https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3 • Use your name to identify yourself. • Be polite, friendly, and encouraging. • Feel free to ask a question to the author. • If you have a suggestion, don’t be rude about it; give constructive (helpful) feedback. • Aim for correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar. en-us 2017-04-13 02:17:09 UTC 2017-05-22 15:04:18 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/167360854 I like how you put a lot of detail into your story!! I liked it a lot!! ]]> 2017-04-20 19:00:46 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/167360854 https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/167361109 I like how you put details in your story.
Very descriptive. ]]> 2017-04-20 19:01:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/167361109 https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/167361376 River I like how you described how the pit-bull look like ]]> 2017-04-20 19:02:59 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/167361376 https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/167361448 Good job it was good and also like the part when you got a whole pack of starburst. ]]> 2017-04-20 19:03:18 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/167361448 https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/173164929 I liked the part where you said (It felt like 1,000,000 Rabie shots) But I wished you would have capitalized your I's.

]]> 2017-05-22 14:55:27 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/173164929 https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/173165949 Great job! I really liked all of the sensory details and how you described  how you were in a pool of blood.
  P.S.........the i that refers to yourself is ALWAYS capitalized   .
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2. next ]]> 2017-05-22 15:00:39 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/173166387 https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/173166949 I really liked it but you had a million eyes like the letter eye and you never capotaised even one ]]> 2017-05-22 15:02:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/pqvfy2h9y5v3/wish/173166949