https://padlet.com/27kvelizacuna/pdh74awujpbglj9v Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 16:53:59 UTC 2025-10-09 03:54:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f43c.png 27cbirck https://padlet.com/27kvelizacuna/pdh74awujpbglj9v/wish/1514730138 Your essay was GREAT!!!  I loved the way you put your first couple lines of your essay!  “Imagine a classroom full of shoes tapping and pencils swirling through a piece of paper.  Instead of writing down notes kids are doodling and creating masterpieces but the teacher does not see it as something fun she gets furious and tells the kids to focus.”  WOAH!!  There is a lot of detail in that sentence!  (I also relate of doodling on pieces of paper, and the teacher being mad too).  I really liked your ending sentence too!  “As Pablo Picasso said “Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life.”  That ending sentence really left me on a good note and makes me want to read more of your pieces.  The one wish I have is to add some comas, or shorten sentences so they aren’t as long.  Other than that your piece is amazing, and really blows me away!
-Caitlin :)]]> 2021-05-11 18:21:26 UTC https://padlet.com/27kvelizacuna/pdh74awujpbglj9v/wish/1514730138