</mark> - the final product. This organic compound is used as fuel for cars, trucks, and planes. The aforementioned vehicles dispose of carbon dioxide providing energy for plants.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Thuy Duong (Task 1 - 4/7)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given diagram illustrates the process of producing ethanol which is a type of biofuels.  </p><p><br/></p><p>As an overview, it can be seen that this cyclical process consists of several steps, beginning with energy from the sunlight and carbon dioxide and ending with the return of carbon dioxide to the atmosphere. </p><p><br/></p><p>Looking closely at the picture, it is apparent that the combination of sunlight and carbon dioxide create a kind of energy which is used to make plants and trees grow up. After that, these plants are harvested by tractors before being brought into a machine in order to transform into cellulose. </p><p><br/></p><p>This pre-processing stage leads to the processing one, using the cellulose so as to manufacture sugar molecules. Then, microbes are added to these molecules, resulting in ethanol production. Subsequently, ethanol is consumed by means of transport such as cars, trucks, and planes, which release carbon dioxide before being continually absorbed by plants and trees. </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-07-04 07:18:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given diagram illustrates the way in which ethanol, a type of biofuel, is made.</p><p>Overall, it can be seen that the manufacturing process of ethanol consists of several steps, starting with cultivating plants and trees and finishing with the creation of biofuel products. Ethanol then supersedes fossil fuels to supply gasoline for vehicles, reducing the amount of pollution.</p><p>First, trees and plants are grown in the environment with sufficient energy including sunlight and carbon dioxide. Then, they are collected for the following step of production called pre-processing. In this period of manufacturing, the harvested product is put into a machine that crushes it into strands of cellulose. Next, with the help of chemical substances, those strands of cellulose are further transformed into sugar molecules. After physical and chemical producing steps, sugar molecules are then treated biologically by adding microbes to finally create ethanol. Ethanol is then used as a source of fuel to power combustion engines like cars, planes and trucks. Those means of transport burn the ethanol, releasing carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Plants and trees then consume this, and the circulation begins again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-07-04 07:25:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>Task 1: 4/7/24</strong></p><p><br></p><p>The presented flow chart illustrates the distinct techniques for manufacturing ethanol&nbsp; through various stages.</p><p><br></p><p>As an overall statement, this kind of process consists of several steps, starting with growing plants and trees, and finishing with emitting carbon dioxide back into the environment.</p><p><br></p><p>First of all, before being collected for the next stage, plants and trees are grown in which enough sunlight and carbon dioxide. Following that, the harvested products will be cut into the cellulose through a machine, called pre-processing step. In the next stage, the processing step occurs where sugars are extracted from cellulose. Microbes are then added into the sugars to create ethanol.</p><p><br></p><p>Finally, ethanol will be served by many means of vehicle such as plane, truck or car for transporting purpose. After all, carbon dioxide from these transportation is released into the atmosphere and become the energy for plants and trees, then continuing the cycle.</p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given diagram indicates the process of generating biofuel from Carbon Dioxide.</p><p><br/></p><p>Overall,  the generation of ethanol from Carbon Dioxide appears to be a multi-stage process that begins with the Carbon Dioxide absorption of trees and ends with energy supplied for means of transport to serve the demands of commuting.</p><p><br/></p><p><mark>According to the illustration</mark>, the first stage begins with CO2 and sunlight taking part in the process of photosynthesis and growth of trees and plants. Cultivated products are then harvested and transferred to the next stage called pre-processing, where a dedicated machine is used to cut <s><mark>the</mark></s> organic products into pieces to engender an organic compound named cellulose. In the next stage, cellulose molecules, through chemical processes, will be broken down into sugar particles which are later added with microbes to generate ethanol. </p><p>Successively, ethanol is used as fuel supplied for vehicles such as cars, trucks, and airplanes. <mark>In the end of the process</mark>, these vehicles emit carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, which then becomes energy for vegetation again. <mark>The manufacture of ethanol goes back to the beginning and forms a cycle.