Remake of Remake of Show Don't Tell Sensory Writing- A by Nicole Allen https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub Write a sentence focusing on sensory touch details about one of the following - a sunburn, a kitten, or a woolen sweater. en-us 2016-10-12 03:38:05 UTC 2016-10-13 17:47:36 UTC hello@padlet.com Tess Sullivan https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102251 It a clear blue sky without any clouds in the sky. The sun was beating so hard that faithful day. I was at the beach minding my own business than an obnoxiously loud man came and screamed so loud. I was to busy looking st the spectacle he was making rather than putting on sunscreen! When I got home my sunburn started to hurt. When I got home it felt like their was people stomping on my back and their feet were on fire. It hurt so bad! Then the next morning I had to peel of the skin. It remind me of taking off the plastic on an iPhone. That day may of been the worst day of my life.]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102251 Molly McCrae - Sunburn mollemccr https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102264 I step into my old, wooden house. The door creaks behind me while I blink in pain. I stumble back as I attempt to tramp across the room, trying to make my way into the bathroom.
"Out of all the days?!" I mourn. As I look into the mirror, I take a sharp breath, burning sensations starting to fill my body with ache. The redness seemed to have amassed since I got back from the beach, making my head throb with pain. ]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102264 Alex Lambert-A Sunburn https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102272 My body throbbed in the pain of a sunburn all over my back. The burn felt like a million hornets stinging into my side getting ready to throw my next pitch. On my shoulder it was all blazing so it felt bad to throw. After the game I went to take a relaxing shower but I couldn't. It felt so bad I skipped my shower and my mom now turned into one of those pessimistic doctors and brought me to the doctor. She said that I had some sort of symptom and my mom just passed out when she heard that right on the floor.  When we poured water on her she finally woke up and we went out to get a treatment for it and we got ice cream.]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102272 Luke https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102278 I once I had a sun burn. It wasn't very severe. All I felt was a tingling on my back. I got the sun burn surfing at the beach. It was totally worth it, there were 10 ft waves with perfect overhead barrels. The feeling of being inside your first barrel is amazing. You know that if you fall, you could be seriously hurt. That fear is what causes you to love it. The sun slight sting of the sun burn was nothing compared to the misty air inside of a wave.]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102278 Caleb Williams  https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102282 My sunburn was peeling as I tried to move from the kitchen ,my body was in pain (#WhatABurn). I looked red. I felt burnt. I Smelt burnt. And my hand tasted like Bacon.]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:24 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102282 Nathan Clark Sunburn nathaclar https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102292 My whole body ached as I feel the heat of my sunburn. How could such a fun day result in such pain? Even aloe doesn't help. I feel my sunburn again and it burns as if I got stung by a wasp. It feels as if the sunburn will last forever. It's too late for sunscreen now.]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102292 Vera Judkins - Kitten https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102293 As I walk into the building, I can feel myself fill with joy at the many sounds of barking, from the largest dog to the smallest yip of a chihuahua.  Anticipation flows through me at the thought of my very own puppy, but  suddenly, a strange, soft creature brushes by my leg in a spur of playfulness, pouncing upon each object in the room, one after another.  The mysterious ball of fluffy excitement stops and turns its curious, blue eyes towards me.  Before I know it, the fragile being is at my legs, tugging on my tan, khaki shorts.  Realization hits me as I sit in the sticky, leather seat of my mother's car, a large plastic crate sitting on my lap. No puppy is to be found within the depths of the cage, but a kitten. My very own kitten.]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102293 Liam Flynn- A sunburn liambflyn https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102300 As I walked through the yard, I felt the hot burning sun reflected on my right shoulder, as the pale, dry skin now slowly rips and rips off of my shoulder. The sun shoots the burning, painful shots throughout my shoulder, as it creates a sunburn. The burning painful sunburn I now have is as if someone is shooting a fork into my right shoulder. My shoulder now turns red as blood as it keeps on burning. At night, trying to sleep, the sunburn keeps on giving me the screeching pain that has now expanded throughout my entire arm.]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102300 Danielle Aubee- A Kitten https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102306 As I reached for the small kitten I felt it's warm, fluffy fur. The kitten was so delicate it seemed with the slightest touch it would shatter. In the background I herd my mom say, "How much for this kitten?". As I picked up the kitten it squeaked out a, "Mew!" and I felt my face blush at the sound. Before I knew it I was walking out the door with my first small, puffy kitten.]