In my free time, I usually listen to music and draw some paintings. I’m not good at Literature and English but I’m improving it gradually. I’m preparing to take an Ielts test next year. I also challenge myself for new things.

I want to be a designer and have a peaceful life in my next 10 years.

Thanks for reading my profile. Stay safe during this pandemic.

By the way, this year will be a very challenging year for us, so I hope we will try harder and harder to achieve our target. Wish you all the best. Stay safe!

Who am I, exactly? I'm just a regular person trying to be a nice student, a good daughter, and a kind friend. About my personality: I believe that I am an ambivert because I can be both an introvert and an extrovert. However, the percentage of being an introvert is higher. That is my opinion. What am I going to do in the next ten years? Actually, I'm not sure! The future is so difficult to predict because it is so vast and ambiguous! I want to be a writer right now, but I'm not good at literature. It sounds ridiculous, doesn’t it? By the way, in the next ten years, the most essential thing I have to accomplish is to be the best version of myself. My life has a catchphrase! It goes like this: “Don't live the same year 75 times and call it a life” - Robin S. Sharma

Thank you very much! Stay safe!

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1. Intro: I disagree with this point of view.

Para 1: 

.Passion for work will help you enjoy working, work hard, overcome difficulties easily.

.The example is about an uncle who is passionate about his work so he is successful in life.

Para 2:

.Having an attitude for something is an important factor in choosing a job.

.For example, my mother is gifted in the field of psychology. She can be a psychologist and she can be successful if she does it.

Para 3:

.Money is not a strong factor when choosing a job but it's still a necessity.

.For example, if the salary is too low, then we will not be able to cover the basic needs in our lives.

3. Conclusion: Money is not the most important factor when choosing a job.

 

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        Nowadays, people think that money is the most important factor when choosing a job. In my opinion, I disagree with this point of view. In addition to having money, passion and ability are important factors for choosing a career.

        Firstly, when we are passionate about something, we will always be interested and do our best. For example, when my uncle was young, he was very passionate about cars. Based on his passion and learning, my uncle has now founded his own car company.

        Secondly, the capacity of each of us determines what work we can do and it greatly affects our future success. For instance, My Hang is a friend as well as a very psychological and understanding mother. She can be a psychologist.

        Thirdly, although money is not a strong factor when choosing a job but it's still a necessity. As a result, if the salary is too low, then we will not be able to cover the basic needs in our lives.

        In brief, money is not the most important factor when choosing a job. There are always other important factors to choose from work such as passion, capacity, health, ... but we must know how to balance them appropriately.
                      (200 words)

I disagree with that statement because of many reasons

Paragraph 1: Nothing is too difficult if you have enough passion for it, you can self-learning another skill faster and more efficiency.

Paragraph 2: Finding a job means to find a place to improve your personal skill after school time not choosing a well–paid job.

Paragraph 3: Dealing the salary that is suitable with your knowledge, skill and experience.

Conclusion: Money is not the most and only consideration when you finding a job

 

Lots of people in modern society still think that salary is the most important consideration when finding a job but in my point of view, it's not because there's many other things you must consider.

First of all, finding a suitable job with your passion will help you promote in career, immersed in work and the most important is easy to improve your skill every day

Secondly, In my opinion, when you finding a job the most important consideration is finding a place that you can learn more about your specialized, improve your skill make more profit for the company not how much you get paid. Your salary will increase in proportion to the benefits you created for them. When you are important enough for the company, you can dealing a higher salary easier.

Thirdly, you must learn how to deal your salary with the interviewer, before they ask what is your desired salary, you can consult other people having a job same like you how much they can make and what they can do for the company

In conclusion, money is not the most and only consideration when you finding a job but also what you can learn and is it suitable with your passion.

        -Paragraph 1: 
+Nobody can deny that having a high - income job can meet our demand, such as : food, cloth,...     
       -Paragraph 2: 

+ The salary can show our abilities.  

+ For instance, a person who is short - sighted can't become a pilot.
+Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered

 +Your passion is not as important as your salary.

3) Conclusion: we need to think carefully before making a decision whether to apply for that job or not.

