https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355 Claims transitions and support en-us 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC 2026-03-03 01:28:05 UTC hello@padlet.com tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613522 At this point you can pull more material from your sources if you need further proof to back up your claim. You can return to the same secondary source multiple times, or you can have a back and forth between two sources with complimentary or contrasting information/arguments.]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613522 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613524 Statistically 70.6% of young people say they have seen bullying in their schools and 70.4% of school staff have seen bullying. When bystanders intervene, bullying stops within 10 seconds 57% of the time. (Source 6.) ]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613524 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613526

Use the closing sentence to show how this fits into the larger argument (the thesis) or to call attention to what needs to be further addressed (setting up the next claim).

]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613526 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613527 Yet, what is being done with all of these bystanders witnessing the bullying. If bullying stops within 10 seconds of intervening, why doesn’t everyone intervene? [10 on 1] ]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613527 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613528 The ‘So what?’ should be at least as long as the quoted material.
If you need to build a relationship or connection (is it part of a strand, repetition, binary; is it an exception to a larger pattern)  tothe next piece of evidence, do so.  ]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613528 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613529 Part of your explanation should build a relationship between this source and the next source being used to prove your point.]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613529 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613530

1) If you started with the Primary Source:
Introduce a Secondary Source (Follow the pattern for the Secondary Source)
2) If you started with a Secondary Source:
  | Introduce the Primary Source (Follow the pattern for the Primary Source) OR
  | Introduce another Secondary Source

]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613530 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613531 The victim is depicted helpless. On the ground, arms being held above his head by two bullies, with no one around to help him. One kid is standing over him and the other seems to be holding his arms. Another kid is in the foreground simply watching what is happening to the victim.]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613531 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613532 If you start with the secondary source, it’s usually because you want to focus on the complaint or moment rather than the pitch of the primary source.
1) to introduce the quote with a signal phrase:a. “In the words of; According to; As X notes, etc.
2) Put quotes around language directly from the text,
AND/OR
3) Paraphrase longer passages.
4) cite your information using MLA format (Tidwell 16).

]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613532 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613533 If you start with the primary source, it’s usually because you want to focus on the specifics of that particular source (the pitch), rather than the complaint or moment  You should expand or adapt this material in ways that will lead to your secondary source material. Use the 10 on 1 exercise, saying more about less in a way that sets up your secondary source information. ]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613533 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613535 The words along the poster state “He can’t do it alone! Stand up to bullying TODAY!” It’s trying to appeal to your sense of pathos. It’s telling you to stand up to bullying but the person being bullied can’t even physically stand up, let alone defend himself.]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613535 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613536 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613536 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613537 State your claim (what part of the thesis you are trying to prove/explore):]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613537 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613538 As a useful example of propaganda, it’s supposed to make you feel what the person being abused in the poster is feeling. It’s meant to belittle you and make you feel shameful for not standing up and not being a true American for it.]]> 2018-10-22 18:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295613538 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295665419 Using the specific words ‘sacrifice’ and ‘everything’ in the quote, causes discrepancy between the ones who’ve given up more than Colin 
and the ones who compromise. ]]> 2018-10-22 19:26:38 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295665419 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295691470 2018-10-22 20:32:37 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295691470 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295691488 Many artist use music videos to make the lyrics or music they are presenting to make it become powerful. Viewing the music videos artist produce can help people make connections to what they are hearing, they can also feel as though they are apart of it. ]]> 2018-10-22 20:32:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295691488 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295692247 Luxury ties to social status when one buys luxurious items to boost self-esteem and feeling of acceptance is boosted when purchasing or obtaining such items.]]> 2018-10-22 20:34:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295692247 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295692891 Society sees gamers as basement dwellers but the games they play can help them make money and help them improve with certain jobs where they need to be precise]]> 2018-10-22 20:36:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295692891 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295693431 It is shown that games can help with certain job positions as stated by Dr. Peter Gray, “Many studies indicate that video games improve job performance, especially for jobs that require good eye-hand coordination, attention, excellent working memory, and quick decision-making” (Gray, “Cognitive Benefits of Playing Video Games”)]]> 2018-10-22 20:37:41 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295693431 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295693735 Images play a very important role how we experience the world and can shape it as well. According to Gill visual economy remains ageist, (dis)ablist and heteronormative. (Katrin Tiidenberg).  ]]> 2018-10-22 20:38:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295693735 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295694436 When do fans actually realize that if my team wins a 100 games or lose a 100 games how is my personal lives being affected by the result. Asking this question, gets me to look at things from their perspective. For some of these fans they are born into it, its their religion and part of their lifestyle. Just like an Ohioan would have been upset about losing to Purdue, they have a right to feel that way as they are invested in the club. 

