P1 PSA Critique by Amanda Umberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA Photo 1 Period 1 - Final Project Critique en-us 2020-11-04 18:22:08 UTC 2020-11-08 22:59:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4f8.png Make sure you are Logged In! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/891439886 First thing you need to do is log in to your g.highlineschools.org account so that you can leave critique for your classmates and receive credit for this portion of the project!]]> 2020-11-04 19:10:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/891439886 Give the Photographer Feedback on their Project! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/891441216 Try to give feedback that points out something they did well and something they could do differently to make their work stronger next time!

Use sentence stems like: 
"I really like how you used..."
"Your images really make me feel..."
"I can easily see the story in your images because..."

and

"I wonder if..."
"What if you tried..."
"I think it would be stronger if you..."]]> 2020-11-04 19:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/891441216 Leave Critique for at least 5 classmates! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/891445136 Every student should receive no less than 3 comments on their work from different students. Try to go to as many student's websites as possible and give feedback to everyone!]]> 2020-11-04 19:11:30 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/891445136 Love your page 2517717 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894790789 I like that you changed your background for all your images, it shows the process from the streets to the ocean. You followed the rule of thirds and frozen motion very well.]]> 2020-11-05 16:44:03 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894790789 I like that you've changed your opinion on littering. I was the same way, almost thinking I was cool for littering, now whenever I see trash I just have to stop to pick it up. 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894794167 Your photos are really nice, that freeze motion really caught my eye.

]]> 2020-11-05 16:44:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894794167 4009481 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894796782 I like the phrase "There is No Planet B". It really opens people's eyes that we only have one home, and we should take care of it. You could make your images better by using different types of garbage.]]> 2020-11-05 16:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894796782 I like how you used the little figures and the idea of your photos 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894798689 2020-11-05 16:45:38 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894798689 i really like the way your pictures are taken they look really good 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894799273 2020-11-05 16:45:46 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894799273 4002692 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894800706 I like how you slowly progressed to worse and worse damage for the most part. More boarded up stores could have helped though.

]]> 2020-11-05 16:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894800706 4037974 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894806009 I really like the camera angle and technique you are using in your pictures to make the bottle stand out

I wonder if you could add like more plastic in the back ground to set a seen rather than just having one plastic bottle]]> 2020-11-05 16:47:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894806009 I really love how you used a very ongoing and important issue we have right now for your project. 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894806266 2020-11-05 16:47:14 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894806266 I really liked your photos they were clear and so is the message being sent through them 5001655 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894807971 2020-11-05 16:47:35 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894807971 4002692 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894811939 I like that your project instead of focusing on the negative of suicide only focused on the fact that their is help and that people can reach out.]]> 2020-11-05 16:48:28 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894811939 I love the lighting on your photos, it makes it more mysterious and goes really well with your topic 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894813852 2020-11-05 16:48:54 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894813852 4009481 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894814192 I like that the message is relatable. Not everyone has the time to attend classes due to responsibilities and other problems at home. You could improve your project by including your own images.]]> 2020-11-05 16:48:58 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894814192 4019734 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894814755 i really like how you showed your message and it was clear 

]]> 2020-11-05 16:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894814755 Very cool 2517717 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894816131 I like your series of images because  I can see the number of figurines dwindle then the last sad image comes up. The last image is very dramatic. The lighting was really good too..

]]> 2020-11-05 16:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894816131 40070471 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894817643 I really like the lighting of your image because it really fits with the feeling your trying to make ]]> 2020-11-05 16:49:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894817643 i like how you showed different kinds. the pictures looked good 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894817847 2020-11-05 16:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894817847 4037974 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894818430 I really like how you used your time and effort to go out your way to travel around Seattle to find picture and places you could take picture of

