https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482 Write an entry under each column about what you noticed from the essay. en-us 2018-10-24 20:02:42 UTC 2021-02-12 02:59:20 UTC hello@padlet.com debra_copeland https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1192753150 extremely, die hard hero, eager]]> 2021-02-11 15:23:08 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1192753150 debra_copeland https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1192764291 They never quit, they understand the big 🤬, that hard work pays off, and it pays off big time.]]> 2021-02-11 15:24:55 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1192764291 muhammadrahimnorislam https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194200373 die hard hero,powerful,give up]]> 2021-02-11 19:25:12 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194200373 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194226885 I notice his periods,commas, and his capitalized letters used correctly. ]]> 2021-02-11 19:30:11 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194226885 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194227430 This rubric would probably make a 3. The reason I would say that is because he stayed on the topic that he was  write about. He gave examples from a person's past.]]> 2021-02-11 19:30:17 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194227430 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194227746 Setting a goal is very important for your future.

]]> 2021-02-11 19:30:21 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194227746 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194228129 He made connections with a famous person and his past.]]> 2021-02-11 19:30:25 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194228129 muhammadrahimnorislam https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194228309 Setting a goal is extremely important for your future.  ]]> 2021-02-11 19:30:27 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194228309 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194228444 Micheal Jordan, Powerful, Die hard hero]]> 2021-02-11 19:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194228444 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194228739 3 ]]> 2021-02-11 19:30:32 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194228739 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194229142 This is a basic writers sentence. The reason I say that is because he used rhyme that sound basic.]]> 2021-02-11 19:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194229142 muhammadrahimnorislam https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194230692 3 because he had good sentence stem,and he had his intro and the body paragraph and a concision ]]> 2021-02-11 19:30:54 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194230692 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194231726 Setting goals is important for your future]]> 2021-02-11 19:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194231726 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194234673 His sentences are controlled and varied]]> 2021-02-11 19:31:42 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194234673 muhammadrahimnorislam https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194237985 That they never quit, They keep going ,These people are leaders and they motivate us to become strong and powerful]]> 2021-02-11 19:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194237985 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194238310 3]]> 2021-02-11 19:32:25 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194238310 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194238783 Die hard hero,eager,and give up]]> 2021-02-11 19:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194238783 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194240114 i would give him a 3 because he did do pretty good but he had some mistakes in there but it was pretty good overall. He also did have good paragraphs and he used good strong words.]]> 2021-02-11 19:32:45 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194240114 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194245795 2021-02-11 19:33:50 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194245795 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194245927 He compared many other famouse people on how they all never gave up on their dream or goal]]> 2021-02-11 19:33:52 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194245927 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194252724 i would give him a 3 because he has strong sentences but a few mistakes]]> 2021-02-11 19:35:05 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194252724 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194260110 Anias Gonzales]]> 2021-02-11 19:36:31 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194260110 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194267296 Die hard hero, never give up, tryhard all the time]]> 2021-02-11 19:37:54 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194267296 muhammadrahimnorislam https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194267727 That he used comma and he used the fanboy]]> 2021-02-11 19:37:56 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194267727 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194268391 How he used good words and used sucesfull people who completed their goals as examples]]> 2021-02-11 19:38:04 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194268391 debra_copeland https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194282212 There is a good organization with an introduction, 2 body paragraphs, and a conclusion.]]> 2021-02-11 19:40:53 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194282212 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194306598 I would give him a 3 because he did pretty good and their were some mistake and he had a good introduction the essay had good understanding.]]> 2021-02-11 19:46:00 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194306598 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194329696 The claim for this essay goal is extremely important for you future. ]]> 2021-02-11 19:50:52 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194329696 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194336589 2021-02-11 19:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194336589 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194340610 2021-02-11 19:53:17 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194340610 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194383925 I notice in the essay has comma periods and his capitalized.]]> 2021-02-11 20:03:00 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194383925 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194406925 I notice that he rhymed]]> 2021-02-11 20:08:35 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194406925 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194410963 The write compared many other famous people how they never give up on their dreams.]]> 2021-02-11 20:09:34 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194410963 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194480275 Never give up,try hard,powerful]]> 2021-02-11 20:27:20 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194480275 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194565642 That they never quit,they keep going,The people are leader and they motivate us to become strong and powerful.]]> 2021-02-11 20:49:01 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1194565642 https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1195219242 it has commas and periods and it rhymed ]]> 2021-02-12 02:58:55 UTC https://padlet.com/debra_copeland/pl0grcywa482/wish/1195219242