Many young people, nowadays, belive that a good career is a well - paid one. They always focus on how much money they receive each month. However, in my opinion, a job which fits yours mental health and personality is an ideal one.

Nobody can deny that having a high - income job can meet our demand, such as : food, cloth, house , bills , health care and so on .... I believe that money plays an important role in choosing a job . In adition, we don't need to feel afraid of our monthly bills.This will help them to have a comfortable life and the living standard is elevated. That is why everyone wants a well - paid career. 

But, you can't do your job well if it doesn't fit your mental health. For instance, a person who is short - sighted can't become a pilot. Your personality is also a key when you hurt for a career . If you are an extrovert one and always do what you think, you shouldn't be a secretary or office worker . Therefore, it is obvious that salary is not the only factor to choose your work.

In conclusion, we need to think carefully before making a decision whether to apply for that job or not. Because your daily life will be boring and struggle if you don't find suitable work.

2) Body: _Paragraph 1: The importance of the salary of choosing a job.(Trung Kiên+ Anh Minh)

              _Paragraph 2: (Trung Kiên+ Anh Minh)

+ The salary can show our abilities.  
+ The salary should be worthy.

             _Paragraph 3: Your passion is not as important as your salary.( Trung Kiên+ Anh Minh+ Nghi An)

3) Conclusion: The salary is the most important consideration, when choosing a job.(Nghi An)
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  Nowadays, money cannot be everything but money absolutely is the most important thing in our life. That's the reason why I agree that when we chose the job, the salary is the most important consideration.


  Why is the money so important? Firstly, after graduating from college, we have to find a job with a stable salary to help you pay for life, save for the future, etc.... Therefore, when we’re looking for a job, salary is the most essential factor. Most people don't want to waste their time with a job where pay and benefits don't meet what they want. For example, according to a report by a reputable business-oriented website (LinkedIn), 59% of candidates stating that the salary was the leading factor that contributed to feeling fulfilled in their career, understanding pay and benefits is clearly top of mind during the job search.
 
  Secondly, the salary demonstrates our productivity and efficiency. Not only that, but also the higher salary shows our efforts bring a lot of value to the company. Because of the importance of finding a job with stable salary, the pay should be worthy of the experience, the contribution to the company.

  Finally, if passion isn't suitable for your life situation, it'll be the worst decision of your life. As far as you have known, when choosing a job with the less salary, you have to worry about taking care all of your needs. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family. Moreover, when you have money, you can enjoy your passion, but if you choose your passion instead of money, you will probably have nothing in the future, neither passion nor money.


  To sum up everything that has been stated so far, I believe that salary is the most and only consideration when choosing a job.

discussion about this

statement: When choosing a

job, the salary is the most

important consideration.

Now your teacher has asked

you to write an essay (about

100-120 words) to give your

opinion on the topic.
outline :
Introduction
Thesis statement

First reason

Supporting the argument with facts and examples.

Second reason

Supporting the argument with facts and examples.

Third reason

Supporting the argument with facts and examples.

Restatement of the topic

Summary of the reasons

It believes that money is the most important factor when choosing a job  .In my perspective,passion is the most important element .  

On one hand good  income is important because it can provide essential needs in life and entertainment. For example , if you have money , you can pay bills easily. Secondly, you can have the ability of taking care of persons you love and give them a better place to live . Finally , when having the substaintial wage you can use various of high – quality services and travel to countries where you want to visit and expand your knowledge about the world .

On the other hand , having a job that we enjoy doing , and in which we feel value and passionate is the most important thing when seeking a job .  If you do a job without loving it , you won’t develop your career. For instance , if you are fond of baking but you are a surgeon, you hardly success because it isn’t your passion. When you doing the job with all your heart and mind,  you will achive the best result include high salary too.   Therefore, money is not the most important measurement for your job, passion is the most essential element.

 In conclusion , money is also important but passion is the key when seeking an ideal job. 
(218 words) 

 

 

- supporting idea: we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education.

