https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys State THE MOST important thing you learned from reading the student sample essays and 2 things you will do to improve your essay! en-us 2016-11-21 15:09:31 UTC 2016-11-23 03:54:04 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys/wish/139235873 The most important thing I learned when reading the student sample essays is that detail is crucial. To improve my essay I will add more detail to my paragraphs and I will use stronger verbs.

]]> 2016-11-21 23:54:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys/wish/139235873 https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys/wish/139258941 The most important thing I learned from the student sample essays was how overly detailed each essay was in explaining and answering the prompt. I can improve my essay by using stronger vocabulary and adding more detail to answer the prompt.]]> 2016-11-22 05:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys/wish/139258941 https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys/wish/139499498 2016-11-23 02:05:34 UTC https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys/wish/139499498 https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys/wish/139503203 The most important thing I learned from reading the student essays was that a strong thesis needs strong evidence to support it. I will strengthen the comparisons I make in my essay and I will strengthen my use of diction.]]> 2016-11-23 03:07:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys/wish/139503203 https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys/wish/139505426 After reading the sample essays, I learned that I did not have to have such a formulaic approach. The prompt addressed more so the writing style than the rhetorical devices and strategies in themselves. While the rhetorical analysis is structured, it's not always best to use a standard five-paragraph approach. Also, constantly relating points back to the thesis statement after each point is important as well.]]> 2016-11-23 03:49:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lmarcos1/psvyhondk5ys/wish/139505426