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      <title>Beta lesson 9 Wed by Lau Ling</title>
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      <pubDate>2025-03-12 11:59:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zhen Hong corrected</title>
         <author>nickylim22</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon.</p><p><br/></p><p>  On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. The stayed there in Pangkor Island. They visited the fishing village and enjoyed the golden sunsets.</p><p><br/></p><p>  They had a wonderful holiday.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt <strong>over the moon</strong>.</p><p>       On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut.<strong>From Lumut, they took a ferry to the destination. They stayed on Pangkor Island for three days and thwo nights. </strong>They visited the fishing village and enjoyed the golden sunsets.</p><p><strong>       Every moment was filled with laughter and joy, and they truly had a wonderful holiday that created memories they would cherish forever.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Misha corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>            Last month, Sofia’s father received a bonus from his company.Her father plan to take her family for a holiday to Pangkor Island.Sofia and her brother felt over the moon about the bonus.</p><p>             On the long awaited day,they boarded a bus to Lumut .Then. They took a ferry to Pangkor Island.</p><p>                They stayed there for a week.After that,they visited the fishing village and enjoyed watching the sunset.Lastly,they had a whale of time in the holiday.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Last month, Sofia’s father received a bonus from his company. Her father<strong> planned</strong> to take his family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon about the bonus.</p><p>         On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island.</p><p>They stayed there for a week. After that, they visited the fishing village and enjoyed watching the sunset. </p><p>    <strong> Sofia and her family  truly had a wonderful holiday that created memories they would cherish forever.</strong></p><p><br></p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Joe Mun corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  Last month, Sofia’s father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take her family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon about the bonus.</p><p>  On the long awaited day, the boarded a bus to Lumut. The stayed there in Pangkor Island. They visited the fishing village and enjoyed the golden sunsets. </p><p>  They had a whale of a time. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Last month, Sofia’s father received a bonus from his company. Her father planned to take his family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon about the <strong>upcoming trip.</strong></p><p>    On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island.</p><p>They stayed there for a week. After that, they visited the fishing village and enjoyed watching the sunset.<strong> Overall</strong>,  <strong>they had an unforgettable time filled with joy and laughter.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-12 13:23:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tan Powell corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p>  Last month, Sofia's father received a bonus from his company. He planned to take his family to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother in high spirit about the travel. </p><p><br/></p><p>  On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there three day two night. They visited fishing village and enjoyed the sunrise. </p><p><br/></p><p>  They had a wonderful holiday.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Last month, Sofia's father received a bonus from his company. He planned to take his family to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother <strong>were in high spirits about the trip</strong>.</p><p>     On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for three days and two nights. They visited a fishing village and enjoyed <strong>the breathtaking s</strong>unrise.</p><p>        They had a wonderful holiday <strong>filled with joy and unforgettable memories.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-12 13:25:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Chia Zhen Yu corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>One ordinary day, Sofia's father received a bonus, so he planned to took Sofia and all the family members went to the Pangkar Island last week. Sofia felt happy and exciting for the tripped. When they went to Lumut, they board a bus. After that, they also sail a boat to there. They visited the village and enjoyed the golden sunsets. they also had a wonderful holiday.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       One ordinary day, Sofia's father received a bonus, so he planned to take Sofia and the whole family to Pangkor Island last week. Sofia<strong> felt happy and excited about the trip.</strong>  When they<strong> arrived in</strong> Lumut, they boarded a bus. After that, they <strong>sailed a boat to the island.</strong> They visited the village and enjoyed the stunning sunsets. T<strong>hey stayed on Pangkor Island for three days and two nights.</strong></p><p>   <strong>They truly had a wonderful holiday filled with joy and cherished moments.</strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Esther corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planed to changed the placed to be Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon.</p><p>     On the long awaited day, they boarded a bus to go to Pangkor Island. Then, they took a ferry to go Pangkor Island. </p><p>      They stayed there three day two night. They visited a lot of village and enjoyed the golden sunsets.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>    Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He <strong>planned</strong> to bring <strong>the whole family to </strong>Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon.</p><p>   On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to travel to Pangkor Island. After that, they took a ferry to reach the island.They stayed there for three days and two nights. <strong>During their visit, they explored several charming villages </strong>and enjoyed the breathtaking golden sunsets each evening.</p><p><strong>       They created lasting memories that would be cherished for years to come.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-12 13:30:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>yihan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>        Last month,Sofia's father recieved a well-deservedbonus from his company. He planned to go to Pangkor Island. Sofia and his brother felt over the moon about the well-deserved bonus.                                                       On the long awaited day,they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for 5 days 4 nights. They visted the fishing village and enjoyed the golden sunset.                                  