https://padlet.com/26eorellano/pkhymu6tqsbq Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:13:04 UTC 2019-12-10 17:10:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://media3.giphy.com/media/1pAhjnRmtv4HQaLbrR/giphy.gif 26jmurphy https://padlet.com/26eorellano/pkhymu6tqsbq/wish/421645062 You have made a lot of improvements from the two different times I read your story. You fixed some dialogue errors, punctuation errors, and key details in your story. But there were a few errors at the end of your story. For example when you said Amari felt even more confident then a person who said they could breath I was kind of confused. I even gave you an example of what you can do to fix that the last time I read you story.

]]> 2019-12-09 15:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/26eorellano/pkhymu6tqsbq/wish/421645062 26rcatallo https://padlet.com/26eorellano/pkhymu6tqsbq/wish/422280195 I like in the beging how you had good details. Also I really like how you made feel like i was in the story because of all of the good details. One thing yo ucan work on is where you put your dialoge because i saw that you did'nt put your dialoge in it's own line for 
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"I really liked your story," my friend said.]]> 2019-12-10 17:02:12 UTC https://padlet.com/26eorellano/pkhymu6tqsbq/wish/422280195