Paragraph 2: the passion can make a lot of money than the job have a high salary

- supporting idea: try hard, have a strong goal

Paragraph 3: in contrast, some people think money is the best way to decide on the job

- supporting idea: ambition about wealth
3. Conclusion: The most important is depends on money and your passion.

Nowadays, in the world, money is extremely significant to make decisions about your job. I agree with this point of view but in my opinion, a personal ardor is also an important part of choosing my occupation.

First, passion can change my life but deep down, money is necessary. For example, we all need a strong financial standing to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Money also supporting your passion in the future more successfully and quickly. 

Second, my ardor will be making lots of money than the job I don’t like which has a high salary. However, if you have a goal and try hard with your job, you can achieve your goal in the future. If you don’t like this job, it makes you feel boring and doesn’t want to do it anymore.

On the other hand, some people think money is the best way to decide their job. I feel that they are following materialism and also they aim to become a rich person who doesn’t care about their career. If you have ambitious about wealth, you can be obsessed and do the wrong way to make money. I want to spread a message about don’t follow too much about money if you are a smart person, only you can control your life, not money or anyone else. 

In conclusion, I seem to me that money and passion are equally integral to select my job. Undoubtedly, I can’t be successful in my career if I lack enthusiasm.

- We disagree with this point of view.
2 .Body:
- Paragraph 1 :(Hoàng Thông, Hữu Vinh, Đình Khôi)
      + Working for passion will make you feel comfortable and positive when doing it.
- Paragraph 2 : (Hoàng Thông, Hữu Vinh,Đình Khôi)
      + With passion and interest in work, you can learn and absorb professional knowledge effectively and that will help you overcome difficulties at work more easily.
      + After having enough professional experience for the job of your choice,you will be paid a comparable salary with all the efforts you put in the whole learning period. 
- Paragraph 3 : (Hoàng Thông, Hữu Vinh, Đình Khôi)
       + However, money is still an important tool in everyone's life
3. Conclusion: 
 -  Money is not the only reason you can choose a job that's right for you.
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  In each of our lives, work is one of the indispensable things. There are many reasons why we might find a job that is right for us. But the two most important reasons that influence our choices are passion and money. But many people still think that money is still more important. We do not agree with this view. Because passion can help us find a more suitable job.
   Firstly, working on our passions and hobbies will help us feel more comfortable and positive when doing it every day. Think about it, if you went to work for money but it did not match your personality and interests, how would you feel ? What you get is boredom and not being able to stick with that job for long. Instead, you can do a job that suits you, then every working day you will feel comfortable and full of energy after every working day.
   Secondly, working with your passion will make it easier for you to absorb new knowledge. We will overcome the difficulties at work more smoothly with the amount of knowledge we have. After that, we will have solid professional experience and be able to find a better environment on our own, so it will be easier for us to negotiate a salary that suits our abilities.
   However, money is also an important tool in an individual's life. It helps us improve the quality of life not only for ourselves but also for those around us. So money is also one of the top criteria when choosing a job for yourself. We must think carefully in balancing income and interests when choosing a job.
   In short, money and passion are always opposites when choosing a job for yourself. Each of us has our own opinion. Success or not is your choice.
   

I am not agree or disagree with this statement. I am in neutral.

Why am I standing in neutral? Money is necessary but not the most vital factor when choosing a job.

No money you need to eat dirt to survive!

 Money could be the most crucial factor or not it depends on you.

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The majority of people believe that having a well-paid job is crucial. They ain’t wrong. Aside from that, some people believe that all they need is a desire for their work. They are absolutely correct! Nobody knows the exact answer because money isn't everything, but it is necessary for everything. 

To begin with, money has brought in an array of positive implications on our life. There are many factors to consider when choosing a job besides salary. This has stemmed from the fact that the young generation has a propensity for picking what they are really interested in or what is really suitable for their personality,etc.When they work with passion, they will do with all of their heart, because where there is desire, there gonna be a flame. Thus their working performance will be improved significantly. On the contrary, if they work just for earning money solely, everyday going to work is like a torture with a myriad of pressure. They will slowly become both mentally and physically tired and have no motivation on their job or life.

