How does culture shock impact academic performance and social integration of International students in the UK?

P1:make all the statement ,giving the background and information support the topics.Stockel & Hevia (2022)

P2:why we agree with reasons,uses citation and references.Stanley (2021)

P3：discuss negative impacts on retirement ageDillner (2016)

Con:emphsizes positions and summary.

1st paragraph: why the government may want to increase the retirement age

aging population, experience

2nd paragraph:

Agreeing part

Stanley(2021) Economic challenges

3rd paragraph

Disagreeing part

Dillner (2016) Brain damage, age discrimination and unconscious bias remain widespread problems

Unable to find work.

Conclusion

Summary of the paragraphs and reason why we disagree.

• Introduce the issue of increasing the retirement age

• Highlighting factors (e.g. aging populations and increasing life expectancies) : Stanley (2021)

• Provide a brief overview of both sides of the argument (agree and disagree).

• Thesis statement: While increasing the retirement age may offer economic benefits, it is not the right approach as it disregards the physical and mental well-being of older workers

Body 1 : Agree

• Economic Sustainability (Stanley, 2021)

• Addressing Labor Shortages (Stanley, 2021)

• Financial Security for Individuals (Stanley, 2021)

• Health and Well-being Benefits (Stockel & Hevia, 2022):

Body 2: Disagree：Point：

• There are still some people who do not agree to raise the retirement age

• Reason：There is significant evidence that working long hours after the age of 40 can damage the brain （Dillner，2016）

• Older workers may be unable to find work while also losing access to a pension.（Dillner，2016）

Conclusion:

Restate position, summarize

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