https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx en-us 2023-01-29 05:23:30 UTC 2023-02-04 11:38:30 UTC hello@padlet.com yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460126293 2023-01-29 06:03:44 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460126293 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460126862 According to Florida, the populations and scales of cities are growing larger and larger. Even though the density brought by the height of buildings, as people always think, improves cities’ creativity and productivity, the “Jacobs density” is also important for innovation and economy. Jacobs density is not a physical density of population or rooms, but an abstract description of the extent people mix with each other. Different kinds of people. Buildings, cultures or so can all improve Jacobs density, creating development like technological advancement. Florida says that the balance of both kinds of density is what developers should pursue, as]]> 2023-01-29 06:05:22 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460126862 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460127299 According to Florida, the populations and scales of cities are growing larger and larger. Even though the density brought by the height of buildings, as people always think, improves cities’ creativity and productivity, the “Jacobs Density” is also important for innovation and economy. Jacobs density is not a physical density of population or rooms, but an abstract description of the extent people mix with each other. Different kinds of people. Buildings, cultures or so can all improve Jacobs Density, creating development like technological advancement. Florida says that the balance of both kinds of density is what developers should pursue, as  ]]> 2023-01-29 06:07:22 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460127299 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460128091 In the original version, I only capitalized the first letter of Jacob, the name of the person who invented the phrase, in "Jacob Density". However, as it is a scientific noun that many people do not know, I should capitalize the first letter of Density too. My paragraph will then show that Jacob Density is not the phrase that readers need to know before reading this paragraph. In this way, readers will not feel confused about their unknown proper noun.]]> 2023-01-29 06:10:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460128091 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460128568 2023-01-29 06:12:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460128568 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460128977 ignoring the importance of anyone and developing the other too much will lead to the repression in development. In this way, people should not keep on expanding the scale or the height of cities unlimitedly, but making no changes to the cities is also unsuitable. Finding the point to balance the two kinds of densities and maximize innovation is the goal of urbanites. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:14:42 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460128977 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460129077 ignoring the importance of anyone and developing the other too much will lead to repression in development. In this way, people should not keep on expanding the scale or the height of cities unlimitedly, but making no changes to the cities is also unsuitable. Finding the point to balance the two kinds of densities and maximize innovation is the goal of urbanites. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460129077 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460129390 In this context, I did not mention "repression" before this sentence. When we write about an idea for the first time, we should not add a "the", which is confusing for the readers. Also, as "repression" is an uncountable noun, I should not add an "a" or an "an" before it. I should just use "repression" here. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:16:35 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460129390 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460129604 2023-01-29 06:17:43 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460129604 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460131009 I have lived in a large city as well as a less-dense neighborhood. In China, I lived in one of the largest cities. It was really nice to have various food, clothes, and public transportations near my home, which offered me easy access to everything I needed. The high education quality and sufficient opportunities laid solid foundation for my college studies. However, the pollution was a huge problem, forcing everyone to reduce the time outdoors. With huge workload and high pressure, ]]> 2023-01-29 06:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460131009 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460131068 I have lived in a large city as well as a less-dense neighborhood. In China, I lived in one of the largest cities. It was really nice to have various food, clothes, and public transportations near my home, which offered me easy access to everything I needed. The high education quality and sufficient opportunities laid solid foundation for my college studies. However, the pollution was a huge problem, forcing everyone to reduce their time outdoors. With huge workload and high pressure, ]]> 2023-01-29 06:20:47 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460131068 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460131733 In the original journal, I said "forcing everyone to reduce the time outdoors". However, the "the" here is a vague expression. Instead of just saying "the time", I should say "forcing everyone to reduce their time outdoors". In this way, readers will understand my idea that everyone is forced to reduce the time out doors.]]> 2023-01-29 06:23:56 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460131733 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460132124 2023-01-29 06:25:31 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460132124 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460132226 the communication between people was also limited. Living in less-densed neighborhood, such as my grandparents’ house, is quite a different story. Breathing the fresh air, we planted our own vegetables and fruits, sharing with each other during community activities. Everyone were relatively relaxed and friendly. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460132226 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460132308 the communication between people was also limited. Living in less-densed neighborhood, such as my grandparents’ house, is quite a different story. Breathing the fresh air, we planted our own vegetables and fruits, sharing with each other during community activities. Everyone was relatively relaxed and friendly. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:26:14 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460132308 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460132676 In English, even though "everyone" can always express a plural idea, we should use verbs in a single form with it. In the original version, I followed "everyone" with a " were". However, to make the verb match this subject, I should use "was".]]> 2023-01-29 06:27:52 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460132676 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460133001 2023-01-29 06:29:00 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460133001 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460133122 However, the remote location hindered the little village from developing better education and economy, which offered me less choices and opportunities. It was a really good place to slow down and exchange ideas, but it was not as good place for me to develop as a large city. As a result, finding a point to promote the advantage of both environment while getting rid of the downsides is a challenging but meaningful goal. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:29:33 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460133122 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460133172 However, the remote location hindered the little village from developing better education and economy, which offered me fewer choices and opportunities. It was a really good place to slow down and exchange ideas, but it was not as good place for me to develop as a large city. As a result, finding a point to promote the advantage of both environment while getting rid of the downsides is a challenging but meaningful goal. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:29:45 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460133172 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460133854 I used "less" to describe plural words of "choices" and "opportunities". However, the adjective should be "fewer" to describe plural nouns. In this way, I will use "fewer choices and opportunities" instead.]]> 2023-01-29 06:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460133854 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460134499 2023-01-29 06:34:58 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460134499 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460134762 I have witnessed one extreme weather event in China when I was about ten years old. The light was dim even though in the morning, and it began to rain extremely heavily in the afternoon. I would also hear the sound of the strong wind tearing things apart. After the school ended, I stepped out of the classroom with both rain coat and umbrella, but none of them worked in such an extreme weather. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:35:50 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460134762 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460134839 I have witnessed one extreme weather event in China when I was about ten years old. The light was dim even in the morning, and it began to rain extremely heavily in the afternoon. I would also hear the sound of the strong wind tearing things apart. After the school ended, I stepped out of the classroom with both rain coat and umbrella, but none of them worked in such an extreme weather. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:36:14 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460134839 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460135253 I should use "even" instead of "even though" here. Light is usually bright during the day but only dim during the night. "Even" emphasizes the surprising ideas that I want to express, but "even though" usually means concession. I want to should my surprised that the light is dim in the morning, but not to create a concessive clause. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:37:57 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460135253 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460136503 I nearly lost my umbrella in the wind. My school was on a little hill, so the large amount of water formed a waterfall! There were fallen trees, trash, and flooded water everywhere. When I finally arrived at the Lilong toward my home, I found it flooded with deep water. Being in a low level of ground, the Lilong had water submerging ]]> 2023-01-29 06:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460136503 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460136625 2023-01-29 06:42:47 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460136625 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460136729 I nearly lost my umbrella in the wind. My school was on a little hill, so the large amount of water formed a waterfall! There were fallen trees, trash, and flooded water everywhere. When I finally arrived at the Lilong toward my home, I found it flooded with deep water. Being on a low level of ground, the Lilong had water submerging ]]> 2023-01-29 06:43:10 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460136729 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460137106 Based on the concepts of meaning and grammar, "in" is not suitable to use with "ground", as nothing is "in the ground". I should use "on the ground" instead to make my expression less confusing.]]> 2023-01-29 06:44:26 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460137106 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460137355 2023-01-29 06:45:23 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460137355 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460137493 my body below my neck. I always considered the event as extreme because it really destroyed many constructions and affected the lives of all people in the city. Many people had their homes flooded, and everything outside of buildings were destroyed. Many buildings collapsed and the public transportation was blocked. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:45:50 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460137493 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460137537 my body below my neck. I always considered the event as extreme because it really destroyed many constructions and affected the lives of all people in the city. Many people had their homes flooded, and everything outside of buildings was destroyed. Many buildings collapsed and the public transportation was blocked. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460137537 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460138143 In English, even though "everything" usually expresses a plural idea, we should use verbs in a single form with it. In the original version, I followed "everything" with a " were". However, to make the verb match this subject, I should say "everything outside of buildings was destroyed ".]]> 2023-01-29 06:47:39 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460138143 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460138363 2023-01-29 06:48:43 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460138363 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460138506 I don’t want to work 100% remotely because the communication is really important for me even though it is just a job. The life never stops after you find a job and start to receive salaries for that. I would like to let the wheels keep on moving so that my life will stay colorful. With people from different backgrounds, I will be able to rethink about my ideas and get inspiration when we spend a lot of time working together. This kind of connection cannot be replaced by the internet because there are responses and reflections that I will never get ]]> 2023-01-29 06:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460138506 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460138554 I don’t want to work 100% remotely because the communication is really important to me even though it is just a job. The life never stops after you find a job and start to receive salaries for that. I would like to let the wheels keep on moving so that my life will stay colorful. With people from different backgrounds, I will be able to rethink about my ideas and get inspiration when we spend a lot of time working together. This kind of connection cannot be replaced by the internet because there are responses and reflections that I will never get ]]> 2023-01-29 06:49:38 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460138554 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460138888 The preposition word used between "important" and "me" should not be "for". It is a set phrase. I should say "the communication is really important to me" instead.]]> 2023-01-29 06:51:16 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460138888 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460139014 2023-01-29 06:51:58 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460139014 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460139256 when communicating with co-workers online. At the same time, working remotely for a company in an unfamiliar city is not a good idea for me. I know nothing about the lifestyle and challenges in that city, and I have no connection with it. The job will lose a lot of value and fun because of it. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460139256 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460139451 when communicating with co-workers online. At the same time, working remotely for a company in an unfamiliar city is not a good idea for me. The reason is that I know nothing about the lifestyle and challenges in that city, and I have no connection with it. The job will lose a lot of value and fun because of it. ]]> 2023-01-29 06:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460139451 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460140004 In this context, "I know nothing about the lifestyle and challenges in that city, and I have no connection with it" is the reason for "working remotely for a company in an unfamiliar city is not a good idea for me". As a result, I should use the connection "the reason is that" to show this causal relationship.]]> 2023-01-29 06:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2460140004 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2461945531 2023-01-30 19:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/pwan7ktzwgdu2qrx/wish/2461945531