On the other hand, people are becoming accustomed to living in a world that appreciates the power of money. This has been deemed beneficial for wealthy people. That means “ If you don’t have money, you have nothing.” Money is important because it enables you to have more control over your life, more freedom to carve out your path. How many of us are aware that losing our work would result in the loss of our home and health insurance?

In conclusion, money may or may not be the most important factor, depending on how you view the surroundings you. 

 

- Salary is the most important consideration when choosing a job

- People often find a job that make they have an interested on

- Don't feel tired when go to work

- Salary is important

- Have money to raise family

- Life more stabilizes

- The major of salary in choosing a job
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Passion is one of the elements that lead to success. However, I personally believe that salary is the most important consideration when choosing a job.
 
  Having said that many people tend to find a job that make them feel contented. The reason behind this opinion is that satisfaction help individual don't feel weary when they go to work. Moreover, doing a job that you have a passion for will promote the efficiency at work.
 
 Not surprisingly many people are of the opinion that salary is important because money can give persons many things. For instance, getting a well-paid job make life more stabilize. You don't have to worry about what you buy or how much are the bills cost.  Another convincing explanation is that doing a job base on enjoyment can't provide a person with enough money to live comfortably and raise the family.  A further point to support this viewpoint is that the spending for your passion is sometimes very expensive. when the payment you earn from that job is poor make you unable to refund the money you have lost.

In conclusion, passion is only a small part of finding a job. When choosing a job, it is necessary to consider salary issues because passion only makes you satisfied but soon the worried about the money for a living will make you doubt your choice.

 

2 . Body 

 Para 1 

If the work matches our passion and ability , everything will be easy and we will be comfortable, and have an interest in it.

Para 2 

If money is always put first in work, then there will be people who make money by being negative

Para 3 

Although money is not the most important factor, it is still very necessary

3.Conclusion : Money is not the most important thing in work

Nowadays, people in society are constantly working and most of their main and most important purposes are money. I disagree with this point of view.

Firstly, when working without passion and ability, it will be very difficult. When we are not really interested in the work, then the work will not be highly effective. All efforts will not be rewarded . We will also be bored with this job and not be able to stay with the job for a long time.

On the other hand, if money is the most important thing, there will be people who will defy it to make money even if it's the wrong thing to do. A robber only knows how to rob other people's property to get money, not based on their ability. and that's against the law, they could be in jail for many years. And most importantly, their souls and consciences were tainted.

After all, although money is not the most important factor, it is also an indispensable element in work. Money helps us live, eat, have clothes to wear, pay for many other things and be able to take care of our family. Without money , we will not be able to do anything , will starve or worse still be homeless .

In conclusion, Money is not the most important issue in the job, the job you choose must match your ability, passion and make sure it is not dirty money.

To begin with, all the company around the world almost require you have to need a little experience for your job. However, if you just look at the salary and go applying for that job, for example is secretary, but you didn’t complete your high school or your standard is the same as a normal worker, I’m surely no one is going to rent you.

On the other hand, the salary might be the next purpose when we’re choosing an occupation. For instance, we all want to be the wealthy because money is the biggest factor that lead us to a comfortable and happy life. Additionally, our parents might be proud of us if we become a success person means that we totally can take care of our family.

To conclude, the salary is important but I completely believe the suitable job is more of an essentiality. 

Intro: I disagree with this opinion 

Paragraph 1:  Have suitable condition for job is necessary 

Example: _Good health can make you work hard 

                _Econimic conditions from your parents

Paragraph 2: You have passion, you will be happy and satisfied 

Example:  _Makes us creative, having inspiration                          

                 _Being the motivation to overcome all difficulties, accumulate a lot of experience to develop

Paragraph 3: On the contrary, sometimes money also occupies an important part in life.

Example: _For married people                

                _When we are sick

Conclusion: Salary is important but your condition and your passion are more important too 

Nowadays, everyone thinks that they have to find a job with a lot of salary. Is salary so important? In my opinion, I disagree with this view point.

