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Re-shoot unfocused shots by changing the aperture for optimum visuals. 

Make use of diverse angles and make sure my scene stays interesting and eye capturing. ]]> 2017-06-28 10:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lalala730101/pf8ln5x0bitx/wish/177638984 lalala730101 https://padlet.com/lalala730101/pf8ln5x0bitx/wish/177639852 Add more diverse shots to make it look more interesting.]]> 2017-06-28 11:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/lalala730101/pf8ln5x0bitx/wish/177639852 really good, throughly enjoyed it. would possibly use more common names. also add more sound tension. x lalala730101 https://padlet.com/lalala730101/pf8ln5x0bitx/wish/177719901 2017-06-29 08:31:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lalala730101/pf8ln5x0bitx/wish/177719901