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Introduction

·         Greetings 

·         Present some of the pictures that I took 

·         My secret ambition other than medicine since form 3 – wildlife Photographer 

·         Using my handphone (vivoY51) , recently joined photography class , my hobby 

Body 1 

·         No DSLR 

·         Using my handphone – vivo Y51 – (rear 8 megapixels , front 5 megapixels) 

·         Has a sharp focusing effects 

Body 2 

·         recently joined photography class – learning to take a nice shot 

·         realised that I’ve been applying the concept needed to take a good shot after joining the class

·         for example take pictures of ugly subject by making it look beautiful – shot taken from different angle and appropriate lighting 

Body 3 

·         as my hobby – planning to get myself a DSLR

·         would be enthusiast to learn more about photography

·         receive a lot of compliments for my photography skills – it motivates to take more pictures 

Conclusion

-          currently using hp to take pictures, will learn more about photography and will never put a halt to my passion 

-          I own a insta page for my photography –  venu_clicks

Follow venu_clicks

Give salam , tell about the topic of the talk 

Purpose statement 

Thesis statement 

There are a few reasons that makes me want to be a successful businesswoman which are have no specific time for work,love seeing people happy and enjoy doing the work.

1st Body

Topic sentence : Have no specific time for work

-can start and finish the work at any time

-no time limit to complete task/work

2nd Body

Topic sentence : Love seeing people happy

-want to make people happy and satisfied using my product 

-need to ensure my product is in a good conditions

3rd Body

Topic sentence : Enjoy doing that kind of work

-no instructions from anyone for ex boss , manager

-stress free 

Conclusion

everyone have their own aim and opportunity 

Give salam , tell about the topic of the talk 

Purpose statement 

Thesis statement 

There are a few reasons that makes me want to be a professional gamer are to make easy money, release stress and to make friends

1st Body

Topic sentence : to make easy money

-win tournament

-have many followers and subscribers 

2nd Body

Topic sentence : release stress

-isolate from the real world 

-forget about problems

3rd Body

Topic sentence : to make friends

-make friends from other country

-can change information 

Conclusion
Do not underestimate person with different dreams

-a war broke out between France and Mexico in 1838 due to pastry .

 -The pastry war was because of an unpaid debt to a French pastry chef that left 32 dead and 129 wounded.

 

Topic sentence –  satisfaction

Supporting details – Doing what I love and passionate about will give me satisfaction and can make me improve myself to be better in my job.

Example – as I love to bake and make desserts, being a pastry chef will satisfy me and I can find enjoyment in what I do.

Topic sentence – enhancing my art skills

Supporting details – the job can make me develop my imagination and creative skills.

Example – as a pastry chef, I can develop my art and creative skills because a good baker must consistently create new creations.

Topic sentence – provide full employment

Supporting details – the job has full employment and is a profession with a present and a future.

Example – if I lost my job, there are numerous vacancies to be covered in workshops, restaurants, and hotels.

Conclusion
- If I do not have the chance to be a doctor, I want a career as a pastry chef as it would give me satisfaction, improve my art skills and have full employment. Pastry chef look like they do not do much compared to a chef, but the truth is they are organized and can plan more ahead than a chef. Therefore they can prepare more things in advance.

 

 

Greeting

-say hello, tell the topic of the talk

Purpose statement

-to tell about the beauty of my dream

Thesis statement

-there are few reasons why I want to be an astronaut which are I want to see the galaxy, I want to see the planet I live from different view and to be a very well-known person

1st Body

-I want to see the galaxy

-I want to get a closer look of this gorgeous creation which I always wonder how’s it feel to wander around the galaxy

2nd Body

-I want to see the planet I live from different view

-How pretty the place called earth is from up there

3rd Body

-I want to be a very well-known person on earth

-I want people to recognise me, what I do and my contribution to the world everywhere I go

Conclusion 

-we all have our own ambition, whether to do it or not

Greetings –Hello and Assalamualaikum everyone
 Attention Grabber 
 –even studying medicine and mainly want to become doctor
 - have own secret ambition from childhood which is being a teacher
 Purpose Statement 
 –each among of us would have own secret ambition that they would dream from childhood
 - but sometimes their  life fate is different from their dream
 Thesis Statement 
 - Reasons of my secret ambition is to be a teacher are because of teaching is my interest, holiday, and want to make a difference