I wonder if you could improve on by trying to make your own message or idea like a poster and place it somewhere and take a picture of that instead. So we get the idea that you are the one doing it.]]> 2020-11-05 16:49:53 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894818430 ItsHimRyan https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894823013 I like how you got your message/idea across by your pictures. The pictures of them holding signs as to why they're wearing a mask is very important to show that they're taking things seriously. You could improve your project by having another picture of someone else holding a sign as to why they're wearing a mask.]]> 2020-11-05 16:50:49 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894823013 I really like your topic, it is very relatable 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894823111 2020-11-05 16:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894823111 4002692 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894824860 The lighting was really good I also liked how you showed the drugs slowly being "used" by showing the empty slots in the package]]> 2020-11-05 16:51:13 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894824860 4019734 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894826022 i liked how you used the pill and how it was clear in you paragraph ]]> 2020-11-05 16:51:28 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894826022 Love your pictures 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894826326 I love the series. it reminds me of a stop motion or like those scenes in the movies where it just becomes less and less people.]]> 2020-11-05 16:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894826326 I really like the issue you chose because that's something going on right now. 4051607 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894827164 2020-11-05 16:51:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894827164 I like how you used a variety of lighting in your photos 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894830680 2020-11-05 16:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894830680 4037974 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894831329 Your image was outstanding and how you used props and other people in your house to help you and how you were able to make your down calm all in the process

I wonder if you are able to show that your dog is hurt with the use of marker to show how badly the dog has been hurt]]> 2020-11-05 16:52:36 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894831329 4009481 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894832204 The message really alerts people to the reality of dog abuse. It explains the struggles dogs face and the difficulties of adopting and taking care of one. You could make your images better by comparing a loved dog and an abused one.]]> 2020-11-05 16:52:47 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894832204 your pictures look really good. 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894832835 2020-11-05 16:52:55 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894832835 Your image has great lighting 4051607 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894834945 2020-11-05 16:53:21 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894834945 4002692 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894836714 I like how you used a mask to show how our current pandemic has raised littering but I think to show how plastic is affecting our world you should have added some other trash overall I like your photos.]]> 2020-11-05 16:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894836714 I like the variety in backgrounds that you chose 4051607 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894838548 2020-11-05 16:54:04 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894838548 I like how you placed your photos on your website and how you used more than one person 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894839070 2020-11-05 16:54:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894839070 40070471 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894840118 I like how over time the dog looks more sad but one thing with one of the photos is the person that is supposed to be abusing the dog is smiling and for me at least it just feel a bit off but what I would do is make them look more mad but other than that it looks good ]]> 2020-11-05 16:54:25 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894840118 I really liked the experimental lighting in your picture and how the statement alerts and gives a better understanding 5001655 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894840383 2020-11-05 16:54:29 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894840383 4019734 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894841875 i really liked how you went to places that had something to do in your mood board ]]> 2020-11-05 16:54:48 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894841875 I like that you used a mask as your trash because you can literally find them everywhere on the ground 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894842826 2020-11-05 16:55:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894842826 Like your message 2517717 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894845471 The first are great frozen motion images and I like how you made the background blurry in the last image. I like that you changed your background, it shows that littering is everywhere.]]> 2020-11-05 16:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894845471 i really like the lighting you used in you pictures it really creates a mood 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894846494 2020-11-05 16:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894846494 ItsHimRyan https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894849012 I love how you can definitely see how the mood board inspired your pictures and how you utilized those images to create your own version. The lighting in each picture is great and having a dark background creates a serious tone about idea. I think some images could be a little clearer, like the bottles of pills.]]> 2020-11-05 16:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894849012 4002692 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894849388 I really liked how you showed everyone leaving as the user got worse and worse also how you slowly burnt his face that was really unique and showed drugs ruining his life physically.]]> 2020-11-05 16:56:21 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894849388 I like how each photo has an explanation, it really helps the viewer 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894849401 2020-11-05 16:56:21 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894849401 I think that using the mask as trash is a great idea because you can find those everywhere now 4051607 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894849982 2020-11-05 16:56:29 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894849982 I really liked the message in the being sent on your pictures and how well you were able to capture those emotions 5001655 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894851277 2020-11-05 16:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894851277 I really like how used your stuffed animals like people, i especially like the photo where they are getting cyber bullied 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894851771 2020-11-05 16:56:51 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894851771 4037974 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894852451 Your image looks really nice and mostly important how you are reminding people that they need to wear mask to keep other people safe