</mark></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Thu Phuong task 1 (4/7/24)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given graph provides the information about how we ma<mark>nufacture</mark> the ethanol, one of the biofuels.</p><p><br/></p><p>Overall, w<mark>e need to go through </mark>six steps to produce this fuel, beginning with plan<mark>ting and harvesting th</mark>e trees and ending with the <mark>elimination </mark>of carbon dioxide from means of transportation.</p><p><br/></p><p>First of all, w<mark>e can not create this biofuel </mark>without planting the trees and then harvesting the growing trees which absorb sunlight and carbon dioxide from the environment. Next, the third step is that the leaves will be processed by a machine in order to produce the cellulose. And in the forth step, we use the cellulose to make up with some chemical substances in the <mark>laboratory</mark>. </p><p><br/></p><p>After the processing of the cellulose with materials, we will obtain an important material that is sugars. In the fifth step, th<mark>e ethanol is created by adding some microbes into the sugars. A</mark>nd finally, the carbon dioxide<mark> is removed into the </mark>environment  by cars, trucks or planes, etc and <mark>thanks to this step, the process will repeat again. </mark></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-07-04 07:29:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The diagram illustrates the method of making a certain biofuel called ethanol.</p><p><br/></p><p>In general, the ethanol-making process requires three main stages which are preparing fundamental materials for the production, producing ethanol through chemical reactions and putting ethanol into practice.</p><p><br/></p><p>At the first stage of the process, trees are planted and they grow up by absorbing necessary energy such as sunlight and carbon dioxide. Then, those grown trees are harvested and transferred to the factory for the pre-processing step.</p><p><br/></p><p>The next stage requires the crushed trees to be altered into cellulose and continuously participate in chemical processing in order to generate sugars. After that, adding microbes into sugars is the last step of producing ethanol. The ethanol is used for the transportation such as car, truck, plane and those vehicles emit the carbon dioxide into the environment. The trees absorb the carbon dioxide again and it becomes a circular process.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Ngọc task 1</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The given diagram illustrates the process of producing ethanol from grown vegetation products.</p><p><br></p><p>Generally, the production of ethanol biofuel goes through nine stages, beginning with harvesting plants and ending with providing fuel for vehicles.</p><p><br></p><p>At the first stage, plants and trees undergo the photosynthesis process, in which they use energy gained from sunlight and carbon dioxide to grow before being harvested for production. Next, they enter the pre-processing stage during which an organic compound called cellulose is created. Then, the resulting cellulose reacts with other chemicals and transforms into sugars.</p><p><br></p><p>After the chemical process, sugars are generated to enter the next important step, which is fermenting. There, microbes are added, and sugars are converted into ethanol. This ethanol is used as a kind of fuel to run vehicles such as cars, planes, or trucks. In the last stage, these vehicles burn ethanol and emit carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, which provides energy for plants and trees at the beginning of the cycle.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Nguyễn Hân - diagram (4/7)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The diagram depicts a production process of a biofuel named ethanol.</p><p><br/></p><p>Generally, it is evident that this man-made progression is carried out in 6 primary stages, beginning with planting trees and finishing with emissing carbon dioxide.</p><p><br/></p><p>At the beginning of the process, plants amd trees start growing up by absorbing energy such as light and CO2 gas by nature. Since they have reached their mature age, people then use agriculture machineries in order to harvest them. After that, the harvested products undergo a pre-processing stage when they are broken down into the simple sugar cellulose. Through several chemical processes, they will be fabricated into sugar cells. </p><p><br/></p><p>At the next stage of the production cycle, single-celled microbes are added to the aforementioned products to convert the sugar molecules into ethanol. This kind of biofuel will then be used a material to operate high-powered vehicles such as cars, planes. These means of transportation burn out the produced ethanol and soonly releasing carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which will be again imbibed by the plants. </p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-07-04 07:34:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wri task 1, LN Bảo Hân</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The diagram illustrates the process of producing biofuel called ethanol.