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         <title>Propose a Revision to the following sentence:</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>"Trying to be perfect is like trying to make the whole world revolve around you and everything must go as planned and there cannot be any hiccups along the way. Which is sometimes impossible."</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-10 15:57:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Revise the following sentence for comma use / eliminating fragments</title>
         <author>amashuff</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In perfectionism you not only have a need to please everyone but yourself as well. Maybe it’s by eating only a certain amount of carbs a day, or maybe getting a 100% on an exam you are taking.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-10 15:58:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Revise this paragraph excerpt to add more complex sentence structures.</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>On the other hand, many people believe that they are perfect and that they are not capable of&nbsp;doing wrong. This also allows them to judge others on mistakes and live in denial of their own. Some&nbsp;people who believe that they are indefinitely perfect tend to lie their way out of their mistakes. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-10 16:00:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Revise this sentence to eliminate fragments and run-ons</title>
         <author>amashuff</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Although it’s okay if you strive for those one hundred percent in every class. If the end run is you concluding with ninety eight percent you’re still a 4.0 plus student achieving greatness. Even in the scenarios that perfection can be scored and achieved, if it is strived for, the minimum takeaway&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-10 16:00:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Revise to eliminate fragments and incorporate transitions</title>
         <author>amashuff</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Although striving for perfection is a negative thing. Sometimes striving for perfection can&nbsp;<br>be a positive thing. I have played on many basketball teams.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-10 16:01:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Revise / make suggestions for adding more concrete evidence </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>the words “not good enough” are the most ruthless words someone could ever say to another human because you don’t know what that person has gone through or going through, and you are going to sit there and tell them that they aren’t good enough.&nbsp; That is why there are so many people in this world th</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-10 16:02:26 UTC</pubDate>
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