Firstly, you need suitable condition when you choose your job. For example of your health and your family. When you have good health, work productivity will be higher and then your employer will be pleased with your expression. Furthermore, you had better choose a career that your parents have appropriate economic conditions to pursue the passion.

Secondly, the passion is also necessary. For example, working with your passion makes you feel comfortable and enthusiastic. In addition, having passion makes us creative, having inspiration motivates us to implement new ideas and then you will progress in your career. Besides that, it is the driving force to overcome all difficulties and hardships. Since then, you have accumulated a lot of experience and developed more and more.

However, money is also a necessity in our lives. in our life for married people still need a lot of money from their salary to be able to feed their families and children to send them to school. For unmarried people, when their parents are sick, they still need money to pay for medicines and hospitals. So it can be seen that sometimes money is also an important part of life.

In conclusion, salary is important but your condition and your passion are more important too. Therefore, we should choose what is suitable for ourselves.

       Paragraph 3: Be careful when we chose the job we will follow in the future, details: gives some consequences that if we choose wrong.
3)Conclusion: We still young so don’t worry about salary, try to do different fields to find out the employment that suitable with you. 

People say that: find a stability employment to have high salary then your live will be very leisurely, happy. I disagree with that because we can't do that job without passion and interest, you will quickly get boring in that and not very efficient at work. Also, I believe that life just have once time so I will live for my passion job, also I don' t want to lose my youth when I was young.

 Firstly, everyone thinks have a job get a high salary will make our life be much better, they don’t have to think about rice, clothes, money. In our society, money use to feed us about the place we live in, our healthy, environment, the way people treat with us, we use money to pay for everything so have much money also means you could be a king. 

Secondly, passion also was very important as much as money, high salary but, money couldn’t give you the passionate job, brings the special emotion such as things you like or love to do, things you want everybody know about that.  We can passionate pursuit and get a high salary such as singer, editor, painter If we try our best, we can achieve success but it’s very hard. I believe that if you have enough patient, hard-working, I think in the nearly future, you can succeed with the way you have chosen. 

Thirdly, we must make the right choice about the job and passion because the salary helps our life get pleasant about physically and mentally. If you have passion but you don’t have enough ability to do it, everything will be very bad, you could be become an unemployment and you will be a burden on society, dragging the economy down so I hope we get a right decided about your life.

In conclusion, from my point of view salary and passion both are important but, we must carefully consider and choose the job that is suitable for your life and your family's situation. High salary does not mean you will be happy, and we are still young so try to do what you love, try yourself in many different fields to find the right job for you. 

Money is important, but what is the most significant factor is employee’s interest in the job.

1. Enthusiasm for the job -> High productivity and long-term job.

- Supporting idea 1: If workers are not interested in their job, they are unwilling to work hard and unable to make great strides  -> They show inefficiency in the outcome.

- Supporting idea 2: When employee stick with a certain job, It is likely that they will gain trust from their superior and be promoted.

2.   Meanwhile, salary should be taken into consideration. Because of sufficient amount of money help workers bring home the bacon.

It is clear that passion for the job is an integral standard when choosing a job followed by salary.

It’s a debate whether money is the most important factor when applying for a job. From my perspective, it’s the most significant for workers to consider their interest in their job.

 

 

On the other hand, salary should be taken into consideration. Because of sufficient amount of money help workers bring home the bacon. 

To sum up, it is clear that passion for the job is an integral standard when choosing a job followed by salary.

1/ Intro: money is important but it’s not the only key consideration when chosing a job.

2/ Body:

3/ Conclusion.

Nowadays, money is unquestionably a kind of power in our life; that’s why many people choose their jobs based on the salary offered. In my opinion, there are other important factors besides the salary when chosing a job. 

Actually, money is essential to our life. We spend money on buying food, clothes and almost everything we need. However, a job with a steady income often requires a lot of time and efforts, this can lead to stress and health problems.

Furthermore, I think that passion is an important consideration to select a job. People who love arts but reluctantly have to be a doctor will get tired of the job they do not like and lose heart someday. Imagine how cool it is when we can freely do whatever we like. We will have a happier and more comfortable life. 

