7C HW 10/13 by Rachael Stone https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd For homework tonight, please share one paragraph from your story that you are proud of. Additionally, please comment on TWO other students entries with a question or comment. You must complete both directions in order to get credit for this homework. en-us 2021-10-13 15:18:39 UTC 2021-10-14 13:30:38 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/270d.png My Story rstone52 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814342853 Remember to create a sticky note here that will allow you to share one paragraph from your story that you are proud of. Get us excited about your work!]]> 2021-10-13 15:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814342853 Kent Collier draft https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814352917 later I broke up with my girlfriend because she was one day older than me so I started to date her sister and she was younger than me as well she was 15 and I was 16 her name was Staisy. I cloud just feel that me and Staisy well be high school sweethearts, “And two weeks after graduating from college we got married and her older sister Layla still like me but was diprest about be leaving her because she was older than be so to make her more mad I invited her to the party and she came. “But things didn't go as I planned it to go. She came with a bear bottle and trashed the party. Staisy was so upset she slapped Layla and asked her WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS!!! Layla told Staisy why I broke up with her and Staisy did not care less because Layla would spread rumors about her in high school and tried to throw her off a 7 foot height of stairs when she was two years old. Staisy’s parents were not surprised either and my brother Tony was actually proud of me and he was 27. A month after the party me and staisy became officially rich and we went to florida for my 26 birthday and Staisy 25.]]> 2021-10-13 15:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814352917 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814381354  She was born in Cairo,Egypt. She is egyptian and sudanese. She was born in july 6, 2007 and a little town in caro she is the second oldest in her family. She was raised in Egypt for 7 years of her life. She has 1 older brother and two younger sisters. She has never seen her mom or dad side of the family.

]]> 2021-10-13 15:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814381354 Ella Babcock draft https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814384694 “ Come on mom,we are going to be late!” It was finally the day, the day that Lucy finally got to go to Camp Chris! She was so excited to see all of her camp friends, sing songs and most of all meet her counselor. She was really hoping to get Clara as her counselor again this year. After a 45 minute drive they were finally there. When they drove threw the entrance there were people singing and cheering at the gate. After she got her lice check she walked up the hill excited to see who would be in her cabin and who her counselor is. When she reached the top of the ther hill she saw that Clara was her counselor again this year! “ I’m so excited that your my counselor again this year!” said Lucy. She also saw a lot of her friends Bridget, Tessa, Ella, Maddie, and a lot more. But she did see someone new, someone who must be at camp for the first time. Her name was Anna. She looked like a nice  but shy girl. Lucy walked up to her, “ Hi I’m lucy! Is this your first year at camp?” Lucy asked. But Anna Just nodded and looked away. ]]> 2021-10-13 15:42:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814384694 isamano23 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814388650  I woke up and it was normal that my dad and mom were back. I didn't try to explain to them what happened because I don't want them to think I'm crazy. I go down stairs to eat breakfast and eat cereal.i get on the bus and tell Tyler everything but he's not buying it. I get to my first period  normal as always. Second period I felt weird  but I decided not to go to the nurse. I fell limb in the middle of class go back to 1,000,000 and the monkey comes to me and say welcome back you have to beat the game to leave.

]]> 2021-10-13 15:43:24 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814388650 Angel Mann https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814388779 It was finally that day we have been waiting for. I had so many butterflies in my stomach. First everyone arrived at my house because we got a party bus that way we didn't have to wait for people to get there late or anything. Everyone looked very nice and they were all actually on time. Alright Is everyone  ready to get on this bus and have fun?” Yay” They shouted and we started to leave. We got to the mall and we went from store to store trying on dresses and even being silly. I was having so much fun and so was everyone else. I don't know why I didn't talk to them earlier. They are great people, we all got matching jewelry from the jewelry store. We finally left after 3 hrs at the mall. We got back on the bus and headed to( Texas roadhouse.) We all put on our beautiful jewelry and walked in. That's when the worst thing happened!]]> 2021-10-13 15:43:27 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814388779 Mya Schwartz draft mschwartz232 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814389910 You packed your stuff, got on a plane and made it to las vegas to your god parents house to go see them. You all hugged and had a conversation. Afterwards, you all talked about what you have been doing and how you have been doing. You asked how they were doing. You all talked for a while. When the conversation was over your god parents gave you some money to go to the mall. They dropped you off at the mall and they went back to the house. You went shopping for some clothes and things before you went to get shoes.

]]> 2021-10-13 15:43:48 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814389910 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814390908 But one day the baby boy got so sick and they had to go to the doctor. 
The baby had to go to two different hospitals. The baby was super sick. The family that the baby was dying. The whole family was crying thinking the baby was about to die.  Then the baby rested for 21 days, the tv had to be silent, the room had to be silent. Because the baby heard a noise then the baby will get excited or the baby will start freaking out. My mom said the room was so quiet that they can hear the doctors in the other room.