I wonder if you could take different type of picture of different masks maybe angle]]> 2020-11-05 16:57:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894852451 4019734 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894852916 i really love the last one it really surprise me how you did it ]]> 2020-11-05 16:57:06 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894852916 I support this message 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894853008 I really appreciate what you're supporting. ]]> 2020-11-05 16:57:08 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894853008 I also like how you explained each photo 4051607 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894854812 2020-11-05 16:57:31 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894854812 40070471 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894855363 Really nothing bad to say it all looks good and it was a good idea to use the mask to show your theme more ]]> 2020-11-05 16:57:39 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894855363 i like the topic you choose and your artist statement is good 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894855763 2020-11-05 16:57:44 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894855763 Yours is so creative i really like it. I love how you are teaching something that is very important! 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894857200 2020-11-05 16:58:01 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894857200 4009481 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894859694 The message is inspiring. Treat others how you want to be treated. To improve your project, you could include images with real people to convey emotion.]]> 2020-11-05 16:58:34 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894859694 Informative 2517717 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894859790 I like how you give instruction on how to wear, how to not wear, and how to dispose of the masks. Your message is very clear and helpful.]]> 2020-11-05 16:58:35 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894859790 4037974 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894862040 Your image looks very professional and really well made it shows that you put time and effort into your picture for it to be the way you want

