NORSYARMIMI BINTI AZIZAN by https://padlet.com/nsyarmimiazizan99/pk44zvggw0x3 KBA111 31 ( ELC231) MADAM SHARINA BINTI SAAD en-us 2019-03-18 02:53:40 UTC 2019-04-11 13:44:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Terminator.png THE THESIS STATEMENT AND TOPIC SENTENCES nsyarmimiazizan99 https://padlet.com/nsyarmimiazizan99/pk44zvggw0x3/wish/342228716 QUESTION 1 

Video Games and the negative effects can lead to violence? Video games are very popular in today’s society. People from all different ages play these games. The population has grown and video games are doubling in production. Even though violent games shouldn’t be exposed, playing for a long period of time can lead to violent behaviors. Now in today’s world it doesn’t matter if you’re young or a female, games attract many people. Since games are one of the biggest interests to people that means more time alone and not being social with others. Staying in and playing violent games for hours and even days at a time can affect you as a person. It can lead to personality changes. Like aggressive behavior, not wanting to socialize as much, and different moods you have never experienced before. Dr. Mario Vance a psychological researcher at the Rapture Institute has conducted a study on a seven year old. He notice there was a change in the boy’s behavior. He has also studied more than a thousand volunteers from gaming communities. The results of his study showed how overall aggression and violence occurred.
 
Thesis statement : Playing video games can lead to negative effects to people.
 
Topic sentences : Playing video games may cause violent such as aggressive, not wanting to socialize as much and different moods you have never experienced before.
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Smoking is a serious problem because it harms the health of both smokers and nonsmokers. However a viable two-part solution to the dangerous problem of smoking is to increase the tax on cigarettes and ban smoking in public places.

Topic sentences : 
Smoking can be prevent by increase the tax on cigarettes and ban smoking on public places.]]> 2019-03-18 04:17:10 UTC https://padlet.com/nsyarmimiazizan99/pk44zvggw0x3/wish/342236690 COMMENTARY EVALUATING nsyarmimiazizan99 https://padlet.com/nsyarmimiazizan99/pk44zvggw0x3/wish/350768145
The article illustrates that women should stay at home to raise their children. It highlight the importances of children growing up raising by their mother. It could help to improve their behaviour in order to improve the society. The author’s tone is objective because she/he think that the children will growing up better with their mother’s care.
 
Firstly, no one can take care of a child as well as their own mother. It is because a mother naturally knows what is the best for her child. As a proof, a survey has been carried and 80% of parents said that the stay-at-home mother are the best in giving children affection and attention. In addition, the children will be more secured in their environment.
 
The author believed that stay-at-home mother’s is crucial as she can teach her children valuable qualities at home. For example, she can be the one nurtures and demonstrates love and compassion in teaching her children to develop and be able to mould her children’s good character.
 
More over a stay-at-home mother greatest accomplishments in life is to teach and model good behaviour and moral strength. Children stepping into adulthood needed necessary tools to produce a successful society. For example, this self sacrifice of staying at home and raising children can be the most society enhancing job a women can do.
 
Next, a mother’s care also effectively curbs the aggression that is evident in daycare centre. For example, a study reported that children in daycare centres tend to get involves in a lo of fights,develop explosive behaviour and demand more attentions. This is because workers in day care centres are govern by strict rules which prevent disciplining children the way a mother can do at home. In summary, this has lead the youngsters of today to act negatively.
 
To conclude stay-at-home mothers should be proud of their role and be vocal about how productive they are for their families. The rewards of being personally involve in raising one’s own children greatly out weight the negatives.
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