https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze Good-bye 'people' and 'I' en-us 2019-09-26 20:49:27 UTC 2019-09-27 00:07:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390328794 So I think Australia shouldn't significantly increase its population nowadays and I have two strong arguments.

This essay will argue that Australia should not significantly increase its current population. It will examine the   .... and  ....]]> 2019-09-26 23:24:35 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390328794 emory1388 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390328823 Original sentence: Furthermore, if more people live in the city where close to the coast, it's more likely to cause over-crowded and water pollution

NEW: With the influx of residents f into the city which is located in the coastal areas, the likelihood of causing over-crowding and water pollution may increase because the sewage may directly flow into the ocean.]]> 2019-09-26 23:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390328823 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390328908 In other words,these people have more competiveness than local people, so that the immigration may replace the local's job because they are more powerful with high efficiency.

In addition,for immigrants, there is a considerable  range of efficiencies as they might have better work skills. It may leadr to the loss of job opportunities for former residents.]]> 2019-09-26 23:25:15 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390328908 olofchris0321 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329323 In other words, these people have more competitiveness than local people, so that the immigration may replace the local's job because they are more powerful with higher efficiency.

In other word, those with better overall competitiveness than local citizens may cause increasing threat to the local employees. 

]]> 2019-09-26 23:27:53 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329323 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329459 So it would cause many problems like over-crowded traffic jam and lack of water.

Therefore,  it could lead to many problems such as over-crowding, traffic jams and the lack of water.

 ]]> 2019-09-26 23:28:43 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329459 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329509 Original sentence: The result of high unemployeement rate may be dangerous and destructive for a developed country which means the government have to pay more assistance payment for these unemployeement people.

Change sentence:  The result of a high unemployment rate may be dangerous and destructive for a developed country,  which means the government has to offer more assistance payment to the unemployed.          ]]> 2019-09-26 23:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329509 arwenyang1106 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329512 In summary, I disagree that Australia should significantly increase current  population.

In conclusion, the current population in Australia should not be encouraged to climb dramatically.

]]> 2019-09-26 23:29:02 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329512 unswelaine2019 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329513 Chris Yin& Elaine Gao

So I think, Australia shouldn't significantly increase its population and I have two strong arguments.

This essay will argue that Australia should not significantly increase its population. It will focus on the environmental concerns and economic impacts. ]]> 2019-09-26 23:29:02 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329513 jasonzhao1912 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329555 1,The result of high unemployment may be dangerous and destructive for a developed country, which means the government have to pay more assistance payment for these unemployment people.

2, As a result, the  increasing unemployment rate might have detrimental impacts on the financial balance of the government.]]> 2019-09-26 23:29:18 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390329555 zhengbyau https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390333645 2019-09-26 23:51:39 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/p65449miqxze/wish/390333645