Plot by RYAN NGUYEN

Exposition

nguyerya000 — 2015-12-10 17:06:29 UTC

Paul starts out by moving to tangerine and meeting friends like Joey. After a little while tangerine starts to get mysterious with smoke coming from a muck fire and it starting to rain at the same time everyday.

Rising action

nguyerya000 — 2015-12-10 17:08:25 UTC

Soon Paul's whole schools gets swallowed by a sinkhole and makes him go to a new school. He starts meeting new people like Tino and Victor on the schools soccer team.

Climax

nguyerya000 — 2015-12-10 17:08:48 UTC

A guy on Eriks team gets struck by lightining and all Erik and his friend does is laugh. Pauls friend joe gets mad at him and Erik punches tino in the face. Luis comes up to Erik face to face and fights him then Arthur gets out a blackjack and hits him with it.

Falling action

nguyerya000 — 2015-12-10 17:09:33 UTC

One week later Luis dies because of a clot and Erik doesn't get accused of it. Pauls soccer team never lost and might win the regionals. There is a ceremony for mike and victor and Tino beat up Arthur and Erik and escape because of Paul's help.

Resolution

nguyerya000 — 2015-12-10 17:09:48 UTC

Paul goes to a meeting and the police find out who a robber is which is Erik and Arthur. Then Arthur goes to jail because of murder and robbery and Erik goes to because of association of the murder.

Conflict

nguyerya000 — 2015-12-10 17:10:07 UTC

Pauls life is surrounded by the Erik fisher football dream, Pauls eyesight makes his life more difficult