Feedback on the Lion and the Mouse: Y4 by Miss E Jones https://padlet.com/e_jones2/p5r6ye4w3oxj Here I would like you to write down one thing you and your partner liked about another pairs work and something they could do to improve it. Lay your comments out like I have done as an example. Good luck! en-us 2015-05-29 18:10:12 UTC 2026-01-15 18:55:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.storage.googleapis.com/portrait/sticky.jpg Claire and Colin's story e_jones2 https://padlet.com/e_jones2/p5r6ye4w3oxj/wish/61999915 We liked how you tried to use new words for said

In order to get better we think you could have written more description to show how scared the mouse is!

Barry and Sid

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