6B: PEE On The Wall: What impact on the reader does the metaphor "the yawning jaws of an enormous beast" have when describing the skyline? by Ruth Bryce

2023-11-14 07:33:21 UTC

In my opinion, I think that in the first paragraph he felt scared 😟

Chase and Finley

2023-11-14 07:33:41 UTC

The impact of the phrase shows that it can be very dangerous but currently is at peace not doing anything but lurking giving a impact on the reader to show what might happen later.

William and Lukie

2023-11-14 07:33:43 UTC

It tells us that it is a dangerous city but at this moment in time it was calm

Zitong and Defne

2023-11-14 07:34:21 UTC

In my opinion, the sky was really scary for Thomas as it described the sky as a yawning, enormous beast.

Cassandra and Seth.This show the dangers of the city but because it is yawning it is calm for now 😏

2023-11-14 07:34:54 UTC

2023-11-14 07:35:18 UTC

In the text it mentions: ‘Thomas gulped and looked up at the skyline’ 🫨

Jackson and Ryan

2023-11-14 07:35:33 UTC

in my opinon in the first paragraph he felt overwhelmed and scared

Sham lujaine

2023-11-14 07:35:39 UTC

In my opinion it shows it was scary dangerous and it was the morning of the factory’s opening

Mellissa and Jacob

2023-11-14 07:35:44 UTC

At the time it was calm but has potential to very dangerous

Scarlett

2023-11-14 07:35:48 UTC

In my opinion he was on a river

Saanvi and Lyla

2023-11-14 07:36:32 UTC

In my opinion I feel it was an enormous beast because it describes the city very busy and very calm at the same time.

Sham lujaine

2023-11-14 07:36:38 UTC

It says “Thomas gulped and looked at the skyline” and “the yawning jaws of an enormous beast”

Marius

2023-11-14 07:37:37 UTC

It could be dangerous but it was in a state of peace but it had potential

2023-11-14 07:37:41 UTC

It’s calm for know but might not be for much longer

Sham lujaine

2023-11-14 07:37:54 UTC

That he was scared of the dangers as he was small and could get injured because of working in the factory’s

Melissa jacob

2023-11-14 07:38:03 UTC

In the text it said ‘Thomas gulped and looked at the skyline

Saanvi and Lyla

2023-11-14 07:38:12 UTC

In the text it stated ‘ Thomas gulped and looked up at the skyline that rose from the ground : the yawning beast.’

The was a best of potential

2023-11-14 07:38:13 UTC

Marco and scarlett

2023-11-14 07:39:08 UTC

The ravenous monster lurking in the distance was Yawning👹😈☠️

Ryan and Jackson

2023-11-14 07:40:06 UTC

the text states that" the sights; the sound; the smells, all of it melted together

2023-11-14 07:40:39 UTC

He was scared and could get injured or possibly even die ☠️

2023-11-14 07:40:49 UTC

In the text it mentions,’ the yawning jaws of an enormous beast’

Chase and Finley

2023-11-14 07:41:27 UTC

Within the text is says ‘Thomas gulped and looked up at the sky line’ implying he was quite nervous

2023-11-14 07:42:04 UTC

Cassandra & Seth .The texted stated that : Thomas gulped at the and looked up at the skyline

Zitong and Defne

2023-11-14 07:42:30 UTC

Evidence that supports my point is , ‘ Thomas gulped and looked up at the skyline’. This supports it because it proves that Thomas was scared.

Melissa & Jacob

2023-11-14 07:42:41 UTC

Considering the height of Thomas he could get hurt in the factory get assaulted on the street get mugged and nobody will know where he is

“It is a yawning beset” for patentail

2023-11-14 07:42:46 UTC

Marius

2023-11-14 07:42:51 UTC

The text states ‘Thomas gulped as he looked up at the skyline’.

Marco & Scarlett

2023-11-14 07:43:09 UTC

“Thomas gulped and look at the skyline”🏙️🫨

Cassandra & Seth

2023-11-14 07:43:11 UTC

He was scared of the new city he looked across and the dangers were high competing to his little farm

William and Lukie

2023-11-14 07:44:05 UTC

He had lived in a small farm and now hee is in a city

2023-11-14 07:44:16 UTC

This quote shows that it is was calm but has potential!

Marius

2023-11-14 07:44:39 UTC

It has the impact on him because he is small and the city is massive because he grew up in a farm with no neighbours so he was scared of all the people.

Hamdan&emin

2023-11-14 07:45:46 UTC

This conveys my point because the factories and the city itself was an enormous beast that didnt contrast to the countryside (village)

Finley and Chase

2023-11-14 07:46:08 UTC

This shows that he was scared of the dangers which were upon him. And the amount of difference from the small farm he had lived then this massive overwhelming city

2023-11-14 07:46:11 UTC

He never had nabber

Saanvi and Lyla*

2023-11-14 07:46:22 UTC

Therefore, the city was such a big difference after his move from the farm he was staying in before compared to the urban. Thomas must have been feeling frightened after seeing the humongous city.

Ryan and Jackson

2023-11-14 07:46:31 UTC

this conveys our point because it hints that he is overwhelmed and scared.

Zitong and Defne

2023-11-14 07:47:36 UTC

This demonstrates my point because Thomas was scared of all the tall buildings that “reached the sun”, the sky had been surrounded with black gass , using a metaphor to describe this scary scene.