They had a wonderful holiday.</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned a trip to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon <strong>about the exciting news.</strong></p><p>   On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. After that, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for five days and four nights, <strong>enjoying every moment together as a family.</strong></p><p>    <strong>During their stay, they visited</strong> the quaint fishing village, <strong>where they learned about the local culture and admired the colorful boats</strong>. <strong>They also enjoyed breathtaking golden sunsets that painted the sky.</strong></p><p>    They had a wonderful holiday <strong>filled with laughter, adventure.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-12 13:31:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Giselle Cham corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   Last month Sofia's father receive well-deserved bonus from his company. He plan to go Pangkor island, Sofia and her brother felt over the moon. On the long a walted day, they boarded day, they boarded a bus. Then they took a ferry to Pangkor island. They visit fishing village, they stay there three days. </p><p>   Sofia and her family had a wonderful  holidays.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned a trip to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon <strong>about the trip. </strong></p><p>     On the long-awaited day, they b<strong>oarded a bus to begin their journey.</strong> Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They visited a charming fishing village and stayed there for three days, <strong>enjoying every moment together.</strong></p><p>     Sofia and her family had a wonderful holiday <strong>filled with laughter, adventure, and beautiful memories that they would cherish forever.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Lam Hoi Ling corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>       Last month, Sofia's father received a well deserved bonus from his company. He planned to bring his family to Pangkor Island for a holiday. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon about the bonus.</p><p><br/></p><p>         On the long awaited day, they boarded the bus to lumut in the morning. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for 3 days. They also visited the fishing village and enjoyed the golden sunsets.</p><p><br/></p><p>            They had a whale of a time that day.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family to Pangkor Island for a holiday, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon <strong>about the wonderful news.</strong></p><p>        On the long-awaited day, they boarded the bus to Lumut in the morning. After that, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for three day. <strong>They also </strong>visited <strong>the charming</strong> fishing village and enjoyed the <strong>breathtaking golden sunsets each evening.</strong></p><p>    They had a whale of a time during their holiday, <strong>creating unforgettable memories that they would cherish for years to come.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Kua Weng Yik corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon.</p><p><br/></p><p>  On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. The stayed there in Pangkor Island. They visited the fishing village and enjoyed the golden sunsets.</p><p><br/></p><p>  They had a wonderful holiday and had a whale of a time creating memories they would  cherish forever.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family on a holiday to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon.</p><p>        On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. They stayed on Pangkor Island, <strong>where they visited the charming fishing village and enjoyed the breathtaking golden sunsets.</strong></p><p>    They had a wonderful holiday<strong> that created</strong> memories that they would cherish forever.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Rou Xuan corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to treat his family to a holiday at Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon about the bonus.</p><p>   On the long awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island from Lumut. They stayed there for three days and two nights. The family visited the fishing village and enjoyed the golden sunsets.</p><p>   They had a creating memories they would cherish forever.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to treat his family to a holiday at Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon <strong>about the exciting news.</strong></p><p>On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. <strong>After arriving in Lumut, </strong>they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for three days and tw o nights. The family visited the fishing village and enjoyed the beautiful golden sunsets.</p><p>     They<strong> created </strong>memories they would cherish forever, <strong>making this holiday a truly special experience.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Yan Ann corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family to Pangkor Island. Sofia and his brother felt over the moon. </p><p>  On the long awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there two days. They visited fishing village and golden sunset. </p><p>  They have a wonderful holiday. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon <strong>about the upcoming trip.</strong></p><p>      On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. <strong>After arriving in Lumut,</strong> they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for two days.<strong> During the trip, they</strong> visited a charming fishing village and enjoyed the <strong>stunning golden</strong> sunsets.</p><p>      They had a wonderful holiday <strong>filled with joy and delightful memories.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-12 13:45:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tai Yoong Bing Writing Star</title>