]]> 2021-10-13 15:44:06 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814390908 asanders233 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814568236 As I  got closer to the big , tall glass doors , I started to see my friends . I  hop out of the car and go to run and hug them since it’s been such a long time . I hear my mom yell , “have fun Lerika “, I wave back and keep going .The first store they head into is old navy , they always have some great sales . Meanwhile we'd only been in the mall for about 15 minutes when the lights started to go crazy . As we watched they finally stopped and went off for good  , but thousands of screams started going all over the mall and in old navy . I also heard a man saying something . Soon after , as I stare into the darkness ,  I see a man with a light , he looks only about sixteen . He tells my friends and I to follow him . He leads us to this back room , it seems to me that something really bad was happening . We wait , and wait , and wait , in the darkness and screams . As we wait I hear someone digging for something then a light from a phone pops on .]]> 2021-10-13 16:41:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814568236 acano231 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814943845 It was a windy morning, the sun was coming up, some birds were  chirping, and all you could see was the dry, sandy dirt. As Ashley woke up, she saw a vulture pecking her, as she was yelling at it and trying to get up, she felt pain in her stomach and her head. “Where am I?” she asked herself, “I 
I can't remember anything.” Some minutes have passed and Ashley still 
couldn’t get up. She was thirsty. Her mouth was as dry as the dirt. As she tried to get up, she kept falling and getting back up. And finally she managed to get up. She checked her pockets if there was anything she could use, like some water. As she checked she could only find a compass. “I guess I could use this,” she said to herself. She traveled north by limping. As she kept going she wondered if she could find a village. She walked and walked until she couldn’t. She sat on the ground needing water. It was hot and humid, and the reason why is because it was kind of a desert. Instead of sitting, she layed on the ground. 

]]> 2021-10-13 19:10:13 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1814943845 teenaged romance tbrown2311 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815022663 (Sky chose some black heels and put her hair down )
(Autumn chose her squenced dress with some flats and her hair in a bun)
(few hours after they got ready her parents dropped them of at school where their dates were waiting for them)
Jace: you look beautiful
 Sky: you look handsome as well
Jc: you look great Autumn
Autumn:so do you
Sky: you ready to go in
(all said yeah)  
(they got some punch and sat down)
(Then the boys stood up)
Jace :may i have this dance 
Sky : you may 
(then they ran to the dance floor and danced)
Jc: would you like to dance
Autumn:yeah sure 
(they join them on the dance floor)
(after a few hrs of hyped dance and some talking it was time for the slow dance )
(As jace and sky danced she felt butterflies in her stomach because she was so happy and so did jace)
(The same thing happened to Autumn and jc)
(After the dance was time to go )
Jace: close your eyes 
Sky: ok 
(She closed them)
(and then jace kissed her and her cheeks become rosy and she felt like flying)
Jc: bye(he gave her a kiss)
Autumn:bye (with rosy cheeks)
 Sky: what do you want to exchange numbers guys
Jc,jace: yeah 
(they expanded numbers)
(all  their parents  arrived )
Autumn:maybe we'll see you this summer
Jc,jace:bye 
Autumn, sky: Bye
 
(sky,Autumn,and their mom's help them bring up their gift baskets to their teacher and then left )
(they arrived at home)
(Then autumn came over to skys for a sleep over )
(They talk and then watched a movie and fell asleep)
(zzzzzzzzz)to be continued in book 2

]]> 2021-10-13 19:48:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815022663 I am proud of doing my work https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815051639 2021-10-13 20:03:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815051639 josh's story https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815093763 It was a warm day in June 2014 on the playground at  Estabrook park .  There were lots of slides, swings, and a firepole. I was playing and I saw another boy and he was holding a plastic baseball bat like he was about to hit someone and I was playing on the fire pole “You can’t lie it is fun'' I said to my aunt and  all of a sudden the boy was running towards me  And he hit me  then I fell , dropping from a six foot fire pole there was such an urge of anxiety and pressure i was scared and then  I finally hit the ground that's when I broke my arm. ]]> 2021-10-13 20:27:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815093763 uhh lweppelman23 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815121276 i didnt finish but its good so far lol basically theres two friends and one is a fairy and one is a witch :thumbsup:]]> 2021-10-13 20:43:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815121276 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815256564 the creaking of floor and squeaking of the door opening she could hear soft voice calling out where are you...she could hear the crows calling her name like every other horror movie she went under sheet but..in a weird way it all stopped. Slowly moved the sheets of a face, suddenly the door flung open and she saw what it was. she jumped out of bed she was scared out of her mind.


