https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay Brainstorming en-us 2020-08-31 13:54:44 UTC 2020-09-21 18:12:04 UTC hello@padlet.com 21liamm https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749788413 2020-09-15 22:05:56 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749788413 21liamm https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749788736 2020-09-15 22:06:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749788736 21liamm https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749790065 The two essays are similar in the way that they are both something that someone wouldn't tell anyone right off the bat. These were very personal and possibly secret stories. ]]> 2020-09-15 22:07:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749790065 21liamm https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749791997 Both stories were structured similarly but more different. One was just paragraph after paragraph, while the other had quotes and dialogue. ]]> 2020-09-15 22:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749791997 21liamm https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749793327 "I Shot My Brother" story sounds like a secret. The student even mentioned that he wasn't going to say anything until the essay. ]]> 2020-09-15 22:09:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749793327 21liamm https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749795278 The two are different in how they are structured and how the tone kind of sounded. ]]> 2020-09-15 22:11:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749795278 21liamm https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749796415 "Threatened By Isis"  was more of a suspenseful our tragic story. ]]> 2020-09-15 22:11:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/749796415 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/752628382 I wound up reading a ton of essays, but I thought the structure of "20 Questions" was particularly interesting. Following the essay's focus on the game 20 Questions, there was a yes or no question before (and separate from) each paragraph to introduce the next bit of information about the student.]]> 2020-09-16 17:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/752628382 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/753212683 2020-09-16 20:39:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/753212683 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/753214239 "Musical Movement" was just the author talking passionately about how they would combine their interests into a product that interested them (that also sounded pretty cool to me)]]> 2020-09-16 20:40:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/753214239 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/753725318 The essay "Fried Rice in One (not so easy) step", used humor and real life experiences to help the readers get to know the applicant, and I think this was really effective. ]]> 2020-09-17 01:37:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/753725318 silviamae https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/753836576 They both ended with a moment of growth.]]> 2020-09-17 02:28:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/753836576 21amanij https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/753889442 they talked about how they became them and why. Also what triggered their push to greatness

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]]> 2020-09-17 02:55:59 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/753890951 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754010181 Both essays told very vivid stories from the writers perspective about a past experience. "Dead Bird" suddenly switched topics and to share a completely different story that had an underlying connection to the original story.]]> 2020-09-17 04:08:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754010181 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754774122 2020-09-17 11:52:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754774122 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754776926 2020-09-17 11:54:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754776926 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754777710 2020-09-17 11:54:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754777710 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754783662 quite eye-catching ]]> 2020-09-17 11:57:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754783662 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754785505 2020-09-17 11:58:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754785505 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754794384 2020-09-17 12:03:23 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754794384 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754823138 I read one which mentioned their entire family and went into great detail about those relationships, while another mentioned no one but themself]]> 2020-09-17 12:15:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/754823138 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/764539354 I read A Study in Ambidexterity and The Blue Armchair. I would say the main topics for them would be balance and versatility, while the main theme for the second essay would be self-discovery and gaining awareness for one's self and their world ]]> 2020-09-21 15:02:47 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/764539354 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/764557280 they both have a main symbol that ties the theme and purpose of the essay together. for the first essay, it was his ambidexterity that lead him to explain his wide range of skills and easily adaptable personality. For the second essay the writer used her parent's bookstore, and specifically the blue armchair in the bookstore to get her main point across of growing up around her parent's business and self-growth and discovery.

]]> 2020-09-21 15:06:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/764557280 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/764579870 In A Study of Ambidexterity, the writer mainly just talked about themself and their own quality shaped who they are while the writer for The Blue Armchair talked about how her world and external factors shaped who she is.]]> 2020-09-21 15:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/764579870 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/764604521 A Study in Ambidexterity had a pretty casual ton, but it was also very straight to the point, in a light way. The Blue Armchair used a lot elaborate comparisons and imagery, that made the story more visual and rich.]]> 2020-09-21 15:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/764604521 https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/764645468 Both essays started with childhood memories and recollections and built off of that to describe themselves as a person]]> 2020-09-21 15:23:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/764645468 21isabellaa https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/765473502 While "I Shot My Brother" examined growth and transformation through familial relationships and the effects of jealousy on one's actions. "Food" strictly focused on the accomplishment of the writer, the fortitude it took to change their eating habits and the leadership roles they have now taken up.]]> 2020-09-21 18:09:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lwalton41/Essay/wish/765473502