         <author>suszegoh</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     Last month, Sofia's father received a well-earned bonus from his company. Her father plans to take his family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt like they were on cloud nine.</p><p>      On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry for the long trip to Pankor Island.</p><p>      They stayed there for a week. After that, they visited the fishing village, which was just a stone's throw away. There they feasted their eyes upon the magical golden sunset. Lastly, they had a whale of a time in the holidays.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        Last month, Sofia's father received a well-earned bonus from his company. He planned to take his family on a holiday to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother felt like they were on cloud nine.</p><p>    On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry <strong>for the scenic journey to Pangkor Island.</strong>They stayed there for a week, enjoying every moment. After that, they visited the fishing village, which was just a stone's throw away. <strong>There, they feasted their eyes upon the magical golden sunset.</strong> Lastly, they had a whale of a time during their holiday, <strong>creating memories they would cherish forever.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Khor Jia Xian corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    Last month,Sata's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company.He planed to take his family for a holiday to Pongkor Island.Sofia and her brother felt in high sprit about go to Pangkor Island.                 On the long awaited day,they boarded a bus to Lumut.The stayed three days two nights.They visited the fishing village and ejoyed the golden sunsets.                                    They had a wonderful holiday.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>         Last month, Sata's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family on a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sata and her brother were in high spirits <strong>about going to Pangkor Island.</strong></p><p>    On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. They stayed there for three days and two nights. <strong>During their visit, </strong>they <strong>explored </strong>the fishing village and <strong>enjoyed</strong> the beautiful golden sunsets. They had a wonderful holiday <strong>filled with joy and unforgettable memories.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Jessmin corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>       Last month, Sofia's father received a bonus from his company. Her father planned to take his family for a short holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the mood.</p><p>       On the long awaited day, Sofia and her family boarded a bus to Lumut. After that, they took a boat to the Pangkor Island. </p><p>       They stayed at Pangkor Island a week. They visited the Fishing Village and enjoyed the sunset. It's was a fantastic and memorable holiday. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      Last month, Sofia's father received a bonus from his company. He planned to take his family on a short holiday to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother<strong> felt over the moon with excitement.</strong></p><p>     On the long-awaited day, Sofia and her family boarded a bus to Lumut. After that, they took a boat to Pangkor Island.</p><p>They stayed on Pangkor Island for a week,<strong> exploring its beauty</strong>. They visited the fishing village and <strong>enjoyed the stunning sunsets.</strong> It was a fantastic and memorable holiday <strong>filled with joyful moments.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Law Qin Er corrected </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to his family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon about their first outing together.</p><p>   On the long awaited day, they boarded a bus to Pangkor Island. Then, they took a ferry to Lumut. They stayed there four night, five days. They visited fishing village and enjoyed fishing. </p><p>   They had a wonderful holiday creating memories they would cherish forever.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family on a holiday to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon <strong>about their first outing together</strong>.</p><p>     On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. After that, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for five days and four nights, <strong>immersing themselves in the island's charm</strong>. They visited a fishing village and enjoyed fishing together.</p><p>         They had a wonderful holiday, creating memories they would cherish forever.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Liew Jia Yu corrected </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to bring her family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon.</p><p><br/></p><p>   On the long awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there five days four night. They visited fishing village and enjoyed the sunset.</p><p><br/></p><p>   They had a whale of a time, creating memories they would cherish forever.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family on a holiday to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon.</p><p>        On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut and then took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for five days and four nights, <strong>immersing themselves in the island's beauty.</strong> They visited the<strong> charming</strong> fishing village and enjoyed<strong> the breathtaking</strong> sunsets.</p><p>       They had a whale of a time, creating memories that they would cherish forever.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Kayson Lau Rui Xuan  corrected                                            </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deseved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia  and her brother felt over in high spirits about their first outing together.                                                              </p><p>    On the long awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then they took a ferry to Pangkor Island from Lumut. They stayed there for three days two night. They visited fishing village and enjoyed golden sunsets.          </p><p>     They  creating memories they would cherish forever.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>  Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family on a holiday to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother<strong> felt </strong>over the moon  about their first outing together.</p><p>      On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. From Lumut, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for three days and two nights. <strong>They visited </strong>the fishing village and <strong>enjoyed</strong> the beautiful golden sunsets.</p><p>    <strong> It was indeed a wonderful trip for Sofia and her family,</strong>creating memories they would cherish forever.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Tan Yun Xuan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>                Last month, Sofia's father received a well deserved bonus from his company. He planned to go to Pangkor Island with his family. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon. On the long awaited day, they boarded a bus. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there seven days six nights in Pangkor Island. They visit the fishing village and enjoy the golden sunset. They had a wonderful holiday in Pangkor Island. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to go to Pangkor Island with his family, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon .</p><p>     On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus and then took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for seven days and six nights, <strong>fully immersing themselves in the island's beauty. </strong>They visited the fishing village and enjoyed the <strong>breathtaking golden s</strong>unsets.</p><p>    They had a wonderful holiday in Pangkor Island, <strong>creating memories that would last a lifetime.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Malcolm corrected</title>
