CSQ Critique Group 3 by William Ford https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04 Claim / Support / Question Critique technique. en-us 2020-10-19 19:41:48 UTC 2026-01-04 08:39:22 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3c8.png Student Artwork 3 wford32 https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/842620419 What is your claim about this artwork? ]]> 2020-10-19 19:45:51 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/842620419 Student Artwork 3 wford32 https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/842621968 What sort of support can you provide for your claim about this artwork? ]]> 2020-10-19 19:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/842621968 Student Artwork 3 wford32 https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/842622449 What is your question for this artwork? ]]> 2020-10-19 19:46:36 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/842622449 The hair isn't very realistic. https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/845620928 2020-10-20 16:30:27 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/845620928 The hair is just lines going down and there is no pattern. https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/845623376 2020-10-20 16:30:57 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/845623376 Why did you draw the face so good but not the hair. https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/845625741 2020-10-20 16:31:26 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/845625741 kareem https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/845940513 i feel like should could make it more detailed because her drawing looks under developed]]> 2020-10-20 17:35:02 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/845940513 kareem https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/845952371 it looks like she didnt really take her time.]]> 2020-10-20 17:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/845952371 Kendra https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853242901 I feel like she should add more detail because it looks a little under detailed.]]> 2020-10-22 16:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853242901 The face isn't evenly proportioned which makes it look less realistic https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853246878 2020-10-22 16:34:42 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853246878 emily e https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853248346 the face isnt even.]]> 2020-10-22 16:35:01 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853248346 It looks like they didn't take much time with the shading and sketching https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853250506 2020-10-22 16:35:30 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853250506 emily e https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853251837 the eyes are also un even the right eye is slightly up.]]> 2020-10-22 16:35:47 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853251837 https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853252615 I think they should add a little more detail to the hair to make it more realistic]]> 2020-10-22 16:35:56 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853252615 I think the art work would look better if there was more detail on the face https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853252877 2020-10-22 16:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853252877 Kendra https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853252972 I feel like she should try to take her time because it looks a little rushed and if you take your time you can add more detail to your artwork.]]> 2020-10-22 16:36:00 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853252972 How much time did you take on this? https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853253025 2020-10-22 16:36:01 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853253025 Kendra https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853257931 Why does this look rushed? Did you take your time on this?]]> 2020-10-22 16:37:03 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853257931 The hair needs some more detail and the eyes would look better if they were even https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853259692 2020-10-22 16:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853259692 emily e https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853261143 they should definitely should add more detail to the face.]]> 2020-10-22 16:37:43 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853261143 how much time did this art work take to make https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853266516 2020-10-22 16:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853266516 No Neck https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853531909 in this artwork I Think they should try to add the neck
-Nathan Lewis]]> 2020-10-22 17:34:37 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853531909 they should fix the hair https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853535560 2020-10-22 17:35:29 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853535560 The hair looks fake and werid https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853537380 2020-10-22 17:35:52 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853537380 nathan lewis https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853539946 there is no lines that show a neck, its only the head,hair,eyes,eyebrows,and mouth and nose]]> 2020-10-22 17:36:27 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853539946 why was this made? https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853539966 2020-10-22 17:36:27 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853539966 nathan lewis https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853546807 Honestly i'm wondering if this person had enough time or not to draw the neck.]]> 2020-10-22 17:37:56 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/853546807 https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855987144 The artwork was clearly a self portrait based on the drawing!

]]> 2020-10-23 14:35:52 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855987144 https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855992683 I think she should go back and redo her hair and eyes!

]]> 2020-10-23 14:37:23 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855992683 https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855994152 Her hair and eyes look different and not very realistic! Her hair looks almost as if it is a wig and her eyes are two different shapes]]> 2020-10-23 14:37:46 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855994152 https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855996965 How long did she take to work on her artwork?]]> 2020-10-23 14:38:30 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855996965 presley fix the cheeks and try to add a body to the end https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855998921 2020-10-23 14:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855998921 her shade isint very good https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855999969 2020-10-23 14:39:16 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/855999969 the shade isnt good https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856723335 2020-10-23 17:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856723335 it kinda looks like a man but i think it is a girl https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856724434 2020-10-23 17:34:27 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856724434 john there is no color https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856724854 2020-10-23 17:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856724854 Logan https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856724950 The artist could have put more time and effort into this piece.]]> 2020-10-23 17:34:35 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856724950 itr kinda looks like it has a beard but it has long hair but boys have long hair sometimes https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856729007 2020-10-23 17:35:39 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856729007 Logan https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856730076 I believe this because the shading isnt that techniqual, and the hair could have been better. The face could have been more semetrical.]]> 2020-10-23 17:35:57 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856730076 how long did this take https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856732380 2020-10-23 17:36:33 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856732380 Logan https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856733607 Why did you rush it could have been better if you didnt. :((]]> 2020-10-23 17:36:51 UTC https://padlet.com/wford32/p7lq41lxht3izl04/wish/856733607