2A Synthesis Peer Feedback Rubric Analysis - Group by jackiefly https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft Find your group's line items and post 2-3 look-fors for each item. en-us 2022-02-21 18:14:06 UTC 2022-02-22 15:33:53 UTC hello@padlet.com Uses words from the prompt hablefitsum https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060705256 2022-02-22 14:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060705256 Takes a clear, defensible stance. https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060705454 2022-02-22 14:45:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060705454 Is the first sentence in the paragraph https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060705918 2022-02-22 14:46:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060705918 Line of Reasoning directly relates to the essay's thesis https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060705951 2022-02-22 14:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060705951 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060706084 look for quotations & (Source -)]]> 2022-02-22 14:46:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060706084 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060706619 Only use first person when referring to your own experiences/evidence. Don't use "your" or "you".]]> 2022-02-22 14:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060706619 Confident and direct https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060706714 2022-02-22 14:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060706714 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060707949 when using direct quotes, make sure to use short phrases or words]]> 2022-02-22 14:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060707949 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060708724 Clear stance on the topic and relevant evidence that connects to the claim]]> 2022-02-22 14:47:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060708724 the writer includes which source the evidence came from https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060709296 2022-02-22 14:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060709296 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060709500 when using direct quotes, use words or short phrases that directly support the point you are trying to make]]> 2022-02-22 14:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060709500 Adds new information that supports the claim and is not the same as other lines of reasoning hablefitsum https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060710349 2022-02-22 14:47:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060710349 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060710533 The analysis and the evidence and line of reasoning are all connected ]]> 2022-02-22 14:47:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060710533 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060711480 Avoid using the ambiguous "this"]]> 2022-02-22 14:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060711480 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060712220 Analyzes the sources and documents further than what it describes and therefore uses background knowledge or further evidence beyond the sources.]]> 2022-02-22 14:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060712220 No outside sources besides writer's background knowledge. https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060714090 2022-02-22 14:49:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060714090 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060714230 Look for a good mix of outside evidence and evidence from the documents.]]> 2022-02-22 14:49:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060714230 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060714772 The writer includes both direct and indirect commentary ]]> 2022-02-22 14:49:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060714772 Connects evidence to claim. https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060718355 2022-02-22 14:50:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060718355 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060719570 Have evidence that is clear and concise for the reader to understand

]]> 2022-02-22 14:51:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060719570 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060720266 don't analyze the docs like we did in rhetorical essays- just pick quote or idea from source that connects to claim]]> 2022-02-22 14:51:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060720266 Doesn't summarize sources. https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060720521 2022-02-22 14:51:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060720521 Quotations are easily differentiated through the use of parenthesis followed by direct stating of the source. (Source ___) https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060722845 2022-02-22 14:52:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060722845 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060734593 Vocabulary reflects that the writer thought deeply about the subject.]]> 2022-02-22 14:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060734593 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060738453 Successfully persuades the reader of a different POV ]]> 2022-02-22 15:00:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060738453 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060746329 Not just descriptive but evidence is presented in a way that tries to get the reader to understand a specific perspective

]]> 2022-02-22 15:04:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060746329 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060747352 makes inferences and conclusions from the documents that arent directly stated]]> 2022-02-22 15:04:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/pvpxqbxyddzqdkft/wish/2060747352