         <author>malcolmchenz</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/p6138ls2m2fdagu/wish/3367100634</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>                 Last mouth, Sofia's father received a well-deseved bonus from his company. He planned to bring her family for a holiday to Panglor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon.</p><p><br/></p><p>                  On the long awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there five days and four night. They visited fishing village and enjoyed the sunset.</p><p><br/></p><p>                     They had a whale of a time, creating memories they would cherissh forever.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>          Last <strong>month</strong>, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family on a holiday to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon.</p><p>        On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for five days and four nights. They <strong>explored</strong> the fishing village and <strong>enjoyed</strong> the beautiful sunsets.</p><p>       They had a whale of a time, creating memories they would cherish forever.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Melissa corrected</title>
         <author>mmelissachenlr</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/p6138ls2m2fdagu/wish/3367102221</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>    Last month, Sofia's father received a bonus from his companny, and he decided to treat the family to a holiday at Pangkor Island . Sofia and her brother felt over to the moon.</p><p><br/></p><p>      On the long awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for five days four night. They visited fishing village, Sofia and Adam enjoyed the sunset.</p><p><br/></p><p>       They had a whale of a time, creating memories they would cherish forever.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      Last month, Sofia's father received a bonus from his company, and he decided to treat the family to a holiday at Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon.</p><p>      On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for five days and four nights. <strong>During the trip,</strong>  they visited the fishing village, <strong>where Sofia and her family enjoyed the beautiful sunsets.</strong></p><p>        They had a whale of a time, creating memories they would cherish forever.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Aden Lai Jun Di corrected</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/p6138ls2m2fdagu/wish/3367228910</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>    Last month, Sofia's father received a well- deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family for a to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother felt over the moon about the bonus                                                                                   On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island from Lumut. They stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights. They visited the fishing village and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.                                        They had creating memories they would cherish forever.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. He planned to take his family on a holiday to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother felt over the moon <strong>about the exciting news.</strong></p><p>On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. From Lumut, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for three days and two nights, <strong>immersing themselves in the island's beauty. </strong>They visited the fishing village and enjoyed <strong>the stunning scenery.</strong></p><p><strong> It was indeed an unforgettable trip.</strong>They created memories they would cherish forever.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Loh Kah Him Writing Star</title>
         <author>twfun514</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  Last month, Sofia's father receive a </p><p>well-deserve bonus from his company. Therefore, he planned to take his family for a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother were in high spirits about the trip.</p><p><br/></p><p>   On the long awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. Then, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for three days two nights. They visited fishing village and enjoyed the golden sunsets. Besides, they enjoyed a lot of scrumptious food. They also took a lot of stunning photos as mementos.</p><p>    </p><p>  They had a whale of a time there.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       Last month, Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus from his company. Therefore, he planned to take his family on a holiday to Pangkor Island. Sofia and her brother were in high spirits about the trip.</p><p>         On the long-awaited day, they boarded a bus to Lumut. After that, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island. They stayed there for three days and two nights,<strong> immersing themselves in the beauty of the island. </strong>They visited a charming fishing village and enjoyed the breathtaking golden sunsets. Besides that, they also enjoyed scrumptious food<strong> from local eateries. </strong>They also captured many stunning photos as mementos <strong>of their adventure.</strong></p><p>They had a whale of a time there<strong>, making memories that would last a lifetime.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Giselle Leong corrected</title>
         <author>giselleleongjs0809</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   Sofia's father received a well deserved bonus last month.He planned to take his family for a holiday to Pangkor Island.Sophia and her brother was over the moon.They boarded a bus to Lumut.They used a bus to got to Lumut.They stayed in Pangkor Island for 4 days.They visited the fishing village to fish.Sofia and her father had a wonderful holiday in Pangkor Island and Lumut.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       Sofia's father received a well-deserved bonus last month. He planned to take his family on a holiday to Pangkor Island, and Sofia and her brother were over the moon.</p><p>      They boarded a bus to Lumut and traveled there comfortably. Upon arriving in Lumut, they took a ferry to Pangkor Island, <strong>where they stayed for four days. During their time on the island,</strong> they visited a <strong>charming </strong>fishing village where they enjoyed fishing together.</p><p>      Sofia and her father had a wonderful holiday <strong>spent exploring Pangkor Island and Lumut, creating lasting memories they would cherish forever.</strong></p>]]></description>
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