• "I really liked how....you used the dry brush technique to achieve realistic texture for the trees and rocks in your landscape painting.

  
  

• "One thing that stood out to me was...how you used your drawings to express your emotions. It made your artwork feel very real.

  
  

• "Your use of [colour/medium/technique] watercolour blending is very beautiful and calming—it matches your theme of nature perfectly.

2. Polish – Offer a suggestion for improvement

• "You could improve your work by..."

• "One area to work on might be..."

• "Consider refining the [medium/composition/theme] to make it even stronger."

3. Question – Ask a thoughtful question so that your classmate can reflect on his/her artistic skills

• "What inspired your choice of theme/materials?"

• "How did you overcome challenges in the process?"

• "If you had more time, what would you add or change?"

• "How do you think this piece connects to your overall growth as an artist?"

Another way you can improve is on being more adventurous in exploring more art mediums and do more drawings :))))

You could improve the general journal by adding in more dry mediums, which will enable you to explore even further for landscape pieces.

Why did you choose mainly wet mediums over dry mediums for each of your pieces?

2.the thing that stood out the most is the capybara and the proportion.

3.u can add darker shades for the hourse to make it look more realistic.

tshin kwan

I think you could maybe explore a little into trying more portraiture of animals and maybe humans or urban landscapes!! I think there's plenty of potential with that!

one thing that stood out to me was how you expressed your desire for freedom through your artworks.

I think you could improve by exploring more mediums.

2)You could improve your work by using the water color to make the objects to look further away instead of using a pen to outline it.

3) What inspired your use of the mix medium

i think you could explore other mediums other than charcoal and you could draw the darkest and lighter parts better

one thing that stood out to me was how you used coffee to make a flower in a vase and the splatter for the background

i think you could improve by exploring with colour in your artworks

One thing that stood out to me was how you combined your art work with the receipt

Your use of water color so calm and looks so real

You could improve your work by drawing better human figures

Could have improved on the dark and light shades for the cup to bring out even more realism in the drawing.

Where did u get the inspiration from?