ELA Writing Choice Board Due Mon, 4/7 by Sara Suh

Step 3. Write an essay to convince your teacher which activity is better!

ssuh7 — 2025-03-23 23:08:03 UTC

Step 1: Read the first passage

ssuh7 — 2025-03-23 23:08:24 UTC

Step 2: Read the second passage

ssuh7 — 2025-03-23 23:08:56 UTC

I would rather go on the bayou tour I like aligators

2025-03-24 20:43:15 UTC

Plus they might be big back aligators

My opinion

2025-03-24 22:37:51 UTC

I would go to bayou tour because the alligator tour sounds more fun than the hot sauce tour also hot sauce is spicy.

i would pick bayou tour. Why i would pick the bayou tour paragraph #1

ndanvers1 — 2025-03-26 19:40:24 UTC

i would go to the bayou tour because before during summer break last year i went to a swamp tour and it had alligators and i was able to see racoons and there way cuter and more friendly then the ones in New York. so i think its gonna be a fun experience doing the bayou tour. :)

it was in new Orleans btw!

I think bayou tours are better

2025-03-26 20:47:32 UTC

I think that because it would be very cool to see some alligators. Also, because going on the water is fun to play. (it's also creepy if i say so myself)

I choose bayou tour and my reasoning paragraph #2

ndanvers1 — 2025-03-27 00:31:53 UTC

When you go to tours with alligators you sometimes mostly think in your head "what if the boat sinks? #hat will the alligators do? Will i make it out alive?!" i did to, but when i was on it the alligators were calm the did what the did, the boat didn't sink, and i made it out alive! (if i didn't then i wouldn't be at school) And to be honest it was fun! so if i went to the Bayou tour it would be kind of the same. im doing paragraph 3 tomorrow :D

BAYOU TOUR

2025-03-27 18:44:23 UTC

The bayou tour would be better because not everyone likes tobacco sauce and if they don,t like alligators they can also see the turtles and maybe a new animal that nobody has seen.

One detail is in Bayou tour it said "these amazing creatures of the bayou.".but in the other one there are no animals.

I choose bayou tour and why i pick it paragraph #3

ndanvers1 — 2025-03-27 18:52:54 UTC

I like alligators and they might be scary but then you go to a tour with alligators you realize that they just swim around and be bleh but they don't hurt you. So going to a tour with alligators is pretty cool to experience and I'm sure that going to the bayou tour can be kind of like the swamp your i went to in new Orleans.

I don't know if i went to the bayou tour :P

avrey island

2025-03-31 14:39:22 UTC

Because in the story it said hot Sauce was made there. Also, I would like to see jungle garden

(the photo is ai)

kyrrarobinson — 2025-04-01 20:26:02 UTC

I choose bayou with the crocodiles.

2025-04-02 20:23:41 UTC

I choose bayou to fight the alligators and swim with it.

cnairn4 — 2025-04-03 22:34:27 UTC

I would pick bayou tour

2025-04-06 23:45:03 UTC

I think the bayou tour is better because you can see a lot of alligators and it would be fun. I picked it because in the text it says" To see the alligators up close." The reason I picked bayou tour is because when I read it, it sounded like fun. And I also picked it because I do not like hot sauce.

Bayou tour 🙂

2025-04-07 00:37:46 UTC

I’d rather do the bayou tour because I’ve done the same thing where you climb aboard a flat bottomed boat and travel through some swamps and see alligators in Florida and I want to experience that again. Also I don’t like Tabasco sauce and one of the kids on the review said the tour was long and I REALLY don’t like long tours.

I know that they made tobacco because in “Avery Island Tour” passage it said “Avery Island, located near the golf course of Louisiana, is where this hot sauce (Tabasco sauce) was made.” Also I know on of the kids said the tour was long because in the text it said “ “the factory tour was a little long though”-Louis 9 years old”. those are the reasons I do not want to go to the Avery Island tour.

I know they climb aboard a flat bottomed boat and travel through swamps to see alligators Like I did in Florida because in the text bayou tour it said “ You climb aboard a flat bottomed tour boat and travel through some of the wildest most beautiful swamps, marshes, and bayous in America.” That is why I want to go on the bayou tour instead of the Avery island tour. Also, I forgot to say that on the tour you might be scared at first but after a little while it’s really fun and the alligators are really relaxed and don’t bother to try and hurt you.

Athena B: Avery Island

dhhzz7dhb6 — 2025-04-07 12:28:47 UTC