https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt Haoyang Jiao en-us 2020-07-02 10:14:59 UTC 2023-02-22 15:27:24 UTC hello@padlet.com HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647655907 Firstly, I totally agree with Wang’s and Yeh’s statement. 

I'd like to discuss the Culture Hybridisation in fashion area. I'll research the examples that how fashion designers combine Chinese culture with western culture and how they create new collections or products. 

I have already found and laid out 5 designers who managed to combine these 2 different culture into their design works. They are Angel Chen's, Jun Zhou's and Yushan Li's designs from China, John Galliano's designs in Christian Dior 2003 Spring Couture and Marc Jacob's designs in Louis Vuitton Spring 2011 Ready-To-Wear. 

And I find that it is quite interesting that the Chinese designers have different thoughts and methods from the western designers in how to use Chinese culture into garment design. Maybe this idea can also be a part of the essay cause it is worth researching to me.]]> 2020-07-05 11:59:38 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647655907 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647660337 Angel Chen's design works in 2019

]]> 2020-07-05 12:20:57 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647660337 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647660839 Jun Zhou's and Yushan Li's design works in 2020]]> 2020-07-05 12:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647660839 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647661414 Christian Dior Spring 2003 Couture by John Galliano]]> 2020-07-05 12:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647661414 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647661683 Louis Vuitton Spring 2011 RTW by Marc Jacobs]]> 2020-07-05 12:26:32 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647661683 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647662136 Hi, Tara. Could you please comment anything under this post cause I'm not sure whether you could see this padlet. 😆 Thanks for that. 

Hi Haoyang - it’s Tara yes it looks very good! You can also enable comments so I can write underneath your ideas...]]> 2020-07-05 12:28:47 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/647662136 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/665796189 2020-07-30 12:41:56 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/665796189 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/665796569 1.Define Chinese aesthetic & Western aesthetic
2."new blood" - not sure; "fresh aesthetic" change into "fresh look/trend"
3.Change the order of description of fashion and craftsmanship
4. The introduction part is a little bit long.
5.Be more specific when explain "juxtaposition". (not too deeply)
6.Think about how to define each examples.
7. Change the word "enlighten".
8.The final sentences need to be much stronger.]]> 2020-07-30 12:42:36 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/665796569 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/665799928 2020-07-30 12:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/665799928 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/665837370 2020-07-30 13:44:32 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/665837370 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/666498247 https://miro.com/app/board/o9J_kp85oDs=/]]> 2020-07-31 10:03:56 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/666498247 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/666499361 2020-07-31 10:09:08 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/666499361 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/682396903 2020-08-17 08:07:22 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/682396903 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/682397168 2020-08-17 08:07:53 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/682397168 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/682472355 1) Make the thesis statement & my argument more clearly. Maybe can mention "what is juxtaposition" in first paragraph. MOST IMPORTANT THING IS MY VOICE!! AGREE OR DISAGREE!!

2) Change the word in discourse paragraph 1: try to (seems like not confident) & designers designed.

3) Change the word in discourse paragraph 2: With the passage of time.

4) Mention "cultural symbol"&"aesthetic influence" from discourse paragraph in first paragraph.

5) "Three different methods of... shows the various motivations and aesthetic influence in next paragraphs." Put this sentence after the second discourse paragraph. (Maybe can also mention the "motivation of designers" in first discourse paragraph in order to give a link.)

6) Examples: Why it isn't juxtaposition? What is that mean? REASONS & RESULTS!!

7) Examples: topic sentences & signposting & why this example supports the thesis statement.

8) Change the word "methodologies"

9) Conclusion: repeat the argument clearly & consider the structure of the long sentences (maybe can be shorter)]]> 2020-08-17 10:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/682472355 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/682479263 1) BE BRAVE & CONFIDENT
2) MY VOICE
3) SIGNPOSTING & LINK IN EVERY PARAGRAPHS
4) REASONS & RESULTS
5) WARNING: DO NOT BE FAR AWAY FROM WANG & YEH'S THEORY]]> 2020-08-17 10:33:52 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/682479263 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/717227164 2020-09-03 06:56:45 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/717227164 HaoyangJiao https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/717228201 2020-09-03 06:57:24 UTC https://padlet.com/HaoyangJiao/pbn1foujz3vxq3xt/wish/717228201