</p><p><br/></p><p>Overall, the diagram involves<mark> 2 main levels</mark>, pre-processing and processing, 8 steps <mark>and </mark>beginning with growing plants and t<mark>rees endin</mark>g with releasing carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.</p><p><br/></p><p>According to the pre-proces<mark>sing level</mark>, in the fi<mark>rst step, plants</mark> and trees are cultivated in the natural environment. In addition, sunlight and carbon dioxide are energy which makes them grow. After that, plants and trees are harvested by specialized machines and prepared for the next stage, <mark>which </mark>is <mark>putting</mark> the harvested products into m<mark>achines </mark>to crush them to become cellulose.</p><p><br/></p><p>The next level is called processing, cellulose undergoes a physical and chemical step in which sugar is extracted and microbes are added in with sugars to create ethanol. <mark>In terms of eth</mark>anol, this kind of biofuel is used as <mark>a power f</mark>or vehicles, such as cars, planes, and trucks. Then, the vehicles emit carbon dioxide and waste into the atmosphere and make circulation.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Hân Võ task 1 4/07/24</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The diagram presents a process of how to produce ethanol. This is a type of biofuel.</p><p><br/></p><p>Generally, there are main factors from chemistry, biology, and physics to make ethanol. Then, ethanol is used as fossil fuel for vehicle without causing pollution.</p><p><br/></p><p>First of all, the six-stage process occurred. Starting with planting trees, they will absorb energy that includes sunlight, and carbon dioxide. This supports the growth of trees. When they get quality, people harvest them by machinery. Then, goods will be sent for pre-processing to prepare for the chemical stage and after undergoing that stage, they will become cellulose. With a chemical agent, cellulose will transform into sugar molecules.</p><p><br/></p><p>After these stages, the process continues with biological factors, and microbes are added to sugar into ethanol. This is used as fuel to power vehicles such as cars, trucks, and planes. These vehicles will eliminate carbon dioxide in the environment. And trees will absorb carbon dioxide from vehicles. Production of ethanol is a circular process.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The flowchart <mark>provides</mark> a breakdown of the process of a biofuel called ethanol <mark>is</mark> made.</p><p><br/></p><p>Overall, there are 8 main steps in the process of producing ethanol, beginning with growing plants and tree and ending when carbon dioxide is released by cars and thereby <mark>returned</mark> to the atmosphere.</p><p><br/></p><p>The process commences when plants and trees <mark>are grown in</mark> nature <mark>by sunlight and carbon dioxide before being harvested.</mark> After that, collected plants and trees are cruised into cellulose. At the following stage, cellulose is broken down into sugars after undergoin<mark>g some processing steps.</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>The process continues when microbes are added into sugars to create complete products. The final product, ethanol, is used for transportation. Carbon dioxide which is emitted back into the atmosphere is continually absorbed by plants and trees.??????</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The diagram illustrates the process to make ethanol, which is a biofuel.</p><p>Overall, there are three main steps to produce ethanol: pre-processing, processing and <mark>providing ethanol for various purposes.</mark></p><p>At the beginning, the trees and plants are cultivated with enough energy in form of sunlight and carbon dioxide. Then, people harvest them and put them in a machine to produce cellulose , <mark>which is called pre-processing.</mark> After that, this <mark>chemical go </mark>to the next stage of biofuel production <mark>to convert into sugars.</mark></p><p>The fo<mark>llowing step is that transforming microbes added in sugar to ethanol. This finished product can use as fuel for combustion engine of any vehicles, such as cars, trucks and planes. Th</mark>e vehicles burn up ethanol and release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, then the <mark>cycle restart </mark>when plants and trees absorb it .