To sum up, from my point of view, the salary is very important but not all. Passion and love on the work should also be considered when choosing a job in future.

Outline:

1. Intro:

- I agree with that statement.

2. Body:

* Para1: 

The important of salary.

* Para2:

Your salary shows your ability.

* Para3:

The salary is important but not the only.

3. Conclusion

- Think carefully and choose a job that is right for you.

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Nowadays, life becomes pragmatic. No one denies the importance of salary. Money is not everything but without money there is nothing. That's why I agree with the above opinion.

Firstly, the salary is important. It helps you pay for your life. You spend your salary on daily activities, necessities or everything that you like. If you have a family, the salary is even more important. Therefore, a high-paying job is essential.

How to get a high paying job? The answer is you must have the ability to get a job with a high income. So your salary shows your ability.

For example, my favorite football player, Lionel Messi who gets hundreds of millions of euros every year because he's so brilliant.

High income is necessary but not the only. On the other hand, passion is one of the reasons you decide to choose that job. 

 In conclusion, I think you should think carefully and choose a job is right for you.

 

Firstly, choosing a job with a high salary means that you have to work hard to equal to the salary you receive. And you have to work harder than 8 hours and you don’t have a day off for weeks. As a result, you will be exhausted because of overworking. 

 

On the other hand, I think passion is also important. For instance, when you work only for money pressure and stress will always be ready to knock you down. On the contrary, having a passion for your work is a great way to relieve stress because not only your mind, but even your whole body feels relaxed and satisfied. It is also very important for everyone’s health.

 

In conclusion, passion for work is an important factor when choosing a job, next is salary.

Essay

Money is important but is still a tool that helps people valuation things. In my view salary isn't the most important consideration when choosing a job.

To begin with compatibility with academic level. You should choose the right place for work that fit your ability. If you choose a job low level than yours, you may not develop yourself. Opposite at a high level than you, you will be drow and hard to be successful.

Secondly, as a near survey, 40% of candidates care about Employer branding which means corporate culture, work environment and reputation. For instance, the work environment is bad, often have war internal, the rules aren't tight, the brand has scandals, it isn't a good place for you, even have a high salary.

Besides nowadays, everyone cares about Welfare. It includes salary, insurance and annual leave. If two states before is excellent, but welfare bad, it's meaningless, special in COVID-19 social distance.

In conclusion, money is not the first consideration in choosing a job. However, money is important in life.

      Besides, well-paid job will give a lot of money to help you to satisfy your material life. For some people it's okay, but for some people, they don't like it. If they just do a job without passion, they will have to work boringly every day, can't do that job well. Finally, they won't have an ideal life.
      In conclusion, having a lot of money but life is boring or having happy life but not having much money is up to your choice. Let's make a choice that you won't regret!

-A well-paid job→ cover life's necessities.

+ex: pay for bills, education, health care,...

-Choose a job: depend on enjoyment→ difficult to support ourselves.

+ex: a cook: loves his job/but/salary/low/cannot live comfortably.

-Have a passion: always try our best

+result: gain knowledge/have valuable achievements.

-The environment: people around/happy, helpful/→ feel motivated→ work hard.
  CONCLUSION: money/passion/the environment/vital.

     In today's world, income is certainly a crucial consideration when choosing a job. However, I strongly believe that other factors are also critical.

     On the one hand, money is necessary for people to make a living. First, a well-paid job will help us cover our life's necessities. For example, we all need money to pay for bills, education, health care, and other needs. Second, if we choose a job which depends on our enjoyment, we might find it difficult to support ourselves as well as our family. A cook, for instance, loves his current job however the salary is so low that he cannot live comfortably day by day.

     On the other hand, passion and the environment in the workplace should be taken into consideration. When we have a passion for that job, we always try our best to work as effectively as we can. As a result, we may gain more knowledge and have more valuable achievements. Besides, the atmosphere also plays an important role when seeking a job. If people around us are always happy and helpful, we will feel more motivated to work hard.

     In conclusion, I believe that money, passion, and the environment in the workplace are vital when pursuing a job.