Potato 

Swede 

Cabbage 

Turnip 

They go to the house then they go to the living room and tiptoe out (because the ghost can only use these senses: hearing, touch and maybe smell)

Very well done everybody
Especially Ahmed for the first draft.
As you can see Ahmed and the rest of the gang:

I have corrected a few spelling errors
Gave some tips and what to improve on for our next draft
Added some more sentences
Improved on vocab

Again special thanks to Ahmed for most of the ideas are from him and he wrote most of this on paper.

Thank you for reading and we can now move on the story

Roles and responsibilities: 

Oscar: bit of both also contributes with ideas. He can come up with some more ideas and work on what the main climax or problem should be.

Ahmed: finds the ideas and puts them to a rough draft. I check it and edit it a little.He also is partly writing the book. Ahmed is also a quality controller which means he checks drafts and edits them as well. He can write more drafts and we are working on to make the very beginning to the flashback as best as possible.

Ela: he contributes to the writing a tiny bit and gives some idea of our monster with his picture. He can be the main illustrater for the front and back cover. This is because his pictures are large and show detail of oor content. He can edit his drawings and come up with some exellent front and back covers. Ela can also do some inside book drawings.

Sina: he is working on some particular pictures and uses them for the inside of the book. We will roughly have one or two pictures per chapter. Sina can also sharpen up the front covers and work with ela. Sina can help with some ideas. For example, he told Ahmed about the ghost moving really quickly

George: he is mainly illustrating the inside of the book. He works with sina to produce a good detailed picture. If he wants to, he can help me with the ideas and blurb or help ela with the covers.

This took me a long time to write.
Please like the post.
And sorry for spelling mistakes.
Hope everbody comes to the disco
Another congratulations to oscar for winning an emoji with the quiz question.

They go to the house then they go to the living room and tiptoe out (because the ghost can only use these senses: hearing, touch and maybe smell)

Chapter 7
After that, they try and figure it out then there stuck they don't know what it could be.

Chapter 8
Later they find a riddle on the thing he picked up to hit the ghost. (This riddle will help them find out what it says) 

Chapter 9
Oldest person reads out 'I am fast, I am seethrough, people can put their fingers through me' (working on the riddle) (lots of description)

Chapter 10
Middle person says 'I know, its a ghost because a ghost is quick and a ghost is seethrough and you can put your hand through a ghost' 'the answer is ghost'

Chapter 11
Second middle person speaks 'All we need is the matierial that (the middle person) used and make a net out of it.

Chapter 12
Whole gang goes into the house they start making a string connected to a trap and wait for the ghost to strike.

Chapter 13
Youngest person starts dancing about making loud noises next the ghost pounces onto the boy but misses because of the string then the trap goes on the ghost but it went through the ghost.

Chapter 14
Wait! yelled the middle person I still have that metal (working on what it could be)' So he hit the ghost on the head. He shouted 'Run and get another net while I distract him'.

Chapter 15
Then they started fighting. The middle person hit him in the stomach then the ghost hit the boy in the ankle the boy screamed in agany then with all his might and rage the boy hit the ghost on the stomach then the thigh then the ankle then the face. This made the ghost even more frustrated he jumped on the boy then he whispered 'I've waited a long time for this then 'aaarrrrggghhhh' 

Chapter 16 
All of a sudden, 'Whack!' the ghost fell off his feet onto the floor. After that, the middle character was about to kill the ghost but the oldest says 'no' 'once we take him home we can find out why he's doing this'

Chapter 17
(Their home) middle person shouts angrily ' why did you do this!' 'you don't scare me I'll never tell you' middle character says 'oh we'll see about that' (write a description of the monster)

Chapter 18
The middle person and oldest went to a place where in the medieval times people used to put their swords. 'Remind me why are we here exactly' said the oldest boy. 'Because we need a sword which is the same matierial as the net.' replyed the boy 'well then we'll never get a sword' he told him 'ah ha' found one'

Chapter 19
(Back at the house once they've arrived) 'finally we're here' where's the ghost 'he may have escaped and by may I mean definitly' middle boy 'oh my god not again' they search the whole house top to bottom.

Chapter 20
'We haven't checked the bathroom yet'
Very well done everybody
Especially Ahmed for the first draft.
As you can see Ahmed and the rest of the gang:

I have corrected a few spelling errors
Gave some tips and what to improve on for our next draft
Added some more sentences
Improved on vocab

Again special thanks to Ahmed for most of the ideas are from him and he wrote most of this on paper.

Thank you for reading and we can now move on the story

Roles and responsibilities: 

Oscar: bit of both also contributes with ideas. He can come up with some more ideas and work on what the main climax or problem should be.

Ahmed: finds the ideas and puts them to a rough draft. I check it and edit it a little.He also is partly writing the book. Ahmed is also a quality controller which means he checks drafts and edits them as well. He can write more drafts and we are working on to make the very beginning to the flashback as best as possible.

Ela: he contributes to the writing a tiny bit and gives some idea of our monster with his picture. He can be the main illustrater for the front and back cover. This is because his pictures are large and show detail of oor content. He can edit his drawings and come up with some exellent front and back covers. Ela can also do some inside book drawings.