(Transition...firstly)

1st Body
     Topic Sentence : teaching is my interest
      Supporting Details:
        - love to teach 
        - satifiscation is when student understand 
          what you are teaching
        - teaching can make me memories
           knowledge for long time
        - teaching in many ways for students' 
           understanding.
      Examples : teaching by LCD..more graphic

[Transition: Secondly]

2nd Body
 Topic Sentence : holiday
 Supporting Details:
 - holiday same with the student
 - can go holiday with family member as free at that time
 - can strengthen bonding
 - can rest for long time as following school holidays 
 Examples: 
 - Hari Raya holiday for a week that different from other workers that got only few days holidays

[Transition: Lastly]

3rd Body
 Topic Sentence : make a difference
 Supporting Details:
 -most importance is students' understanding
 -making symplifying from the textbook by the way that students' can more understand
 Examples:
 - making the acronym...mind map

[Transition: In conclusion]

Conclusion..
 -Being a teacher contributes many deeds  for development of student
 Restate Thesis Statement:
 -The reason why I want to become a teacher are because of teaching is my interest, holiday, and making a difference
 Opinions / Recommendations:
 - every teacher has their own way in teaching
 - but it is still most of students' effort in learning for successfulness of the students.

INTRODUCTION
 *Greeting
 Give salam, tell about the topic of the talk
 *Secret ambition 
 *Attention grabber
 Did you know that Cristiano Ronaldo had won 5 balloon d' or and his celebration. 

PURPOSE STATEMENT 
 *To inform and tell about successful football player in the world 

THESIS STATEMENT 
 *There are a few reasons I want to be a footballer which are to gain experience, can earn money and help other people 

1st BODY 
 Topic Sentence : to gain experience 
 -join many club in many countries 
 -earn knowledge and experience from different people at many places 

2nd BODY
 Topic Sentence : can earn money 
 -be a proffessional football player can earn our own salary 
 -win tournament 

3rd BODY 
 Topic Sentence : Help other people 
 -make a foundation to help poor people 
 -join an international organisation like UNICEF as ambassador and support this organisation 
 -example is David Beckham 

CONCLUSION 
 *Do not underestimate person with different interest and everyone has their own dream 

Greeting- A very good afternoon to Maam Emily and my friends. My secret ambition is to associate myself with something related to history, not particularly an archeologist. 

Attention grabber- History channel, Malaysian school textbooks

Thesis statement- The reasons for choosing this as my secret ambition is because I can get knowledge of many cultures, discoveries and it is interesting.

Body 1

Topic sentence- know root of cultures

Supporting detail- origins, tradition, migration 

Examples -Greek, Indian history, Asian history 

Body 2

Topic sentence- Discoveries

Supporting detail- Our world is not fully explored, many truths are remains folded

Examples- truth of mummies, human originsd

Body 3

Topic sentence- interesting 

Supporting detail- Exploration 

Examples- Family tree of England royal families

Conclusion

Topic sentence- reasons for choosing this as my secret ambition is because I can get knowledge of many cultures, discoveries and it is interesting.

Options- Maybe after finishing my undergraduate and postgraduate, I will pursue my secret ambition. Thank you 

Purpose statement
 -to tell about the secret life i'm dreaming of

Thesis statement
 -there are few reasons why I want to be a professional dancer. The reason being is to get acquaintances with other dancers of different background and nationality.I'd also like performing on the stage with celebrities while travelling around the globe. 

1st Body
 -I want to see the world with my eyes
 -Despise being tied to sth for a long time
 -Adventurous type to always explore sth new
 -Dancing provides the opportunity 
 -Killing 2 birds with one stone
 -Getting paid, free travelling and doing what ur passionate in

2nd Body
 -I love having an active life
 -Dancing is a combination of dynamic movement and creative arts
 -Both require critical focus to create a masterpiece
 -Getting fit is a bonus

3rd Body
 -I want to meet people
 -As we broaden our steps, we also able to meet new faces
 -Make friends while learning so much about their culture and country
 -Learn new languages and become a polyglot
 -Opens up a new perspective in life

Conclusion 
 -Passion is a Dream.Dreaming is living.Living your life the way you envision it is the ultimate success that not many people are fortunate to get. 

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