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102306 Ben Fargo ᕦ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ᕤ └(°ᴥ°)┘ᘳ◔ᴥ◔ᘰʕ•ᴥ•ʔ[̲̅$̲̅(̲̅ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°̲̅)̲̅$̲̅] https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102307 The warm, fuzzy feeling of the feline rubbing up against my face was majestic. The fluffy ball of joy purred as he fell in a vast slumber in my arms. Dreams flowed through the mind of the cat, mice and birds filled the imagination. Skittle awoke with a jump. The multicolored cat looked around in fear. Skittle realizes he isn't alone. He now realizes, there is jittery Chihuahua in the bed of his own. ]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102307 Ben Crandall SUNBURN  https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102308 I went to the beach and I did not know that when I came home I  had a sunburn. So when I touched my shivering bed my neck began to sting as if a 100 bees stung me in one spot. I got off my bed and sprinted into the bathroom to get some aloe to sooth my aching neck. Then when i put on the aloe it smothered my neck in pain for only a few seconds and then it felt like my neck had been rubbed by an angel.  ]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102308 Megan Eddy-Joost Kitten https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102336 The little kitten appeared from the dark corner searching for her mother, but she was long gone. The kitten came over to me she was as soft as a teddy bear. Her nose was as cold as and icicle. But she was the warmest thing i ever held. The kitten followed me home and I named her Janelle. Everyone that meet her loved her.]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102336 Josh Bubar Sunburn  https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102337 One day I went to my friend Tyler's Lake. I forgot to put on sunscreen and that was where my mistake was. He has a boat and we went out on the boat all day to get pulled my the boat on the tube. The sun was beating down on me. It was about 90 degrees outside. We had to lay down on our stomach's and so the sun was beating down right on out backs. When we where done for the day we went inside and my whole entire back of my body was hurting really bad. I went to look at it in the mirror and my back was bubbling and beat red. I had to put aloe on it to make the heat and pain go away, but that still didn't really help. I could barely sleep that night and the next day we just hung out inside for a while, so it didn't get any worst. ]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102337 A Kitten - Tatiana Pezza https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102369   A small creature scrabbled across the waxed floor, grasping for a hold on the shining planks. The kitten's fur was of a mottled shade, crimson, brown, and white all brought together with undertones of ebony. It's eyes glowed bright blue like cool fire, now open and exploring the scene around him. He hissed, his paws splaying out as he slipped. Chin hitting the fur and tail sticking straight out, the rare calico kitten got up yet again. Trying to block out the sounds of his needle-sharp claws raking across the newly shined ground, he growled, determined that he would get all the way across the room.]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:36 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102369 Mitchell Daniell -A kitten mitctdani https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102376 A kitten, gray like the clouds it jumps with joy. It runs up to me it. The kitten felt as if it was a cloud or cotton candy. It purrs so soft but seems so happy I'm petting him. The the kitten ]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:36 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102376 Emma Dion - Sunburn  https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102408 The heat from the sun was burning agents my tan back. It heat felt like there was a fire burning a hole right threw me. The skin was ripping and peeling of the back of my neck. Everything felt like I was going to melt.  ]]> 2016-10-12 12:51:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102408 ^ https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102445 2016-10-12 12:51:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102445 Grace Levi -sunburn https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102564
I have a sunburn. I have excruciating pain, my skin feels like it's going to fall off. People keep touching it.
It  feels as if someone threw me in a fire. Help.
My skin is falling off.
I am running a marathon in the sun.
It's 96 degrees. Help.
I'm dying.
Help..
]]> 2016-10-12 12:52:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102564 Sierra Joslin- Kitten  siermjosl https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102702 The kitten; black as night walked up to me. He purred once I petted  him. He felt like a cloud that had just been in the wind for days. His fur was fluffy as cotton candy that just came out of the machine. He purred and purred until I stopped. ]]> 2016-10-12 12:52:29 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102702 Maximus Lagor - Sunburn  https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102729 I have a sunburn on my face, it burns and stings so bad. it feels like the the sun just slapped me in the face and worst part is I look like a burnt chicken nugget]]> 2016-10-12 12:52:36 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102729 Nicholas Guilmette    Kitten https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102924 we got a new kitten at a shelter today. His fur feels like a full bag of cotton candy. The kitten is warm and super fuzzy. The cat purrs as I pet him. Right then name him Skitten. The cats fur is rainbow because he was dyed that color. The cats eyes are black because he wants revenge on the fake mouse in the play room. The cat bolts away with its fluff fur and runs into the playroom and destroys the mouse. Skitten's eyes become green like grass because the mouse has died, even though the mouse never was living.


]]> 2016-10-12 12:53:16 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130102924 Matt Beaudry Sunburn  https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130542851 I went to the beach today. I forgot to put on sunscreen. I got home and when I woke up the next day, looked in the mirror. I looked like a red tomato. I touched my shoulder and it felt like a 1,000 bees just stung me in the shoulder. My back feels like it is on fire. ]]> 2016-10-13 17:45:09 UTC https://padlet.com/nicole_allen1/pewc3s8nj0ub/wish/130542851