Your big ideas by Jacqui Barna

At end of the lesson you will be able to make a paragraph connect using transition words.

jbarna912 — 2023-11-08 15:18:00 UTC

Combine the thoughts into a good paragraph.

jbarna912 — 2023-11-08 15:19:39 UTC

Every bus needs a driver.

We have over 3,000 students.

My school is one of the largest in the state.

Every bus costs a lot of money.

To get all of us to school, our district had to buy 100 buses.

We have over 300 staff members.

Buses are not cheap.

What makes a paragraph sound well written?

jbarna912 — 2023-11-08 15:20:03 UTC

Andrew

2023-11-08 15:51:13 UTC

My school is one of the largest in the state, and we have over 3,000 students. To get all of us to school, our district had to buy 100 buses. Buses are not cheap, and every bus costs a lot of money. Also, every bus needs a driver, and we already have over 300 staff members.

Lynn (Lynia)

2023-11-08 15:52:38 UTC

Our school is one of the largest of the state, There is over 3,000 students learning in this school. All of our school busses are state of the art and cost lots of money and every one of these busses have a driver. To get all of our students to school the district had to buy about 100 busses in which we have over 300 members working at the school. Our busses are not cheap and each cost more 4,500$ combined.

Eliana Mencia

2023-11-08 15:54:34 UTC

I can't find it. Couldn't find other word so I'm just going to say.

Every bus needs a driver at my school. We have over 3000 students the school that I go to is one of the largest in the state. The buses that we take to go home cost a lot of money. To get all of the students to school and back the school had to buy 100 buses.

xavier

2023-11-08 15:56:38 UTC

Buses are not cheap. To get us all to school, our district had to buy 100 buses, and every bus needs a driver. We are one of the largest schools in the state because we have 300 staff members and over 3,000 students.

Juliet

2023-11-08 15:58:58 UTC

We have over 3000 student's in my school. My school is one of the largest in the state. All of our school busses cost lost of money. Our school district had to buy 100 busses for our school and 200 staff members school busses should be cheaper lots of school need them.

dev-on

2023-11-08 17:54:41 UTC

there are over 3,000 students in the school and the school is large. And are over 3,000 seats to. And are 100 buses and they cost so much money.

Manye S.

2023-11-08 18:45:16 UTC

We have over 3,00 students.

My school is one of the largest in the state.

Every bus costs a lot or money.

To get all of us to school, our district had to buy 100 buses.

Buses are no cheap.

We have over 300 staff members.

Michael

2023-11-08 18:46:27 UTC

My school is the largest in the state. We have over 3,000 students. We have over 300 staff members. To get all of us to school, our district had to buy 100 buses. Buses are not cheap. Every bus needs a driver.

Andrea Wise

2023-11-08 18:48:54 UTC

My school is one of the largest in the state. We have over 3,000 students. We have over 300 staff members. To get all of us to school ,our district had to buy 100 buses. Buses are not cheap. Every bus costs a lot of money. Every bus needs a bus driver.

Morgan Johnson

2023-11-08 18:50:37 UTC

we have over 3,000 students and my school is one of the largest in the state. Every bus cost a lot of money and we only have 300 staff and buses are not cheap.

Ricky

2023-11-08 19:00:06 UTC

There are over 3,000 students in my school plus with it being one of the largest ones in the state I can see why our district had to buy 100 but i feel like there should be more we have over 300 staff members every bus needs a driver so I think we should have more staff but at the same time buses aren't cheap.

gabe

2023-11-08 19:28:37 UTC

Buses are not cheap they all cost a LOT of money. but we need them because we have over 3,000 students and only a little over 300 staff members. we had to buy 100 buses! we are one of the largest schools in the state. and every bus needs a driver.