</p><p> </p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The process illustrates how ethanol is produced to provide fuel for transportation.</p><p><br/></p><p>As an overview, the production of ethanol has eight steps, beginning with planting trees, and finishing with <mark>generating vehicles.</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>First of all, plants and trees are grown i<mark>n the environment </mark>with sunlight and carbon dioxide, and then harvest them for the preparation of the next stages. Next, the harvested products will undergo a pre-processing proce<mark>ss to crush into </mark>cellulose. After that, people will use chemical methods to <mark>process</mark> <mark>those cellulose</mark> into sugar particles which are then added with microbes to produce ethanol.</p><p><br/></p><p>After producing ethanol, this biofuel<mark> will supply for var</mark>ious vehicles such as cars, trucks and planes for commuting and transportation demands. Finally, those vehicles will <mark>emmit </mark>carbon dioxide which is absorbed by plants and trees, <mark>then continuing the cycle.</mark></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Thuỳ Dương (task 2)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?</strong></p><p><br/></p><p>It is claimed that money plays a crucial role in our lives, including youngsters, thus they should prioritize saving for their future. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement for the following reasons which will be<mark> allocated</mark> in this essay. </p><p><br/></p><p>There are a variety of factors to shed light on why saving money is extremely essential. One of the most considerable reasons is a sense of security it can provide. It is attributable to the fact that money enables them to plan for the future, offering the safety in case of emergencies or unexpected life changes. To illustrate, no one can guess what will happen to their lives, such as suffering from severe health problems or losing the current job. Thus, building a saving can allow young adults to become financially secure at an earlier age and protect them against unpredictable situations. </p><p><br/></p><p>Moreover, individuals may become less dependent on others, for example families, friends, or even financial institutions. This independence results in greater personal freedom, offering them opportunities to make their own decisions without any financial barriers. In addition, people might earn profits by putting their money into a bank. Indeed, this type of saving can create a monthly spending budget to control their finances. Therefore, they will live independently and enjoy their lives with satisfaction and well-being both physically and mentally.</p><p><br/></p><p>In conclusion, it is of paramount importance for everyone to save money as it provides the feelings of security and independence as well as profits which allow them to enhance their quality of life and handle some possible problems. </p>]]></description>
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         <title>DIEM KHUE - TASK 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>𝓘𝓽 𝓲𝓼 𝓲𝓶𝓹𝓸𝓻𝓽𝓪𝓷𝓽 𝓯𝓸𝓻 𝓮𝓿𝓮𝓻𝔂𝓸𝓷𝓮, 𝓲𝓷𝓬𝓵𝓾𝓭𝓲𝓷𝓰 𝔂𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 𝓹𝓮𝓸𝓹𝓵𝓮, 𝓽𝓸 𝓼𝓪𝓿𝓮 𝓶𝓸𝓷𝓮𝔂 𝓯𝓸𝓻 𝓽𝓱𝓮𝓲𝓻 𝓯𝓾𝓽𝓾𝓻𝓮.</p><p>𝓣𝓸 𝔀𝓱𝓪𝓽 𝓮𝔁𝓽𝓮𝓷𝓽 𝓭𝓸 𝔂𝓸𝓾 𝓪𝓰𝓻𝓮𝓮 𝓸𝓻 𝓭𝓲𝓼𝓪𝓰𝓻𝓮𝓮 𝔀𝓲𝓽𝓱 𝓽𝓱𝓲𝓼 𝓼𝓽𝓪𝓽𝓮𝓶𝓮𝓷𝓽?</p><p><br/></p><p>With<mark>out money, humans cannot survive. T</mark>herefore, some people believe that saving money for the future plays such a vital role in everyone’s life. In my opinion, I completely agree with the above statement.</p><p>First of all, money needs to be prepared in advance for emergencies. Absolutely, <mark>problems relating money</mark> can appear unexpectedly and <mark>oblige people pouring cash</mark>. For instance, when people are ill, t<mark>he expense they have to pay for medical care is extremely huge, which is even greater than their available funds</mark>. Furthermore, during their time off, they cannot earn money to make up for <mark>lost money spent</mark>. Lying on the sickbed, many people have wrestled with money and even died of it. Thus, careful preparation is essential for erratic issues.</p><p>Second, saving habits lead people to a better life. Many a little makes a mickle. If people especially youth know how to save money correctly, such valuable possessions like a house and car are not hard to achieve at a young age. <mark>Moreover, savings provide people opportunities to step into much more beautiful lands with new relationships and lessons. </mark>Nowadays, creating a savings account is a suitable way for people since they can even get payments of interest from it.</p><p>In conclusion, for the aforementioned elements, it cannot be deniable that saving is an indispensable step for current life and also the future. Savings not only save humans but also bring t<mark>hem to a wonderful dream life.?????????????</mark></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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