Sina: he is working on some particular pictures and uses them for the inside of the book. We will roughly have one or two pictures per chapter. Sina can also sharpen up the front covers and work with ela. Sina can help with some ideas. For example, he told Ahmed about the ghost moving really quickly

George: he is mainly illustrating the inside of the book. He works with sina to produce a good detailed picture. If he wants to, he can help me with the ideas and blurb or help ela with the covers.

This took me a long time to write.
Please like the post.
And sorry for spelling mistakes.
Hope everbody comes to the disco
Another congratulations to oscar for winning an emoji with the quiz question.

They go to the house then they go to the living room and tiptoe out (because the ghost can only use these senses: hearing, touch and maybe smell)

Chapter 7 (rough) (Ahmed edited)
After that, they try and figure it out then there stuck they don't know what it could be.

Chapter 8 (Ahmed)
Later they find a riddle on the thing he picked up to hit the ghost. (This riddle will help them find out what it says) 

Chapter 9 (Ahmed)
Oldest person reads out 'I am fast, I am seethrough, people can put their fingers through me' (working on the riddle) (lots of description)

Chapter 10 (Ahmed)
Middle person says 'I know, its a ghost because a ghost is quick and a ghost is seethrough and you can put your hand through a ghost' 'the answer is ghost'

Chapter 11 (Ahmed)
Second middle person speaks 'All we need is the matierial that (the middle person) used and make a net out of it.

Chapter 12 (Ahmed)
Whole gang goes into the house they start making a string connected to a trap and wait for the ghost to strike.

Chapter 13 (Ahmed)
Youngest person starts dancing about making loud noises next the ghost pounces onto the boy but misses because of the string then the trap goes on the ghost but it went through the ghost.

Chapter 14 (Ahmed)
Wait! yelled the middle person I still have that metal (working on what it could be)' So he hit the ghost on the head. He shouted 'Run and get another net while I distract him'.

Chapter 15 (Ahmed)
Then they started fighting. The middle person hit him in the stomach then the ghost hit the boy in the ankle the boy screamed in agany then with all his might and rage the boy hit the ghost on the stomach then the thigh then the ankle then the face. This made the ghost even more frustrated he jumped on the boy then he whispered 'I've waited a long time for this then 'aaarrrrggghhhh' 

Chapter 16 (Ahmed)
All of a sudden, 'Whack!' the ghost fell off his feet onto the floor. After that, the middle character was about to kill the ghost but the oldest says 'no' 'once we take him home we can find out why he's doing this'

Chapter 17 (Ahmed)
(Their home) middle person shouts angrily ' why did you do this!' 'you don't scare me I'll never tell you' middle character says 'oh we'll see about that' (write a description of the monster)

Chapter 18 (Ahmed)
The middle person and oldest went to a place where in the medieval times people used to put their swords. 'Remind me why are we here exactly' said the oldest boy. 'Because we need a sword which is the same matierial as the net.' replyed the boy 'well then we'll never get a sword' he told him 'ah ha' found one'

Chapter 19 (Ahmed)
(Back at the house once they've arrived) 'finally we're here' where's the ghost 'he may have escaped and by may I mean definitly' middle boy 'oh my god not again' they search the whole house top to bottom.

Chapter 20 (Ahmed)
'We haven't checked the bathroom yet' 'well let's check then' they opened the door carefully' they saw the monster! (Try and add more detail)

Chapter 21 (Ahmed)
'Tell us why you killed our mother!' Shouted the boy 'why?!' 'I'll never tell you' 'then we'll do it the hard way'.'He took out the sword 'now will you  tell us why did it' 'aaaarrrrrrgggghhhh!' 'I'll tell you! Its because  
(Main ghost's name) forced me to. Otherwise he would kill me like he did to all the others that didn't follow him' '(the main ghost's name)' (they all look at each other) (middle character)'Well we'll have to get ready. (might work on ending)

Very well done everybody
Especially Ahmed for the first draft.
As you can see Ahmed and the rest of the gang:

I have corrected a few spelling errors
Gave some tips and what to improve on for our next draft
Added some more sentences
Improved on vocab

Again special thanks to Ahmed for most of the ideas are from him and he wrote most of this on paper.

Thank you for reading and we can now move on the story

Roles and responsibilities: 

Oscar: bit of both also contributes with ideas. He can come up with some more ideas and work on what the main climax or problem should be.

Ahmed: finds the ideas and puts them to a rough draft. I check it and edit it a little.He also is partly writing the book. Ahmed is also a quality controller which means he checks drafts and edits them as well. He can write more drafts and we are working on to make the very beginning to the flashback as best as possible.

Ela: he contributes to the writing a tiny bit and gives some idea of our monster with his picture. He can be the main illustrater for the front and back cover. This is because his pictures are large and show detail of oor content. He can edit his drawings and come up with some exellent front and back covers. Ela can also do some inside book drawings.

Sina: he is working on some particular pictures and uses them for the inside of the book. We will roughly have one or two pictures per chapter. Sina can also sharpen up the front covers and work with ela. Sina can help with some ideas. For example, he told Ahmed about the ghost moving really quickly

George: he is mainly illustrating the inside of the book. He works with sina to produce a good detailed picture. If he wants to, he can help me with the ideas and blurb or help ela with the covers.

This took me a long time to write.
Please like the post.
And sorry for spelling mistakes.
Hope everbody comes to the disco
Another congratulations to oscar for winning an emoji with the quiz question.