Anthony G.'s Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Anthony Gonzalez https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC 2025-10-25 21:49:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236688 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236688 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236689 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236689 30 Basic Human Rights 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236691 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236691 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236692 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236692 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236693 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236693 Rough Draft 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236694 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236694 Final Draft 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236695 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236695 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236696 the point of view is 3rd person. the narrator is not part of the story because the story does not have ''i'' or ''me'' so the narrator is telling the story.]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236696 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236697 i think that there is two places that the story was unjust first is when theo is put to be a blacksmith but is not what he wanted to be and when he could not speak for a month because he was singing without any permission from the athoriteys ]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236697 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236698 main character: me one of the dreamers                                                side character: Anthony helps me with everything                     antagonist : officer De Santa he is the governers son and is the head of the police                                                  antagonist:swat and the entire police force from the city                               antagonist: the super secret police know one knows that they exist                                                           antagonist:the goverment makes the stupid rules   antagonist the mayor]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236698 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236699 the narriator faces a challeng by the goverment not leting them be as dumb as they whant to be and he loses lots of good brothers]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236699 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236700 he started to fight the goverment because the charecter found guns and gives some to the rebelion to fight and shoot at gaurds and the the bilduing the goverment is in ]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236700 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236701 my characters change because in the bigging of the story i was 13 and a the end i was 15  ]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236701 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236702 the most exiding momont is when the rebelion fights the govement (sounds like star wars)]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236702 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236703 my them is that you can be as dumb as you whant or as smart as you whant]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236703 Due Dates 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236704 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236704 Prompt 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236705 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236705 Theo's Song 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236706 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236706 Rubric 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236707 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236707 Point of View 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236708 the point of view is going to be 3rd person because im going to be in the story]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236708 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236709 the city of Los Damgales in the year of 2318 the goverment does not whant anybody to miss school because the goverment whants every body to be sucssfull and if you miss school you will be found and sent to a camp that will make you do exersize hard exersize  and if you do not go to the camp you will go to jail and get your brain removed the goverment removed all arcades vidiogame stores and  going to work late you will be exacuted and there is a group of people called the bilevers would create a rebellion and fight the goverment]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236709 Characters 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236710 Theo, Neema]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236710 Conflict 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236711 the government is deciding jobs without there choise Theo is told to be a blacksmith but he wanted to be a musican]]> 2017-12-14 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236711 Plot: Sequential 201001481 https://padlet.com/201001481/pms9nfteukuf/wish/216236712 Event #:1
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