]]> 2018-10-22 20:40:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295694436 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295695407 In an article about social anxiety it was stated that ”subjects who feel powerless purchase luxury items bought them to compensate for their lack of social power and low status (Hutson 13).”]]> 2018-10-22 20:43:19 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295695407 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295695719 A good example of making money playing video games would be the website twitch where people livestream the games they are playing and can make a lot of money doing that.  ”Tyler "Ninja" Blevins told CNBC's "Squawk Alley" about how he manages to earn more than $500,000 per month playing the "Fortnite" game”(Kim, Tyler "Ninja" Blevins told CNBC's "Squawk Alley" about how he manages to earn more than $500,000 per month playing the "Fortnite" game)]]> 2018-10-22 20:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295695719 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295696110 Games help people get better qualified for certain jobs and in the process of them playing games more job opptuinities open for the gamers.]]> 2018-10-22 20:45:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295696110 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295697111 In an article on anti-semitism, it is shown that today, around the world, Jews, and other religious groups are being criticized and judged for being who they are, and what they grewup with and what they believe in. It may not be as bad as it used to be, but it is still bad today and a real problem.]]> 2018-10-22 20:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295697111 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295697720 Religious discrimination is still a big problem today and it needs to be solved, just because someone believes in something that someone else may not, doesn’t mean they should be judged and discriminated against.]]> 2018-10-22 20:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295697720 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295697858 2018-10-22 20:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295697858 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295697880 The risk being involved in these athletes playing for no fortune is something that should be considered in rather college athletes should be paid. Their work on the field is highly a reason for why there is so many money being made off the field for the program. It is a risk taken by athletes who don’t get paid to go out perform in what is considered a violent sport. ]]> 2018-10-22 20:51:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295697880 neumeyer_15 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295698142 Animal testing is injustice. The animals should get the rights that they deserve. They all deserve a family to keep them safe and endless love and attention.]]> 2018-10-22 20:52:34 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295698142 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295698527 People around the world are going to different countries under a certain religion and being kidnaped, tortured and killed on camera to show the world what happens if you come to our country under religions other than theirs. The world is relatively safe, but there’s still so much work to still be done to solve these problems.

]]> 2018-10-22 20:54:14 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295698527 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295698587 Material goods can and do influence how people are viewed in society. Those who own it all are much more likely to be repeated than one who owns very little. No matter the social class, race, age, genderm etc. people will and do spend money to make at least them self’s feel better about their place in life.]]> 2018-10-22 20:54:25 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295698587 neumeyer_15 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295699585 Primary source evidence:
The puppy in the picture is not getting the life that he deserves. He is stuck in the cage unless he is being pricked with needles while getting tested on. He is not getting a family like he deserves or endless love and attention. The little puppy is sticking his paw out of the cage like he wants attention and love. However he is not getting it now while he is young and needs it and probably never will. ]]> 2018-10-22 20:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295699585 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295699839 The difference between the union then and now, then the union would bring people together and care about what is happening to the people. Now people are more concerned with what is happening with themselves because people now are more independent. 

]]> 2018-10-22 20:58:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295699839 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295700440 2018-10-22 21:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295700440 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295700482 There are a number amount of these collegiate athletes getting injured. Some even missing out on a chance to go pro because of injury. NCAA makes millions of dollars off these athletes. What if there were no athletes to have a sports team? These schools would lose a tremendous amount of money. ]]> 2018-10-22 21:00:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295700482 neumeyer_15 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295701638 The puppy probably never will get the love and attention he deserves because most animals in animal testing are there until they die. The poor little puppy doesn’t have the rights to do what he wants which is be to be loved, cuddled, played with, and fed.]]> 2018-10-22 21:04:29 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295701638 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295701727 Jessie J's music video represents women of all ethnicity, body shapes, religion, age, disabilities, and a whole lot more. By creating her music video she is making her lyrics stronger and she is including the viewer into the video. ]]> 2018-10-22 21:04:46 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295701727 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295701766 Anti-Semitism today has changed a lot from what it used to be, people don’t have to live in fear as much as they used to.]]> 2018-10-22 21:04:55 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295701766 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295702027 Fans are affected by their team wins and losses as they might feel like they invest their time and the fact that it isn’t something they should care about but they do gives them a right to be upset or happy. ]]> 2018-10-22 21:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295702027 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295703002 Anti-Semitism today is and will always be better than it was back in WWII]]> 2018-10-22 21:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295703002 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295703179 “In the past, unions were probably the most important organized interest group for working class Americans in Washington. But today, unionized workers are more affluent than they were in decades past, while the groups most in need of representation remain largely non-unionized.”]]> 2018-10-22 21:09:55 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/295703179 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/296162160 This makes women feel pressured to the images that are seen in magazines or on social media thinking that they have to uphold that standard, which ]]> 2018-10-23 19:24:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/296162160 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/296164064 “leads people – particularly (young) women – to feel inadequate and dis- satisfied with themselves” (Kartin Tiidenberg 79) ]]> 2018-10-23 19:28:10 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/296164064 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/296653973 On the otherside of the agrument from the history website says that the workers from early unionizing wanted more than just equal pay and safe working conditions. They wanted to protect those who were injured or wanted to retire to have the health benefits they needed.]]> 2018-10-24 19:21:41 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/Bodyparagraphs355/wish/296653973