Ghostbusters by Abigail Boswell

Refusal of the call

boswella2026 — 2024-03-25 16:27:49 UTC

Peter has no intention of answering the call but Ray insists and convinces him to go. Once there Peter exclaims his disbelief in the paranormal.

Meeting the mentor

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 02:38:54 UTC

Both Ray and Egon are the mentors of the story because of their knowledge and belief in the paranormal. Peter learns everything from them throughout the entirety of the film. Those two are the true experts in the movie.

Crossing the threshed

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 02:41:59 UTC

They saw their first ghost. Peter makes fun of Ray and Egon until they come across a beautiful ghost.They try to talk to her and make contact with the ghost but then she turns into a hideous zombie looking creature and rushes at them. They are all scared so bad they run out of the library. Once they get back to the university they find out that they all have been fired and that is when Peter has the genius idea to start their own business, and that is how Ghostbusters was born!

Allies, trials and Enemies

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 03:03:57 UTC

They have a hard time at first, they invest money into an abandoned Firehouse and invest time and money into buying equipment that works to catch Ghosts. This is where they meet Winston. The are able to by ad time for commercials and Ray and Egon find and fix up their very own Ghostbuster vehicle. Peter meets there very first client Dana. She comes into their office to tell them about a possible Ghost named ¨Zule". Peter tells her he will come take a look at her house but when he does he finds nothing. He gives her his number and tells her to call if anything else happens. It is then that they get their first office call from a hotel nearby. Introducing SLIMIER!! They were able to capture Slimier only after destroying the Hotels dinning room. It is then that the Ghostbusters are officially open for business. Due to this the Ghostbusters get a lot of attention and start getting calls every other second. And now they meet their human antagonist...Walter Peck. Long story short Walter does not believe they are the real deal and wants to see were they store all the ghosts. This causes issues down the road.

Approaching the Innermost cave

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 03:38:12 UTC

Dana and her neighbor Louis are possessed by the key master and gate keeper or ¨Zule¨. Ray and Winston (The fourth member of the Ghostbusters) discover that the judgement day is coming close due to all the activity that they've had over the past few weeks.

Women as temptress

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 03:42:33 UTC

While Dana is possessed she tries to seduce Peter thinking he ´ s the key master. It almost works since Peter has been flirting and very interested in Dana since he met her.

Supreme ordeal

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 03:53:19 UTC

Peter gives Dana a tranquiler and meets up with the rest of the guys. Louis the other guy possessed is in the care of the other Ghostbusters. And Just when it couldn't get any worse...Peck hits them with a court order to shut off their containment machine. This leads to huge explosion the releases all the ghosts onto New York city. Peck has the Ghostbusters arrested and this is when Louis escapes to find Dana and open the World of Gozer where Zole is waiting. The Busters discover while in Jail that the main source of the problem is Danas building because it was built by a cult. It was designed to channel Ghosts to hopefully end the world. There were lines under all of New York city that ended at her building It almost looked like a mainframe.

Reward

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 12:55:31 UTC

WHO YA GONNA CALL!!....The mayor reliving they Buster were right releases them from jail to save New York city. They are finally taken seriously. The reward is them having 110% support from the people of the city and the Ghost guard.

The Road back

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 12:56:49 UTC

They can never go back to their original lives but they can return to being the Saviors of New York which they did. They are once again respected and celebrated.

Resurrection

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 13:03:27 UTC

Peter desperately wants to save Dana so they run to her building right as a huge earthquake hits. They live and reach the top and face off agents Gozer and think they've won when she disappears. She tells them to choose what will be their final distraction. ....Here comes the State-puff mash mellow man!!! Hes so big they can defeat them individual so they make them choose to cross their beams. BOOM! The mash mellow man is dead and they were able to save Dana and Luis's.

Return with prize

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 13:04:20 UTC

The Ghostbusters return to New York City victories in there mash mellow covered glory and the city cheers as Peter and Dana kiss.

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 13:16:41 UTC

Ordinary World

boswella2026 — 2024-03-26 13:25:29 UTC

Peter Venkmen does not take his Job seriously. He takes it as a joke and mostly has fun with his experiments until his friends Ray and Egon get a phone call about a possible ghost sitting in the New York public library.