]]> 2021-10-13 22:17:33 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815256564 aj's story https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815275336 the rest of the group was surprised he wasn't throwing up. And Katy said well i guess its our turn. Mack, Katy, and Wilson went on the ride and they came back and they had a fun time and Zack said I told you it wasn't bad and they said it was great! They all got churros and left ceder point and they all had fun!]]> 2021-10-13 22:32:09 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815275336 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815295650 We have had practice every night for two weeks. Coach has not been late to any practises. But tonight's practise. The captain of the team started practising without her. If we did not start practising without her she would get mad! We went to the whole practise without her even showing up. A whole week passed by and she still did not show up. But at last night's practise there was a substitute coach. She was so nice. She did not yell at all. The substitute couch said that the coach had gotten sick. ]]> 2021-10-13 22:47:56 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815295650 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815358930 Me and the boy who I fought got sent to the principal's office.The principal talked to us about what happened and we told her kind of exactly what happened, she gave us a talk about how we don’t/shouldn’t do that in school,and then she called our parents.She told us not to do that again,and then let us go back to our class when we were in the hallway we talked to each other and said sorry,and we got to know each other then the next day at recess we talked and learned more about each other then we played a game of basketball together.I asked him “what is your favorite sport?” he said “soccer” I said cool he said why I just replied because you are a good kicker.]]> 2021-10-13 23:38:01 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815358930 nya's lil piece of her story jrosado231 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815518809  “HEY hey hey, it's ok don't worry everyone has a crush and you can't control who you like ya know. (*in Payton's head* dang i crossed the line she's upset look at her what can i do oh wait i know..) “hey heyy if it’ll make you feel better i'll put on a bikini and sing in front of everyone” Pfft no you won't “Watch me” he said and he did it made me laugh so long and he sung the song baby by justin bieber I died then and there and we hung out all day and he made me laugh. Just like that, that's how he came into my life and also the beginning of my troubles… It was dark out and i didnt even notice I needed to find Aron bye Payton. Here's my number and I'll talk to my dad. He works at a phone store so maybe I could see what he can do for your phone. I looked for Aron and it took 15 min to find him but i did ARONNN! What's up with you man? Why are you acting like this? It's dark. We should go home and drop you off but I'm worried about you. “Yeah, I'm cool.” He seemed so cold, I said in my head. I'M SERIOUS what's wrong i just don't know what i did…. Are you jel- mwah HE KISSED ME HE KISSED ME REALLY I BLINKED FOR ONE SECOND!?]]> 2021-10-14 01:01:09 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1815518809 part one jcollins238 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1816639234 The life of sage 

There once was a girl named sage.She had lived a normal life.Before she got in 2nd grade.That is were her life got crazy.But before we get there you should know her back ground.Sage was the youngest of her family.Sage’s dad had 5 kids and Sage’s mom had 4 kids.And all together they have 3 kids and one half kid.Sage hase three sisters but only 2 are still here on the earth .Sage has 2 brothers but only one is still here.Even though she has never meat them they are still a big part of her. Even if sage’s dad does not like to talk about d she still loves him.And she still know a lot about them.[there age is d=27 n=22 j=22 jor=19 jay=17 s=12] Sage dose not get to see j a lot because  j lives with her mom and not with sage and her dad. Sage was 8 when her normal life became not so normal.When sage was growing up she had only met her great grandpa on her moms side.Who had sadly passed when sage was 3.Now sage has only one grandpa on her dads side of the family.That she barley see Sage love’s her grandparents on her mom’s side of the family.And on her dad’s side of the family sage has a grand mal and a grandpa. Sage is really close to her mom’s side of her family.But not so close to her dad’s side .To tell the truth sage did not like her dad’s side of the family.that  are so mean to Sag’s mom ........
]]> 2021-10-14 10:35:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1816639234 https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1817003849 Screams came out of the hospital bedroom. Nina and Liv were born in Arizona, they met each other in preschool.]]> 2021-10-14 13:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1817003849 “Noah what was that” she says nervously. “I don't know” I say going closer to the water. “Be careful” she says, letting go of my hand. I look into the water to see if I can see anything and I see a black figure. I look closer and I realize that it is a person. “OLIVIA GO GET A TOWEL NOW" I said trying to get the little boy up. “Why?" she says nervously. “Just Go" I said. I put the little boy on the giant rock that me and Olivia were sitting on. “Oh my god, what the heck” she says staring down on his body. “We have to give him CPR, ok” https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1817045638 2021-10-14 13:30:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rstone52/pa7jt4fb5k8zpcwd/wish/1817045638