Glow and Grow for Video Presentation by Michael DeMelfi https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k Please feel free to leave any comments and suggestions that you may have for me from my presentation! en-us 2019-12-08 22:48:41 UTC 2026-01-28 12:51:30 UTC hello@padlet.com Glows and Grows philip_nasisi1 https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/421429797 Glow- You have a great narration. You sounded very natural and even added some humor which made watching your presentation enjoyable.

Grow- I would of liked to hear which programs we used this semester were your favorite, I feel as if you say technology changed your life but you don't get too specific into it.

Great Job! 
-Philip Nasisi]]> 2019-12-09 03:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/421429797 Hi Michael! From Nina Danner nina_danner https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/421588191 Glow: I agree that your narraration was great. I like the use of graphics; not too much and were neat.
Grow: I think there was too much text on the slides at some points. You could use a key word or phrase and then read aloud what you have written in personal notes.]]> 2019-12-09 14:00:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/421588191 Glow and Grows dylan_kleinfeldt https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/422562103 Glow- You answered vital questions that were asked in the reflective paper! This allowed me to understand your view on yourself as an innovator. I thought the presentation was neat and interesting.
Grow- I was also guilty of this, but I feel that you have too many words on your slides. I understand from experience that it can be hard not to add a ton of text!

Good Job Michael,
Dylan Kleinfeldt ]]> 2019-12-11 04:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/422562103 Glow and Grow david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/422570944 Glow: Within your presentation you have answered the key questions needed to complete the assignment and you spoke in a tone that was very understandable. 

Grow: Many of us have done this in our presentation and that is using too many words. Few key words is all that is needed.

--David Kobylarz]]> 2019-12-11 06:09:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/422570944 Glow and Grow ionniari https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/423891331 Glow:i like the visuals that you added 

grow: Likewise i think we all had a bit too much text on our presentation.


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 ]]> 2019-12-13 16:44:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/423891331 Glow and Grow tiombe_green https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/424107974 Glow: This presentation was very clear and insightful. I liked that you went into depth on how you're a risk-taker. The visuals worked well too in your presentation.
Grow: I think you should have less text so that it is not like you're reading off your slides. Other than that your flow was really good!]]> 2019-12-14 05:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/424107974 Glow and Grow jonathan_bareli https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/424281318 Glow: I really liked your visuals in the presentation and it was constructed well. Your presentation was very knowledgeable as well and the way you presented was great. 

Grow: Some slides were over packed, I would less words. But I guess we all do that.  ]]> 2019-12-15 15:25:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/424281318 Glow and Grow James Lopez: james_lopez2 https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/424369455 glow: like everyone else has said, your presentation was REALLY informative.

grow: the main points you were touching on in the slide would've been fine to put up!]]> 2019-12-16 02:19:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/424369455 Glow and Grow for David K https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/424372236 Glow: interesting topic you picked, loved the creativity, and you have successfully answered the key questions necessary to fulfill the presentation.

Grow: Do not rush it, the speed of the slides were a bit fast. Slow down and take your time 

Well done!
]]> 2019-12-16 02:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/424372236 Glow and Grow Max Brustein https://padlet.com/mdemelfi/prb0y67m7e7k/wish/424377885 Glow: nice presentation, good speaking skills and overall a very professional feel
Grow: you might want to crop everything outside of the presentation out so that it does not get in the way. Great job!

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