My Topic Sentences-TP-203-Summer 24 by farrukh136

Muhammad Syed's Topic Sentences

farrukh_sm — 2024-07-10 05:27:43 UTC

My Major:

My Topic:

My Thesis:

My topic sentences:

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Lecture on Topic Sentences (notes)

farrukh_sm — 2024-07-10 08:05:19 UTC

Topic sentences for the Term Paper

You have three main ideas

Which means three topic sentences

First of all, you must paraphrase the main idea from the thesis in your topic sentences. You cant copy the exact words from the thesis. If you do that you will get a C on the rubric for the topic sentences element. At least, or minimum, one word for the main idea from the thesis must be paraphrased or changed.

Topic sentences must have three elements:

a) An appropriate transition word/phrase- e.g. Firstly, To begin with, In addition, One of the most important causes/effects/benefits/advantages/ etc. is ……… Another benefit/cause/effect/etc……….

b) Topic and focus of the paper ( paraphrase the focus word…causes effects/advantages, etc. don’t repeat the same word many times. For examples, for causes you can use factor/ reason/ etc…. and for effects you can use impacts/ result/ etc.

c) Main idea but paraphrased

Topic sentences must be complete

Topic sentences cant be a question

Topic sentence must be in one sentence

Topic sentences cant be from a source

Example

Thesis: The three main impacts of divorce on children could be on their education, attitude and personality. ( not a great thesis statement because you have to try to write at least two or more words for each main idea. I am only trying to use this one here like an essay example and the topic here is not related to a TP.

Topic sentence 1: Effect on their education

One of the effects of divorce on children can be on their academic performance. ///// Firstly, divorce can affect children’s academic performance. ////// First of all, academic performance of children can be negatively impacted due to divorce.

Topic sentence 2: Effect on their attitude

In addition, divorce can impact children’s mental health.

Topic sentence 3: Effect on their personality

Another serious impact of divorce on children is that it can negatively affect their social outlook.

Lulwa Almalki Topic Sentences

2024-07-10 20:06:43 UTC

My major: CE

My topic: Benefits of AI on software development

Benefits of AI on software development

MY Thesis:

AI can improve quality assurance and productivity and abstract modeling to code.

Topic sentence:

1- Software development benefits from AI, one of which is a guarantee of quality.

2- One of the primary benefits of AI supporting software development is efficiency.

3- Abstract demonstrating to code is one more advantage of AI for software development.

Nousseiba Boudaia's Topic Sentences

2024-07-10 20:52:49 UTC

My Major: Computer Science

My Topic: Causes of Bias in Machine Learning

My Thesis:

The causes of discrimination in machine learning can be attributed to issues in the type of data used to train the model, the way the model was built, and the features selected to make final decisions.

My topic sentences:

One major factor contributing to bias in machine learning is the quality and variety of the collected datasets.
Additionally, algorithmic design plays a crucial role in perpetuating unfairness within machine learning models.
Lastly, the choice of features used in the decision-making process can significantly lead to discriminatory outcomes.

safia

2024-07-11 04:35:01 UTC

My Major: Mathematics Education

My Topic: advantages and disadvantages of blended learning

My Thesis:

Blended learning has a lot of advantages, including providing flexibility and interaction, but also contains disadvantages such as increasing the workload.

My topic sentence:

1-Flexibility is one of the advantages of blended learning.

2-Another benefit of blended learning increases the effectiveness of participation and interaction .

3-On the other hand, workload management is one of the disadvantages of blended learning.

Amna Alnasr Topic Sentences

2024-07-11 12:42:22 UTC

My Major: Computer Engineer

My Topic: Safeguards Against Hacking in a company

My Thesis: In order to create a secure atmosphere at work, organizations should focus on how to keep themselves safe by setting up strict access controls, adjusting security regulations, and educating staff members on security protocols.

My topic sentences:

1- One way to stop hackers from breaking into an organization is to implement restrictive control over access.

2-Training employees on security procedures is another way to establish a safe online environment.

3-Lastly, an extra defense against a corporation hacking is updating safety rules.

sara alabdulla

2024-07-12 14:23:46 UTC

My major: General pharmacy

My topic: effects of antibiotics on children

My thesis:The excessive use of antibiotics on children has serious effects it could affect the immune system, it could affect organs, and it could affect growth.

my topic sentences:

1- To begin with, one of the effects of antibiotics usage on children is natural immunity affection.

2-Furthermore, antibiotics have a significant impact on children's body parts and systems due to their breakdown in organs, causing chemical substances to affect these organs.

3-As well as, antibiotics affects children organs and systems by affecting muscles and fats.

Shaikha Saeed Al-Saad

2024-07-14 08:49:52 UTC

My major: Biological Sciences

My topic: Causes of genetic mutations in human

My thesis: Genetic mutations can occur due to several causes, including internal factors such as the inheritance of damaged genes and chromosomal errors, external factors such as exposure to different environmental influences, or substances such as alcohol or some drugs.

My topic sentences:

1- To start with, one of the factors of gene alterations in humans is the internal causes.

2- External and environmental factors are other significant etiologies behind the changes in human genes.

3- Finally, one of the main reasons why people develop genetic abnormalities is because they take some chemicals.