I think your image would be stronger if you could show like the actual work of the construction like the motion]]> 2020-11-05 16:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894862040 i like how you made your pictures into like posters that have good information on them 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894862660 2020-11-05 16:59:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894862660 I like your photos and the plot of your project 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894862849 2020-11-05 16:59:13 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894862849 5001655 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894863627 I really liked how you were able to tell a story through these stories and figures]]> 2020-11-05 16:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894863627 4019734 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894865529 i can really relate to your topic]]> 2020-11-05 16:59:47 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894865529 I love your moodboards! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894867786 I only wish I could see the photos you were planning to capture as well. The images you used for inspiration were really interesting!]]> 2020-11-05 17:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894867786 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894868639 i loved the lighting and the black and white you used for your images it really sets a mood.]]> 2020-11-05 17:00:29 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894868639 2517546 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894870563 I really like your mood board and your artist statement!!]]> 2020-11-05 17:00:56 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894870563 ItsHimRyan https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894872702 I love how clear your pictures were, you were able to capture a very clear freeze motion picture and all of them have great lighting. You were also able to get your idea across and showed how your pictures related to your artist statement. I think if you used more props to show off that plastic is polluting the world, it would be great.]]> 2020-11-05 17:01:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894872702 your pictures looked really good 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894874202 2020-11-05 17:01:42 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894874202 4019734 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894875361 it really touched me i really like it 
and its true many people dont talk about it pero im glad someone did]]> 2020-11-05 17:01:55 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894875361 5001655 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894877988 I really liked your topic and how it is up yo date and actually involving what is going on in the world right now ]]> 2020-11-05 17:02:29 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894877988 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894881569 you really hit close to home. ]]> 2020-11-05 17:03:13 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894881569 Love it! 2517717 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894882382 I like how each picture has an explanation. All your images are strong and well captured.]]> 2020-11-05 17:03:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894882382 i like how you showed the liter in many different areas 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894883659 2020-11-05 17:03:37 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894883659 40070471 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894883722 I really like how you put the suicide hotline number in all the photos and I like how you used someone young in your photos because to me that show that even really young people can be suicidal ]]> 2020-11-05 17:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894883722 4009481 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894887047 The message is very informative. I never knew you had to snap the strings off when throwing away the mask. You could improve your project by including info on what to do if you have breathing difficulties.]]> 2020-11-05 17:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894887047 your website is put together really nicely and your photos look so good 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894890632 2020-11-05 17:04:59 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894890632 ItsHimRyan https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894897677 I really like how you were able to get your idea across through your artist statement and how your images related to your idea as well. You had great lighting as well. I do think you could get some more clearer pictures with better focus though.]]> 2020-11-05 17:06:17 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894897677 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894899105 thank you for speaking up about this topic because id rather get a phone call from my friend saying they need help rather than hearing that they're gone.]]> 2020-11-05 17:06:33 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894899105 i like how you used props like the paper 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894903299 2020-11-05 17:07:18 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894903299 40070471 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894905492 Like how in most of your images it has a nice view but then pollution takes over it ]]> 2020-11-05 17:07:37 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894905492 i really like how you are showing the wrong and right way to wear masks 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894911233 2020-11-05 17:08:47 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894911233 ItsHimRyan https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894913548 I really like how you showed off how important it is to treat dogs with love and care instead of hurting them. Your pictures really represented that message and I think the lighting in each image was great as well. I do think you could improve on the 2nd picture, I felt a little off when I saw the person smiling, I think if they had a more serious expression, it'd feel a bit more realistic.]]> 2020-11-05 17:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894913548 your mood board is really good it really shows the type of pictures you want to take 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894916622 2020-11-05 17:09:52 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894916622 Love your page 2517717 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894922067 I like your message of reaching out. and getting help. The mood board really shows your inspiration. ]]> 2020-11-05 17:10:52 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894922067 i liked how you showed multiple types of liter and used multiple locations 2510754 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894922349 2020-11-05 17:10:55 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894922349 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894924197 I love the image where your mom is smiling cause she cant take it seriously. I like the different moods in the photos. ]]> 2020-11-05 17:11:18 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894924197 40070471 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894933624 If I just looked at the image I would not tell what it’s about but when I read the descriptions of the photos I would say it looks good  ]]> 2020-11-05 17:13:03 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894933624 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894939283 i like that we chose similar topics, because it's almost like your page is one half and my page is the other half.]]> 2020-11-05 17:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894939283 this is exactly why i added my section about disposing of masks 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894948859 2020-11-05 17:16:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894948859 wow i cant stop looking at your images. i know what its like to have a dad in construction im glad you spoke up about a topic that really meant a lot to you and sharing personal things with our class. 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894956075 2020-11-05 17:17:41 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894956075 i like the props and images it kinda feels like a short film or an ad about bullying but in photo form. 5000127 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894970796 its a really important topic since were all living through social media and internet now. ]]> 2020-11-05 17:20:46 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/894970796 2517717 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/895068859 I like how you used masks because it's everywhere now. I think you could've added more props since your topic isn't just masks. Overall, your message is very strong and can be understood well.]]> 2020-11-05 17:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/895068859 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898230563 I like how how there is a nice background but you still clearly see the point of the photo and the concept doesn't get lost. The image gets straight to the point nut has an interesting background. ]]> 2020-11-06 16:43:03 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898230563 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898240819 I really like how to made three separate photos to tell a story and the way you damaged the toys and added the lighter and knife in the background. Just those aspects make a subtle impact to the viewer. ]]> 2020-11-06 16:45:20 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898240819 For your second image I like how the bottle is sort of camouflaged within the leaves, and you almost don't see it. It represents well the idea that it can be very easy to overlook the litter and garbage in our world. I also like in your fourth photo how you have the bottle almost centered, but you included a great expanse of the ocean, the water and the sky and the land in the distance. It shows how one single piece of garbage may not seem important, but it can affect so much. Well done. https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898243102 2020-11-06 16:45:51 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898243102 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898248948 I like how the multiple images tell a story and we understand the concept very clearly, and it is a playful way of telling a difficult topic. ]]> 2020-11-06 16:47:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898248948 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898261311 I like how you used this project to bring light and awareness to an important topic, and that all the pictures were impactful and explained the topic well. ]]> 2020-11-06 16:49:48 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898261311 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898268077 The lighting really fits the topic you are trying to explain through the images and it really sets a clear tone for it. I also like the effect of the black and white background gives it a serious tone to an important topic. ]]> 2020-11-06 16:51:19 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898268077 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898277022 I like how you picked a topic about things that are very relatable. A few months ago we were all doing remote learning and some people around the world are still going through that. ]]> 2020-11-06 16:53:29 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898277022 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898287272 I like how you picked a very important topic that affects many families around the world. I like how you made the pictures like a poster putting the phone number as well if they do need help, its very impactful. ]]> 2020-11-06 16:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898287272 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898294935 I like how the difference in lighting showed different moods of the dog. ]]> 2020-11-06 16:57:37 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898294935 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898319249 I like how you chose a topic of current importance. It's very important as not everyone sees the point of wearing masks. ]]> 2020-11-06 17:03:27 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898319249 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898334753 I like the usage of the sunlight, creating a lot of contrast in the photo. I also really like the use of the "Rule of Thirds" in a few of your photos. They were really well executed for being in a online learning system.]]> 2020-11-06 17:07:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898334753 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898365471 I like the concept, and it's something that needs to be talked about. It would be interesting if you could add your own photos to show us how you view it. How you would view depression in your photos.]]> 2020-11-06 17:14:04 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898365471 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898375511 I like the whole concept of it. It is definitely something we need to talk about and fix. I particularly like the last photo where you greatly focused on the garbage.
What I would suggest for future photos is to make sure the subject in question is clear and the background/ lighting isn't distracting you from the subject.]]> 2020-11-06 17:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898375511 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898387485 I like the lighting in the picture it gives it a cool effect. ]]> 2020-11-06 17:19:20 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P1PSA/wish/898387485