https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44 Type your NAME and number the questions as you answer them below. en-us 2016-11-18 13:42:25 UTC 2018-10-16 21:58:13 UTC hello@padlet.com jennifer_burak https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/159733609 1. What is the BEST way to revise sentence 9? 
2. Why?]]> 2017-03-13 16:12:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/159733609 jennifer_burak https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/159734217 3. Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 14? 
a. For example
b. However
c. Soon
g. In conclusion

4. Why?]]> 2017-03-13 16:14:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/159734217 jennifer_burak https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/159735068 2017-03-13 16:16:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/159735068 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160248626 1. The shoes quickly became popular because they were comfortable and easy to clean. Because the original sentence is comma splicing.]]> 2017-03-15 13:52:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160248626 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160251030 3. choose C because if it was for example, it would be saying that sentence 14 is an example. It isn't however because it is still talking about them being a quite shoe. And in conclusion is wrong because it isn't the end of the story.]]> 2017-03-15 13:59:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160251030 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160251239 The shoes quickly became popular because they were comfortable and easy to clean. I chose A because it's talking about how the shoes became popular, and that's what the paragraph was talking about.

]]> 2017-03-15 14:00:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160251239 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160254123 The shoes quickly became popular because they were comfortable and easy to clean.


]]> 2017-03-15 14:08:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160254123 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160254345 The shoes quickly bacame  popular because they were comfortable and easy to clean .]]> 2017-03-15 14:08:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160254345 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160255145 The shoes quickly became popular because they were     comfortable and easy to clean]]> 2017-03-15 14:10:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160255145 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160255762 The shoes quickly became popular because they were comfortable and easy to clean.]]> 2017-03-15 14:12:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160255762 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160256436 I choose C]]> 2017-03-15 14:14:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160256436 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160256905 2017-03-15 14:15:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160256905 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160256916 B is my answer

]]> 2017-03-15 14:15:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160256916 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160257632 My answer is C because if it was soon people were referring that more sense than the other answers.]]> 2017-03-15 14:17:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160257632 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160258223 I choose c]]> 2017-03-15 14:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160258223 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160272579 I choose C]]> 2017-03-15 14:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/160272579 https://padlet.com/jennifer_burak/pcta45uj3w44/wish/293618584


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